讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能指導(dǎo)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能指導(dǎo)4

—融情于景Emotion+Environment細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)Myeyeswerewideopen.Myfaceturnedpale.Mylegsweretrembling.Myheartwasbeatingwildly.Mytearswerewellingup.Myheart

Myface

Myeyes

Mylegs

eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Mytears

細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Shewashappy.1.____________shone/glittered/sparkledwithjoy.2

____________litupwithpleasure.3.___________

waspoundingwithexcitement.

Her

eyesHerfaceHerheartShewasexcited.1.Hewassoexcitedthathecouldhardly_______.2

Theman______forjoywhenhewonthefirstprize.3.___________

glitteredwithexcitement.

speak

jumpedHer

eyes生動(dòng)動(dòng)詞Afeelingoffearslowly__________onme.Afloodofterror__________________me.Asenseoffright_____________________me.

...蔓延表示某種情感侵襲/涌入Iwasscared.overtook/overwhelmedwashedover/floodedovercreptupAwaveofhorror________insideme.welledupShewasangry.

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其他表達(dá)）

Angerfloodedhisveins.Hertempersparked.Ragenearlyconsumedher.Thewindwas__________dreadfullyandtherainwas_________fromtheheaven,__________againstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwas______________withaseaofdarkness.emotionhowlingpouringwhippingburdened/loadedspecificTranslation1.他正要反應(yīng)，突然感覺(jué)自己舌頭打結(jié)，手心出汗。2.她悲傷而疲憊，癱倒在扶手椅上。3.漆黑的雨夜，風(fēng)雨交加，電閃雷鳴，我全然被這種力量鎮(zhèn)住了。。Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintherpower.Sadandexhausted,hecollapsedintohisarmchair.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,

Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afloodoffearwashingoverme,Iimmediatelyturned1.2.

aroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

“景”“情”過(guò)渡更融洽？Ally'sEmotions“Nothingwillbethesameagain,”Allywhispered....herowntearswerestillfrozeninsideherheart.“Imissyou,Dad,”shesaidsoftly.Allysmiled,remembering...“IfonlyIcouldgetthatgoodfeelingback,”shethought,sighing.sad/missherfather...續(xù)寫(xiě)：Asweetsong

Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.___________________________________

trees/flowers/breeze/sun/stream...comfortable/sad...EnvironmentEmotion

Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittleguyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmileandtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepattedherontheface,warmandcomfortable.However,itseemedthatAllycouldn'tcatchsightofthewoodwa