作文65寫作課堂筆記

審題-話題：話題詞題型：discuss-甲方：studentsofdifferentabilities ligentstudentstudyseparay/specialtreatment(額外輔導(dǎo)、進度更 5’（分段+主要論點P2differentabilities（指的是具體哪些能力：academicabilityOthertalent:painting/sports）學(xué)生一起學(xué)learnfromeach avoidinequalityP3：應(yīng)該讓in ligentstudents分開學(xué)specialtreatment(具體：first-classfacilitieswell-qualifiedextracourses不能：cannot/fail satisfytheiracademicP4asenseof差生（badstudents/）academicallybackward可能會產(chǎn)生自卑感(asenseofinferioritylackmotivationtostudy/discouragestudentsdevelopmentoftalents限時：40分鐘、寫的時候不要查閱資料如果有問題寫完了再查字典開頭/結(jié)尾3+32-3簡單（2句話同義詞替換（paraphrase）/修改詞性/主替somepeoplethinkthatteachingchildrenofdifferenttogetherbenefitsallofthem.Otherarguethatin ligentchildrenshouldbetaughtseparayandgivenspecialtreatment.1 think/suggest/believe/claim/considerthat/areofthepositionthatdifferent/various/avarietyofabilities/capacities/skills2 修改詞teachingV provide V/bebeneficial ADJ/bring 3 主shouldbetaughtseparay=should/besupposedtostudyseparaSomepeoplesuggestthateducatingstudentswithvariouscapabilitiesarebeneficialtoallofthem.Whileothersthinkin ligentstudentsaresupposedtostudysepara y.MyviewisthatstudyingtogetherisabetterInmyFrommyAsfarasIamconcerned,Myviewis結(jié)構(gòu)：改寫原題+說明寫作目的（引出下文Inthisessay,Iintendtoyzethecauses/effectsof…….Andproposeafewpossiblesolutionstoaddresstheissues. inconclusion/toconclude/inbrief/to開頭論點：Myviewisthatstudyingtogetherisabetterchoice.結(jié)尾論點：Inconclusion,Ifirmlybelievethatitisofmorebenefitsforstudentstostudytogether.2 總結(jié)理由(論點概括Forthereasonthatitenablesstudentstolearnfromtheirpeers,andensureequalityinschoolsettings. Thecausesofoverweightarevarious.TosolvethisissueweneedSpaceresearchBlankspace–taylor（錢應(yīng)該花在教育/藝術(shù)/交通）（1>ensuresocialsecurityegap/inequality-providepreferentialpolicies(政策弱勢群體(disadvantagedpopulation)–>narrow/bridge ecrime->establish(頒布)/en (實施)stricterlawsandregulationslowcrimerate->asenseofsecurity->sustainable2>improvelivingstandardsofthematerialneeds:->economicdevelop->taxrevenue->givetopprioritytoeducation/medicalcare/socialwelfare/spiritualne