（2023年）山西省晉中市大學英語6級大學英語六級真題(含答案)

（2023年）山西省晉中市大學英語6級大學英語六級真題(含答案)學校:________班級:________姓名:________考號:________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWealthandHealth.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.有人認為財富比健康重要；

2.也有人認為健康比財富重要；

3.我的觀點是：

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofStudyingAbroad.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.出國留學的好處；

2．出國留學的弊端；

3．結論和你的觀點。

TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofStudyingAbroad

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledLeft-behindChildrenintheCountryside.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.留守兒童的現(xiàn)象在農(nóng)村非常普遍

2.這種現(xiàn)象帶來的弊端

3.我診斷該如何時處理這些問題

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledLoveOnline.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.有些人認為“網(wǎng)上戀愛”可以接受。

2．有些人認為“網(wǎng)上戀愛”不可以接受。

3．我的看法是……

LoveOnline

5.1.目前社會上存在著迷信文憑的現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對此的觀點

IsaDiplomaEverything?

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIncomeSourcesofAmericanandChinesestudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.根據(jù)圖標說明中美大學生的來源

2.分析可能產(chǎn)生這種不同現(xiàn)象的原因

3.提出個人的建議

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionwiththetitleofACampaignSpeech,statingyourreasonsforrunningforchairmanoftheStudentUnion.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.開場白

2.你認為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛好等)可以勝任學生會主席的工作

3.如果當選，你將為本校同學做些什么

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicDon'tHesitatetoSay"No".Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.別人請求幫助時，在什么情況下我們會說“不”

2.為什么有些人在該說“不”的時候不說“不”

3.該說“不”時不說“不”的壞處

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledElectronicWaste.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinesgivenbelow

1.廢棄的電子產(chǎn)品越來越多；

2．如何正確處理這些電子產(chǎn)品。

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledGoingonStudyingorGoingtoWork.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.有些人決定畢業(yè)后讀研。

2．有些人決定畢業(yè)后工作。

3．你的看法。

GoingonStudyingorGoingtoWork

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

Consumersareencouragedtobuylow-fatmilkratherthan______.

12.

Otherspecialdisplayopportunitiesareadsinmagazine,theanotherspecialdisplayopportunityforadvertisersisthe______.

13.Thecollegedepartmentorassociationcangetpaymentsfromtheissuerifitsanctionscreditcardsdecoratedwith______.

14.Olderpeoplewhomaintainactiverelationshipswiththeiradultchildrenhavelessstressbecausetheyhavesomeoneto______.

15.PartⅡReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)

Directions:Inthispart,youwillhave15minutestogooverthepassagequicklyandanswerthequestionsonAnswerSheet1.Forquestions1-7,choosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA),B),C)andD).Forquestions8-10,completethesentenceswiththeinformationgiveninthepassage.

Don'tDestroytheEssentialCatalystofRisk

Sincethespring,andmostacutelythisautumn,aglobalcontagion(傳染)offearandpanichaschokedoffthearteriesoffinance,compoundingabroaderdeteriorationintheglobaleconomy.

Financialinstitutionshaveanobligationtothebroaderfinancialsystem.Wedependonahealthy,well-functioningsystembutwefailedtoraiseenoughquestionsaboutwhethersomeofthetrendsandpracticesthathadbecomecommonplacereallyservedthepublic'slong-terminterests.

Sevenimportantlessons

Aspolicymakersandregulatorsbegintoconsidertheregulatoryactionstobetakentoaddressthefallings,Ibelieveitisusefultoreflectonsomeofthelessonsfromtiffscrisis.

Thefirstisthatriskmanagementshouldnotbeentirelypredicatedonhistoricaldata.Inthepastseveralmonths,wehaveheardthephrase"multiplestandarddeviationevents"morethanafewtimes.Ifeventsthatwerecalculatedtooccuroncein20yearsinfactoccurredmuchmoreregularly,itdoesnottakeamathematiciantofigureoutthatriskmanagementassumptionsdidnotreflectthedistributionoftheactualoutcomes.Ourindustrymustdomoretoenhanceandimprovescenarioanalysisandstresstesting.

Second,toomanyfinancialinstitutionsandinvestorssimplyoutsourcedtheirriskmanagement.Ratherthanundertaketheirownanalysis,theyreliedontheratingagenciestodotheessentialworkofriskanalysisforthem.Thiswastrueattheinception(初期)andovertheperiodoftheinvestment,duringwhichtimetheydidnotconsiderotherindicatorsoffinancialdeterioration.

Thisover-dependenceoncreditratingscoincidedwiththedilutionofthedesiredtripleA-rating.InJanuary2008,therewere12tripleA-ratedcompaniesintheworld.Atthesametime,therewere64,000structuredfinanceinstruments,suchascollateralizeddebtobligations,ratedtripleA.Itiseasyandappropriatetoblametheratingagenciesforlapsesintheircreditjudgments.Buttheblamefortheresultisnottheirs'alone.Everyfinancialinstitutionthatparticipatedintheprocesshastoacceptitsshareoftheresponsibility.

Third,sizematters.Forexample,whetheryouowned$5billionor$50billionof(supposedly)low-risksuperseniordebtinaCDO,thelikelihoodoflosseswas,proportionally,thesame.Buttheconsequencesofamiscalculationwereobviouslymuchbiggerifyouhada$50billionexposure.

Fourth,manyriskmodelsincorrectlyassumedthatpositionscouldbefullyhedged.AfterthecollapseofLong-TermCapitalManagementmidthecrisisinemergingmarketsin1998,newproductssuchasvariousbasketindicesandcreditdefaultswapswerecreatedtohelpoffsetanumberofrisks.However,wedidnot,asanindustry,considercarefullyenoughthepossibilitythatliquiditywoulddryup,makingitdifficulttoapplyeffectivehedges.

Fifth,riskmodelsfailedtocapturetheriskinherentinoff-balancesheetactivities,suchasstructuredinvestmentvehicles.Itseemsclearnowthatmanagersofcompanieswithlargeoff-balancesheetexposuredidnotappreciatethefullmagnitudeoftheeconomicriskstheywereexposedto;equallyworrying,theircounterpartieswereunawareofthefullextentofthesevehiclesand,therefore,couldnotaccuratelyassesstheriskofdoingbusiness.

Sixth,complexitygo

A.Commercialbanks.

B.Financialinstitutions.

C.Theministryoffinance.

D.TheWallStreet.

16.

Disabilityinsurancecancompletelycoveryourloss.

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17.

Corrthinksthatifthereisanyproblemwithadrug,ifsbettertoknowit______.

18.

Tocompetewithforeigners,Chineseretailersaretakingmeasurestoimprove______bycuttingdownonthenumberoftheirstaffandtoimprovemanagementbybringinginforeignexperts.

19.DoingBusinessinAsia

ManyWesternerswantingtodobusinessesinAsiannationsseekinformationandadviceaboutthingstheyneedtoknowinordertobesuccessful.ByWesternerswhohavealreadybeenworkinginAsiannations,theyaretoldtorememberasprioritiesthe"Fs":family,face,fate,favorsandfriends.AlthoughtheydohavesomesubtledifferencesinmeaningsandconnotationsindifferentpartsofAsia,nevertheless,Westernbusinessmenneedtobesensitivetotheseissuesiftheywishtobesuccessful.Thefive"Fs"areexplainedinthefollowingway.

Family:Thismeansthatbusinessisoftencloselyconnectedtofamilyandthatthereisafamilynetworkthatbranchesoutregionallyandinternationally,providingefficientpolitical,financialandemotionalsupport,aswellasdistributionknowledge.ThisnetworkingisparticularlyobviousamongChinesewhocontrolhugebusinesssegmentsinAsiaandarebyfarthemostsuccessfulbusinessgroupintheregion.Theirlargepresencealsohelps--Singaporeis77percentChinese;Malaysia,45percent;Taiwan,aChineseprovince,99percent.IndonesiaandthePhilippinesalsohavesizableandprosperousChinesecommunities.ItisexplainedthattheimportanceoffamilygoesbacktoConfucius,whotaughtthatfamilyrepresentsrelationshipsthatonecantrust.AlthoughfamiliesintheWestmaybeconnected,theyarealmostneverascloselyconnectedasinConfucianAsia.ThisfamilydependenceisalsotreeinKorea.ThelargestcorporationinSouthKoreaisHyundai,amultibillion-dollarcompany.Headedbytheeldestbrother,thecompany'sfivemajordivisionsareeithermanagedbyoneofthefivebrothers,abrother-in-laworason-in-law.

Face:Twointerpretationsaregivenforthemeaningof"face".Oneisliteral--Asiansliketodobusinessface-to-face.Theywanttoputafacetogetherwithabusiness,torecognizeanindividualandtoassociatewithagivencompany.ManyforeigncompanieshavemadethemistakeofsendingaseriesofdifferentexecutivestoAsiaduringlengthycontractnegotiations.Theyareadvisednottodothis;ifnegotiationsarestartedbyoneindividual,theyshouldbecompletedbythatsamepersonifatallpossible.However,ifachangemustbemade,thenthefirstpersonshouldtakethenewoneandformallypresenthimashissuccessorsothatthetwofacesareidentified.Thesecondinterpretationof"face"isthatinawayitmeans"respect".Thebusinessmanistoldthathemustshowthe"properrespect"accordingtotheageandpositionofthepersonheisdealingwithandalsotakeintoaccountthesizeoftheperson'scompanyincomparisonwithhisown.InWesterncountries,ageisnotnecessarilygivenrespect,butinConfuciusAsia,ageisgivengreatrespect.Thusbusinessmenaretoldtoalwayspayattentiontoanyelderlypersonsattendingabusinessmeeting.TheyarealsowarnedthatitisverydifficultforJapanesetospeakdirectlyandsayno.Theywilldoalmostanythingtoavoidsayingno,eventothepointofnotgivinganansweratall.Bygivingnoanswerorsayingsomethinglike“I’llthinkaboutit",or"I'llconsiderit".Theyare"savingface",andreallymean"no".ThisistheoppositeoftheWestern"yesorno"mentality.ThusaWesternbusinessmaniswarnednevertoputaJapanesebusinessmaninthepositionofhavingtosay"yes"or"no".

Businessmenarealsogivenadviceabouthowtoshow"face"tosomeoneofhigherrank.RichardTallboy,CEOoftheWorldCoalOrganization,whohashadextensiveexperienceinAsia,tellsforeignersnottoforgetthe"Chairman's1/2percentofthechairman'sownpocket."HesaysthatthismeanstheyshouldalwaysstartnegotiatingatahigherpricewithAsians.Inthefirstroundnegotiationsforeignersshouldallowthemselvestocomedowninprice10percent.Inthesecondroundofnegotiationstheyshouldatlast

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20.

Foralongtime,theeffectofautomationonemploymentisthepointatissueamonglabourleaders,governmentofficials,businessexecutives,andcollegeprofessors.

A.YB.NC.NG

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.(24)

A.Ithasbeenthebestsellerforweeks.

B.Itadvisespeopletochangethemselves.

C.Itisbeingsoldataverylowprice.

D.Itdistinguishesco-operators.

22.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2longconversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbeaskedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichisthebestanswer.

(12)

A.ThatitlooksexactlylikeSusan.

B.ThatitmakesSusanlookyoungerthanshereallyis.

C.ThatitmakesSusanlookolderthanshereallyis.

D.ThatitmakesSusanlookbetterthanshelooksinperson.

23.(39)

24.(25)

A.TheComputerCenter.

B.Thelibrary.

C.Thephotocopyingfacilities.

D.Thelecturerooms.

25.(45)

26.聽力原文：Ahouseisthemostexpensivethingmostpeoplewilleverbuy.Veryfewpeoplehaveenoughmoneyoftheirowntobuyahome,sotheyhavetoborrowmoneyfromabank.Borrowingmoneyfromabanktobuyahouseiscalledtakingamortgage.Thehankusuallylendsmoneyorgivesamortgagefor25years.Thismeansthatthepersonwhoborrowshas25yearstopaybackthemoney.Thebanklendsthismoneywithinterest,andtheborrowermakesequalmonthlypaymentstothehankuntilhehaspaidthemortgage.Housesaresoexpensivethatmanypeoplenowadayshavetoborrowasmuchas$50,000.Inotherwords,theywillhavea$50,000mortgage.

Howcanyougetamortgage?Whenyoufindahouseyoulike,yougotoabank,sometimesitisnecessarytogotoafewbanks,beforeapplyingforamortgageatonce.Thebankwillinvestigateyourfinancialhistoryanddecideiftheythinkyouaxeagoodrisk.Theywillwanttoknowwhatkindofjobyouhave.Inaddition,thebankswillrequireadownpayment.Dependingonwhichstateyoulivein,thebankmayrequireasmuchas30%ofthepriceofthehouseasadownpayment.Thebankwillthenlendyoutherestofthemoneytobuythehouse.Manypeopleareneverabletobuyahousebecausetheycannotsaveenoughmoneyforthedownpayment.

(30)

A.Itmeanstorentahousefor25years.

B.Itmeanstobuyanoldhouseatalowprice.

C.Itmeanstoborrowmoneyfromabanktobuyahouse.

D.Itmeanstoborrowmoneyfromafriendtobuyahouse.

27.【B8】

28.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeachpassage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽力原文：ThesilenceoftheReferenceLibrarywasbrokenonlybyanoccasionalcoughandnowandthenbythescarcelyaudiblesoundofpagesbeingturnedover.Therewereabouttwentypeopleintheroom,mostofthemwiththeirheadsbentovertheirbooks.Theassistantlibrarianwhowasinchargeoftheroomsatatadeskinonecomer.SheglancedatPhilipashecamein,andthenwentonwithherwork.

Philiphasnotbeentothispartofthelibrarybefore.Hewalkedaroundtheroomalmostontiptoe,afraidofdisturbingtheindustriousreaderswithhisheavyshoes.Theshelveswerefilledwiththickvolumes:dictionariesinanylanguages,encyclopedias,atlases,biographiesandotherworksofreference.Hefoundnothingthatwaslikelytointeresthimuntilhecametoasmallshelfoutofhisreach,sohehadtofetchasmallladderinordertogetonedown.Unfortunately,ashewasclimbingdowntheladder,thebookhehadchosenslippedfromhisgraspandfelltothefloorwithaloudcrash.Twentypairsofeyeslookedupathimsimultaneously,annoyedbyhisunaccustomeddisturbance.Philipfelthimselfgoredashepickeduphisbook,whichdidnotseemtohavebeendamagedbyitsfall.

Hehadjustsatdownwhenhefoundtheyoungladyassistantstandingalongsidehim."Youmustbemorecarefulwhenyouarehandlingthesebooks."shesaidseverely.Satisfiedthatshehaddoneherduty,sheturnedtogobacktoherdesk.Thenasuddenthoughtstruckher."Bytheway,howoldareyou?'sheaskedPhilip."Thirteen."Hetoldher."Youarenotallowedinhereifyou'reundertheageoffourteen,youknow,"theassistantsaid."Didn'tyouseethenoticeonthedoor?"Philipshookhishead.Heexpectedtheassistanttoaskhimtoleave.Instead,inamorekindlytone,shesaid,"Well,nevermind.Butmakesurethatyoudon'tdisturbtheotherreadersagain,otherwiseIshallhavetoaskyoutoleave."

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A.Philiphasnotbeentothispartofthelibrarybefore.

B.Itwasveryquietinthelibrary.

C.Philipfellofftheladderandmadealoudnoise.

D.Thelibrarianwasverykindtoreaders.

29.(34)

A.Theylivedasimplerlifethanvillagerstoday.

B.Theyknewfewerpeoplethanvillagerstoday.

C.Theyfounditdifficulttoenjoythemselves.

D.Theyhadnothingtodointheevenings.

30.聽力原文：W:Hello,Iamaseniorstudent.Couldyoutellmewhetherthisreferenceroomisonlyforfacultymembers?

M:No,thepostgraduatesandundergraduatescancometooiftheyhavetheirprofessor'swrittenpermission.

Q:Canthewomanstudyinthereferenceroom?

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A.Yes,shecanstudythereifsheiswritingaresearchpaper.

B.Yes,butsheneedstohavetheapprovalofherprofessor.

C.Yes,becausesheisaseniorstudent.

D.No,it'sopenonlytoteachersandpostgraduates.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.

Whatisthepassagemainlyabout?

32.

【C3】

33.

WhatwastheresultofthebattlebetweenthenegativepublicityandtheP&GCompany?

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.

【S8】

35.

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36.

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六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S8】

38.

【S9】

39.

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參考答案

1.WealthandHealthWiththedevelopmentofsocietypeopleattachmoreimportancetowealthandhealthButwhichismoreimportantwealthorhealth?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.SomepeoplethinkwWealthandHealthWiththedevelopmentofsocietypeopleattachmoreimportancetowealthandhealthButwhichismoreimportant,wealthorhealth?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkw

2.TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofStudyingAbroadItisnolongersurprisingnowtoseesomanystudentsgoabroadforstudiesandtheyhaveverygoodreasonsfordoingso.Iftheyattendauniversityinaforeigncountrytheycanlearnthelanguagetheremoreefficientlyandunderstandtheculturebetter.MoreimportantlytheirexperienceoverseesandthedegreestheygettheremayputtheminanadvantageouspositioninjobcompetitionwhentheyarebackinChina.Neverthelessthereisnodenyingthatthereexistsomedisadvantagesaswell.Firstofallitcostsfarmoremoney.Forthesamedegreestudythetuitionfeeinaforeignuniversitywouldbearoundseventimesthemountneededinadomesticuniversity.Andalsothereisthefeelingofloneliness.Theirparentsandfriendsareallfarawayfromthemandtheycanhardlyfindfamiliarpeopletotalkto.Besidestheymaysufferfrom"cultureshock"whentheycomeacrossthenewcultureintheforeigncountryandhavedifficultyinadjustingthemselvestoit.Inshortaseverycoinhastwosidessodoesstudyingabroad.Iftheycanmakegooduseoftheadvantagesandarefullyawareofthedisadvantagestheymaybenefitalotfromtheexperienceofstudyingabroad.TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofStudyingAbroadItisnolongersurprisingnowtoseesomanystudentsgoabroadforstudies,andtheyhaveverygoodreasonsfordoingso.Iftheyattendauniversityinaforeigncountry,theycanlearnthelanguagetheremoreefficientlyandunderstandtheculturebetter.Moreimportantly,theirexperienceoverseesandthedegreestheygettheremayputtheminanadvantageouspositioninjobcompetitionwhentheyarebackinChina.Nevertheless,thereisnodenyingthatthereexistsomedisadvantagesaswell.Firstofall,itcostsfarmoremoney.Forthesamedegreestudy,thetuitionfeeinaforeignuniversitywouldbearoundseventimesthemountneededinadomesticuniversity.Andalso,thereisthefeelingofloneliness.Theirparentsandfriendsareallfarawayfromthemandtheycanhardlyfindfamiliarpeopletotalkto.Besides,theymaysufferfrom"cultureshock"whentheycomeacrossthenewcultureintheforeigncountryandhavedifficultyinadjustingthemselvestoit.Inshort,aseverycoinhastwosides,sodoesstudyingabroad.Iftheycanmakegooduseoftheadvantagesandarefullyawareofthedisadvantages,theymaybenefitalotfromtheexperienceofstudyingabroad.解析：[審題]這次考試的寫作題屬于常見的三段式作文。

第一段要寫海外留學的優(yōu)點。比如有利于學習所在國的語言和文化，能使留學生在就業(yè)時更有競爭力，等等。

第二段是說明留學的弊端。可以列舉費用昂貴、只身他鄉(xiāng)孤獨等。

最后，要說明自己的觀點，得出結論，對前文內容進行歸納總結。

[提綱]

1.Advantages:

learnthelanguagemoreefficientlyandunderstandtheculturebetter

anadvantageouspositioninjobcompetitionbackinChina

2.Disadvantages:

costfarmoremoney

thefeelingofloneliness

"cultureshock"

3.Aseverycoinhastwosides,sodoesstudyingabroad.

3.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyearmillionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Thereforemanyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besidestheyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinionmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.FirstlybothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondlypoliciesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunitiesmedicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finallyitisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareassothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyear,millionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Therefore,manyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besides,theyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinion,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstly,bothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondly,policiesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunities,medicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finally,itisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas,sothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.解析：[寫作點撥]①審題及布局。根據(jù)提綱，這篇作文的第一段闡述現(xiàn)象，第二段闡明此現(xiàn)象的弊端，第三段提出解決辦法。這三個部分的論述要有側重點，我們可以把重點放在第二段或第三段。第一段闡明留守兒童現(xiàn)象是隨著大批進城務工者的出現(xiàn)而出現(xiàn)的。第二段闡述留守兒童所遭遇的問題：缺少父母的關愛，他們的身心都很有可能得不到健康的發(fā)展。第三段可以根據(jù)弊端的根源即缺少關愛人手，提出一系列建議，讓他們感受到關愛，得以健康成長。②語言。這篇文章討論的是當前的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時即可。在第二、三段的論述中，為了達到表意清晰，邏輯性強，要使用各種關聯(lián)詞，同時注意用詞的鮮明、準確。

4.LoveOnlineWiththerapiddevelopmentoftheinternetithasbecomeapopularmeansofcommunicationthroughouttheworld.Becauseofitseasyaccessandspeedinessintransmittingmessagesitistakingtheplaceoftraditionalmeansofcommunication.Manypeopleespeciallytheyoungarechattingonline;andmoreandmoreyoungpeoplearemakingfriendsontheinternet.Someofthemevenfallinlovewitheachotherandbegintodateonline.Thosewhoareopen-mindedhaveafavorableattitudetowardthisonlinebehavior.Theythinkthatthisnewtypeoffriendshipandromanceareacceptableandourtraditionalmoralvaluesshouldadapttothechangeoftimesandtheadvanceoftechnology.Theyarguethatwhattheyoungaredoinginthisonlinecommunityarenotnecessarilyallbadandthisromanticonlinelovemaysometimesendupinhappymarriage.Howeversomepeopleespeciallythemid-ageandtheoldhaveanegativeattitudetowardthisonlinefriendshipandlove.Theyarguethatthiskindofthingisagainstourtraditionalmoralstandardsandthisonlinelovecanneverbetrueloveanditcanevenbecheating.Theirdoubtis:howcanpeoplewhohaveneverseeneachotherbefriends?Howcanoneloveorevenmarryanotherwhomheorshehasnevermet?Andwhatifthosewhoaredatingonlineofferfalseinformationofthemselves?ButIthinkwecan'tjumpatanyconclusions.Itmaybestillearlytodecidewhetherloveonlineisgoodorbad.Iinsistthatweshouldbemoreopen-mindedandmoretolerantofnewthings.Letthosewhodateandloveonlinedecideforthemselves.Throughtrialsanderrorstheywillbeabletoformcorrectjudgementsandlearngoodlessons.LoveOnlineWiththerapiddevelopmentoftheinternet,ithasbecomeapopularmeansofcommunicationthroughouttheworld.Becauseofitseasyaccessandspeedinessintransmittingmessages,itistakingtheplaceoftraditionalmeansofcommunication.Manypeople,especiallytheyoung,arechattingonline;andmoreandmoreyoungpeoplearemakingfriendsontheinternet.Someofthemevenfallinlovewitheachotherandbegintodateonline.Thosewhoareopen-mindedhaveafavorableattitudetowardthisonlinebehavior.Theythinkthatthisnewtypeoffriendshipandromanceareacceptableandourtraditionalmoralvaluesshouldadapttothechangeoftimesandtheadvanceoftechnology.Theyarguethatwhattheyoungaredoinginthisonlinecommunityarenotnecessarilyallbadandthisromanticonlinelovemaysometimesendupinhappymarriage.However,somepeopleespeciallythemid-ageandtheold,haveanegativeattitudetowardthisonlinefriendshipandlove.Theyarguethatthiskindofthingisagainstourtraditionalmoralstandardsandthisonlinelovecanneverbetrueloveanditcanevenbecheating.Theirdoubtis:howcanpeoplewhohaveneverseeneachotherbefriends?Howcanoneloveorevenmarryanotherwhomheorshehasnevermet?Andwhatifthosewhoaredatingonlineofferfalseinformationofthemselves?ButIthinkwecan'tjumpatanyconclusions.Itmaybestillearlytodecidewhetherloveonlineisgoodorbad.Iinsistthatweshouldbemoreopen-mindedandmoretolerantofnewthings.Letthosewhodateandloveonlinedecideforthemselves.Throughtrialsanderrorstheywillbeabletoform.correctjudgementsandlearngoodlessons.

5.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcostsandothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehandpeoplebelieveahigherdiplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessfulcareersandrespectablepositions.Ontheotherhandthediplomapeopleholdisattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionforpeopletodoalm