英語(yǔ)教材解讀人教九年級(jí)上冊(cè)九年級(jí)Unit7Writing

FreeTalkWhatcanyoudoathome?Whatcan’tyoudoathome?Whatrulesdoyouthinkshouldbechanged?

Withapartner,discusssomerulesathomethatyouagreeordisagreewith.Makesomenotesinthechart.RuleWhyyouagreeordisagreewithitHowyouthinktheruleshouldbechangedSampledialogue:A:Doyouhavelotsofrulesathome?B:Yes,ofcourse.OnlyonSaturdayafternooncanIgoshoppingwithmyfriends.A:That’sterrible.B:AndIcan’tplaycomputergamesonweekends.Ithinktheyshould…Whataboutyou?A:I…Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.Usethefollowingexpressionstohelpyou:Idonotagreewith…IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…Iwouldliketo…Icould…ifI…字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右【寫作任務(wù)】【寫作注意點(diǎn)】注意語(yǔ)法、句法及銜接詞的靈活運(yùn)用。（1）審清作文體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié)。（2）列好提綱，確定好內(nèi)容情節(jié)，劃分段落。

（3）運(yùn)用美詞、美句，書寫美觀。

（4）注意詞匯拼寫、大小寫以及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)?！緦懽魉悸贰恳鲇^點(diǎn)Idonotagreewiththerulethat…列出原因Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife…給出建議IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…觀點(diǎn)總結(jié)Icould…ifI…【分值評(píng)定】本題總分15分，按所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)和行文評(píng)分。評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意三個(gè)方面：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完整；語(yǔ)言正確，行文流暢；書面整潔、美觀。分值評(píng)定（1）細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容（包括句式、語(yǔ)法）：引出觀點(diǎn)Idonotagreewiththerulethat…（3分）列出原因Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife…（3分）給出建議IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…（3分）觀點(diǎn)總結(jié)Icould…ifI…（3分）(2)書寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)及行文（3分）Sharingthewritingingroups(1)Doyouusethetense,spelling,punctuation,capitalizationcorrectly?(2)Isyourwritingcompleteorcoherentlywritten?(3)Canyoudescribeyourselfinaconciseway?(4)Arethereanycomplexsentencesinyourwriting?【范文展示】IdonotagreewiththerulethatImustbehomefordinnereveryday.Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife.Ittakesawayopportunitiesformetospendtimewithmyfriends.Asaresult,mylifeisquiteuninterestingsometimes.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtohavedinnerwithmyfriendsonceinawhile.Forexample,IwouldliketohangoutwithmyclassmatesuntilafterdinneronsomeFridays.IhopemyparentswillallowmetodothisifIpromisenottostayouttoolateandifthereisnoimportantfa