2023學(xué)年完整公開課版短文改錯(cuò)

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NancyHowtodoProof-reading一、“短文改錯(cuò)”題中的常見錯(cuò)誤類型

(一)

名詞方面的錯(cuò)誤You’ve

been

settled

down

in

Boston

and

are

getting

used

to

the

local

ways

of

life.____way(二)

動(dòng)詞方面的錯(cuò)誤How

about

join

us?

The

camp

is

at

the

foot

of

a

small

hill.____joining(三)

形容詞、副詞方面的錯(cuò)誤They

came

back

lately

and

had

some

tea.____lateYou

always

gave

me

specially

attention

...

_______special(四)

連詞方面的錯(cuò)誤I

became

very

active

but

made

new

friends.___and(五)

代詞方面的錯(cuò)誤Your

life

in

your

country

is

quite

different

from

me.___mineEverybody

sleeps

in

tents,

that

is

very

exciting____which(六)

介詞方面的錯(cuò)誤Could

you

share

your

experience

for

us?____with(七)

冠詞方面的錯(cuò)誤And

if

he

breaks

the

law

of

society

...,

he

may

go

to

the

prison＼(八)

時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)方面的錯(cuò)誤Today，I

got

a

letter

that

said

I

had

been

admitting

to

a

college.

_____admitted(九)

主謂一致方面的錯(cuò)誤“I

just

want

to

know

what

the

sign

say.”___says(十)

短語、句型固定搭配錯(cuò)誤My

teacher

advised

me

to

keep

my

diary.___a

I

thought

that

was

dull

to

watch

a

game___it1.Icanreturntoschoolnow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.

Weallhadgoodtimetoday.3.Imajorataccounting.theWrongword∧MissingwordintoUnnecessary

word∧aNowherearetheweatherreportforourcity.Tomorrowwillbefinewiththehightemperature3℃inthedaytime.Inthenights,thetemperaturewillfelldownbelowzero.Thetemperaturewillbe－8℃.Thedaybeforetomorrow,therewillbethestrongwindandthetemperaturewillbelow.Itwillfalldown－10℃.Youhadbettertowearyourwarmclothes.Ifyouareadriver,you’dbetterbemorecarefullywhenyouaredrivingbecausethestrongwind.1.

..10.3stepsofdoingproof-reading1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)）3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.（檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)）動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)．還要注意形和副．代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟介詞短語須關(guān)注．習(xí)慣用法要記?。谠~連詞常光顧．ALimerickAtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancinghappily...9.10.考試題目鏈接3steps1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)）3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.（檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)）Thispassageisabout______A.Jim’sfamily.B.Christmaslights.C.HowJim’sfamilydecoratedtheChristmastreeonChristmasEve.CAtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancinghappily...9.10.AtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._____fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._____abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._____Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it動(dòng)詞形介詞短語常常考，習(xí)慣用法要記住還要注意形和副代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟room.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._____Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6.____reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7.________afireburninginthefireplace,buttheChistmas8.____treelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandher9.____parentssinginganddancinghappily.10.____＼was＼_______lights_____________beautiful_____andhis∧were動(dòng)詞形還要注意形和副動(dòng)詞形名詞數(shù)冠詞連詞須關(guān)注代詞的一致性

Fourpoints

thatyoushouldpayattentionto

①標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改.②大小寫不改.③詞序錯(cuò)誤不改.④在綱外生詞不改(帶漢語注釋的詞).

DiscussionWhatdidyoulearnfromthislesson?Hewhomakesnomistakes，makesnothing．不犯錯(cuò)誤的人必然一事無成。2.Byignorancewemistake,andbymistakeswelearn．吃一塹長(zhǎng)一智。Proverbs3.Astupidpersonalwaystriestojustifyhimselfforhismistakes;butawisemantrieshisbesttocorrecthiserrors.

愚蠢的人總是為自己的錯(cuò)誤辯護(hù)，聰明的人則力求改正。4.Don'tmakethesamemistaketwice.

不要重復(fù)犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤。一、動(dòng)詞形

1.動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤.2.主、謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。高考鏈接１：Whentheairmove,wehavewind.moves二、名詞數(shù)

指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯(cuò)誤。高考鏈接2：Wewritetoeachotherallthetimes.time三、還要注意形和副１．修飾名詞，be動(dòng)詞，系動(dòng)詞要用形容詞２．修飾動(dòng)詞，形容詞，過去分詞，整個(gè)句子用副詞３．比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的使用高考鏈接３：ItisstillhardlyformetowriteinEnglish.hard四、代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟1.人稱代詞，物主代詞的使用．２．反身代詞oneself的使用．３．人稱代詞的主格和賓格．４．不定代詞的使用．５．Both,

all,

either,

neither,

none的使用.6.Whose

和who’s，its和it’s的區(qū)別．高考鏈接４：IheardthatMr.WangwouldteachourEnglishthisterm.us五、介詞短語須關(guān)注，

習(xí)慣用法要記?。饕疾楣潭ǘ陶Z，固定介詞的搭配。高考鏈接５：Themanissittingnexthisson.to∧１.冠詞a,an和the的用法錯(cuò)誤．２．連詞but，and，or,so和although的用法錯(cuò)誤．高考鏈接６：Whatagoodnewswe’veheard.2.I’msorry,andIwon’tbeabletocometonight.but六、冠詞連詞常光顧aNowherearetheweatherreportforourcity.Tomorrowwillbefinewiththehightemperature3℃inthedaytime.Inthenights,thetemperaturewillfelldownbelowzero.Thetemperaturewillbe－8℃.Thedaybeforetomorrow,therewillbethestrongwindandthetemperaturewillbelow.Itwillfalldown－10℃.Youhadbettertowearyourwarmclothes.Ifyouareadriver,you’dbetterbemorecarefullywhenyouaredrivingbecausethestrongwind.1.

..10.Thispassageismainlyabout_____________________________.theweatherreportinourcityNowherearetheweatherreportforourcity.1._____Tomorrowwillbefinewiththehightemperature2._____3℃inthedaytime.Intheevenings,thetemperature3.______willfelldownbelowzero.Thetemperature4._____willbe－8℃.Thedaybeforetomorrow,there5._____isaeveningfallafterwillbethestrongwindandthetemperaturewill6.____below.Itwillfalldown－10℃.Youhad7.____bettertowearyourwarmclothes.Ifyouarea8.____driver,you’dbetterbemorecarefullywhen9.____youaredrivingbecausethestrongwind.10.____atoto＼＼carefulof∧∧Ken

was

having

a

serious

back

trouble.

He

was

in

the

hospital.

The

doctor

talked

to

Eva,

Ken's

wife,

about

her

condition.

When

she

asked

what

serious

her

husband's

back

trouble

was,

andthe

doctor

said

that

Ken

should

have

complete

bedrest.

That

meant

that

he

had

to

lie

down

all

the

time

in

2

or

3

weeks

after

he

could

go

home.

He

had

to

stay

bed

for

about

10

days.

After

that,

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get

up

twice

a

day

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minute.

Finallyhe

could

do

some

easily

exercises.

When

he

could

walk

round

for

an

hour,

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was

able

leave

the

hospital.

.

Ken

was

having

a

serious

back

trouble.

He

was

in

the

hospital.

The

doctor

talked

to

Eva,

Ken's

wife,

about

her

condition.

When

she

asked

what

serious

her

husband'sback

trouble

was,

andthe

doctor

said

that

Ken

should

have

complete

bedrest.That

meant

that

he

had

to

lie

down

all

the

time

in

2

or

3

weeks

after

he

could

go

home.

He

had

to

stay

bed

for

about

10

days.

After

that,

hecould

only

get

up

twice

a

day

for

10

minute.

Finallyhe

could

do

some

easily

exercises.

When

he

could

walk

round

for

an

hour,

he

was

able

leave

the

hospital.

Ken

was

having

a

serious

back

trouble.

He

was

in

the

hospital.

The

doctor

talked

to

Eva,

Ken's

wife,

about

her

condition.

When

she

asked

what

serious

her

husband'sback

trouble

was,

andthe

doctor

said

that

Ken

should

have

complete

bedrest.＼his_______how＼∧aaThat

meant

that

he

had

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lie

down

all

the

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in

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3

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he

could

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He

had

to

stay

bed

for

about

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days.

After

that,

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a

day

for

10

minute.

Finallyhe

could

do

some

easily

exercises.

When

he

could

walk

round

for

an

hour,

he

was

able

leave

the

hospital.

____before∧in______minutes____easy∧toItwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2007．IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhileanoldmancameoutoftheparkontheothersidesofthe

street．ThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmadearightturnintoParkRoad．Thenextmomentthecarhitthemanwhileshewascrossingtheroad．Hefellwithacry．Thecardidn’tstopanddriveoffatfullspeedheadingthewest.InoticedthedriverwasyoungwomanworeapairofglassesandtheplatenumberwasAC864．Aftertwominuteslater,Istoppedapassedcarandtooktheoldmantonearesthospital．Itwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2007．IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhileanoldmancameoutoftheparkontheothersidesofthe

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