2009年全國各省市高考英語書面表達題范文

2009年市高考英語表達題范錦完整18套（附解析及專家簡評）一（2009卷I、海南、卷）Tracy來留言：1）咖啡屋（BoltonCoffee）見面取消2）Susan3)注意：1.100MrsWilson,LiMrsI’mgoingoutshop,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.Atabout1o’clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.Li123中的幾個方依然保持卷I短文寫作的老套路：人物李華（自1999年以來，中間除了02年，統(tǒng)信（郵件或留言，實則依然是短文寫作，控制程度較高，體裁以述說明為主。二（2009.卷假定你是李華，你的朋友sarah打算暑期來旅游，來信詢問改建后前門大街的800余米、600多年歷史、300位置：廣場南面17、69、592參考詞匯：步行街pedestrianstreettrolley地鐵100DearThankyouforyouletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenstreet.Hereissomethingabout【參考范文DearThankyouforyourletterforaskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Alongthis800-meterstreet,therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTian’anmenSquare,it’sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakeBusesNo.17,69or59.SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsotochattersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.I’msureyou‘lllikeit.人物李華簡單的外事活體裁屬于述明性話題是介紹前門大街改建況但這個話題對卷I考區(qū)的考生多少有些。種可以理解為城鄉(xiāng)和信息歧視。因為該考區(qū)學生對前門并不熟悉所幸試題控很嚴，只當是翻譯了。另外，試題所提供的名詞類詞匯缺乏考試的實際意，只是照抄已，對考生并無 。第一節(jié)，情景作文（20分

三（2009.卷動”專欄寫一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”為題的英文稿件。（15分InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit. 情景作文（20分）1234GreenActioninOurApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediay.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.，在卷和地方卷中，08年只有卷是記敘文，09年又是記敘文。有趣的是，都是的話卷NMET時代的連環(huán)畫看圖說故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年表星農(nóng)場，一個卻是紅星中學。就話題而言，08是春游活動，09是植樹，而NMET1998則是參觀活動，話題顯然高度相關(guān)。，第二節(jié)開放作文（15分【參考范文Whataninterestingpicture!AWesternyoungman,sittingatatable,isreadytoeatabowlofnoodles.HeisholdingtwoforksthesamewayasweChineseholdchopsticks.Heistryingsohardtopickupthenoodlesthatheissweatingalot.Atfirstglance,Ithinkit’sabitfunny,forweChinesetakeforgrantedthatchopsticksarethetoolsforeatingnoodles.Themaninthepictureistryingtocopyus.Obviouslyheisngitthehardway.Maybeusingoneforkwilldoabetterjob,Inmyopinion,wedon’tneedtocopyothers’waysofthinking.Sometimesasimplerwayofngthingsmaybeabetterway. 語破的之妙，在高考那種氛圍中，似乎不易。Inmyopinion,wedon’tneedtocopyothers’waysofthinking.Sometimesasimplerwayofngthingsmaybeabetterway.這樣的靈智四（2009.卷61.假設你是晨光中學的學生會李華。學生會將舉辦每年一度的英語比賽，本年度的為“TheEnglishNovelILikeBest”。作為組織者，你將在比賽開幕時發(fā)言，100Goodafternoon,ladiesandetothisyear’sEnglishspeechThank一 評分原25510023 預祝比賽成功【參考范文Goodafternoon.Ladiesandetothisyear’sEnglishspeechcompetition.TakingpartinEnglishspeechcompetitionisahelpfulwaytolearnEnglish.Whilewefullyprepareforthecompetition,wecanimproveourabilitiesoflisteningandspeakinganddevelopagoodhabitofreadingEnglish.Intheprocessofthecompetition,youshouldpayspecialattentiontothefollowingrules.First,youshouldfinishyourspeechinfiveminutes.Second,youtryyourbesttoexpressyourselfinEnglishfluently.Finally,youshouldhaveagoodEnglishpronunciation.IhopethattheEnglishspeechcompetitionwilbeagreatThank本題屬于提綱式作文，體裁為應用文中的稿，題材內(nèi)容貼近學生生活，給出要點（05，06文共出現(xiàn)三次標題作（04：中學生應該如何使用家長給的零花錢07：HowtoProtectEyesight是敘事+議論，這說明比較偏好說性質(zhì)和議論性質(zhì)這兩類寫作文體。五（2009.卷接收時的回應方式DearGladtohearfromyouand etoChinainIhopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpfulandwishyouagoodDearGladtohearfromyouandyou’re etoChinainJuly.ThefollowingaresomeChineseFirstly,wegreeteachotherbysaying“o”oraskingsuchquestionsas“Whereareyougoing?”or“Areyoubusy?”toexpressourcare.Secondly,whenpraised,wereplywith“Oh,no!”or“I’mover-praised”toshowgoodmanners.Next,whenreceivingagift,weusuallysay“It’sunnecessary”besides“Thanks”toshowpolitenessandthenputitaway.Finally,atdinnerparties,wetalkloudlyandtouchglasseswhendrinkingtosomeone’shealthorsuccesstoshowthatwe’reAnyhow,differentcultures,differentcustoms.Ifyou“DoastheRomansdowheninyou’llenjoymoreofyourstayIhopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpfulandwishyouagoodjourney.Yourssincerely,Li【解析能充分使學生在語言學習中體會文化比較的，這個也是雙向的：一方面來自對異必然將語言學習引向，也必然會使生動有趣的語言學習變得枯燥乏味，同時也必然會使兩種語言的學習都產(chǎn)生，由學習觀念的演變成為學習行為的?？上驳氖?，以大大的提高中國學生學的效率。六（2009.卷假設你正在參加全省中學生英語比賽，請你針對有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子或書100Goodmorning,ladiesandSomeofusarehavingproblemswithourparents,astheyoftenlookintoourschoolbagsorreadourdiaries.ThankGoodmorning,ladiesandSomeofusarehavingproblemswithourparents,astheyoftenlookintoourschoolbagsorreadourdiaries.Ifullyunderstandwhywearenotcomfortableaboutit,butthere’snoneedtofeeltoosad.Ourparentsarecheckingourbagsordiariestomakesurewe’renotgettingintoanytrouble.Theyhaveprobablyheardsomehorriblestoriesaboutotherkidsandthoughtwemightdothesame.Orperhapstheyjustwanttoconnectwithusbutaredongitallwrong.Mysuggestionis:lthemwewantthemtotrustusasmuchaswe’dliketotrustthem.Ifyoudon’tthinkyoucantalktothem,writethemaletterandleaveitlyingaround—thyareboundtoreadThank五年來，基本上都是走的說（05）和說+議論（06，07，08）的文體路線。09年則來了一個典型的議論性質(zhì)文體，這是一個很了不起的進步。和卷一樣，話題場景（2009.山東卷第二 寫作（滿分30分假設你是李華，曾在學習半年，現(xiàn)已回國。你想聯(lián)系你的老師Mr.Smith,但沒有其。請根據(jù)以下要點給你的同學Tom寫：詢問Mr,smith的近況并索要其注意：1.120-150；【參考范文DearIamnowbackChinaandsound.InthisletterIwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistanceinmyEnglishlearningwhenIwasinNewYork.Additionally,yourgeneroushelpandtendercaremademefeelwarmly edandtransformedmyfirstAmericantripintoaunforgettablememory.IhavebeenmissingourEnglishprofessor,Mr.Smithwhoseunusualcastofmind,wideandvariedknowledge,togetherwithasingularalcharm,combinedtoexertastronginfluenceonme.Whatabouthimrecently?Idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.However,hisaddressisnotavailable.Sowouldyouminddeliveringittomeviatheonlinemailbox?IammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratetheSpringFestival-ChineseLunarNewYearsothatIcanrepayyourfriendship.Youcanpartnerwithmetohaveatryinliondances,whichisextremelyexciting.Andthegrandlanternfestivalparadewillbeboundtoimpressyou.IassureyouthatyouwouldenjoyvisitinghereasIdidatyouhome.Withmybestregards!Yourscordially,LiHua【解析李華寫信海外學習背景回國后的聯(lián)系和卷I短文寫作的基本命題路數(shù)一致說明我們豐富多彩，而不能由此得出自家文化不如別國文化的觀點。所以，學習（2009.陜西卷假定你是李華在一個英文網(wǎng)絡上,你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發(fā)（post）尋求幫助,請根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容,寫作要點和要求回貼。內(nèi)容充實,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,Hi,Grown-Asastudentofyourage,Iunderstandyoursituation.Theproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongourteenagers.However,itshouldbewisenottodoanythingthatmayhurtherfeelings.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom.Hearttohearttalkshelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Theyarealsoopportunitiestoletherknowyourideasofandattitudestowardmanythings.Second,youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswell,provingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadya“Grown-up”.It’sevenbetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework,suchascleaning,washingandcooking.文體：應用文（電子郵件TheproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongourHereareafewit’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourTheyarealsoopportunitiestoletherknowyourideasofandattitudestowardsmanythings.Second,youshouldlearntodoyourownthings意，但由于這個話題是開放式的，即題中所提供的材料只是起到了話題的作用，不像09陜西卷不僅有個好話題，而且還有個好形式，因為這個展開性話題留給考生的思（2009.江西卷學校即將舉行以“Turningabadmood（心情）intoagoodone為題目的英語作文比賽，請按下列要求定一篇100詞左右的記敘文或議。記敘【參考范文】議

TurningaBadMoodintoAGoodItisveryimportantforustohaveagoodmoodinourdailylife.Ifyouhaveagoodmood,youwillbehappywitheverythingintheworld.Mostimportantly,youwillhaveaoptimisticeffectonthepeoplearoundyou.Weallwillliveaharmoniousandhappylife.Itisalsogoodforyourhealth.However，sometimeswhenyoumeetsomedifficulties,whenyouquarrelwithotherswhenyoufailinngsomething.Youmayhaveabadmood.Ifso,youshouldgetridofitassoonaspossible.Asweallknow,everythinghasitstwosides.Soyoushouldthinkmoreaboutitsbrightside.Wearesurethateverythingwillbebetterwithtimepassingby.Remember:Onlyyoucanmakeyourselfhappy.Ihopethateveryonehasagoodmoodevery今年依然是開放式的作文，只提出了一個話題“Turningabadmoodintoagoodone”,寫作內(nèi)容及寫作說明。此舉為創(chuàng)新。這個標題作文制具備雙重可選特征，即既可以通05（除（2009.江蘇卷ThemouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithaThemouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithaFormostpeople,it’salmostimpossibletooperateacomputerwithoutamouse,letalonesurftheInternet.Awell-chosenmouseisreallyhandy,flexibleandconvenientincontrollingthescreen.Withthefunctionsofinserting,deleting,movingandcopying,itenablesustoedittest,browsewebpageanddownloadwhatwewant.Itcanevenbringusafloodofmusic,moviesandPCgames.Justimagine,allthiscanbedonewithacutemouse.Aconvenienttoolcancertainlymakeourworkeasier,butitdoesn’talwayshelpinapositiveway.Toomuchreadyinformationonourfingertipsleaveslittleroomforknowledgepursuing.Toomanyreadyanswersmakeuslessexcitedinfindingtruth.Relyingtoomuchonmouseclickingmakesuslazierandlesscreativebothmentallyandphysically.（153words）本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內(nèi)容與我們生活相關(guān)，考生只要把所給要點逐條述，對于江蘇的考生而言，自08年以來，整卷分值雖然下降為120分，但短文寫作的分值仍然是25分，和絕大多數(shù)卷種同題一樣。但是，從寫作詞數(shù)要求、寫作話題和寫達到150左右的卷種，目前只有和江蘇兩地，09年江蘇范文詞數(shù)為153詞。第二，六”（04”（05，“”（06，“”（07，：又給考生帶來了表達上的。對于秀的考生，種話題可能如魚得水，而對于中等偏下的考生，這種話題顯然有點尷尬：想說點什么，但要嘛說不出，要嘛說不好。第三，這個難還表現(xiàn)在寫作形式上幾年來江蘇卷主采用的是混合形式的寫作說議論我分析了一下09不利影響不利影響（0009年卷雖然沒有：（2009.湖南卷假設你是某中學新老師請給你的朋友寫你第一天上課的情況，120DearZhangIt’sthreemonthssinceIheardfromyoulasttime.NowIwanttolyouanimpressivestoryhappenedonmyfirstlesson.Onhearingthebell,studentsranintotheclassroomasquicklyastheycan.Butaboy,LiMing,whosefatherdiedamonthago,waslatefortheclass.Hestoodoutsidetheclassroom,silently.Isdtohimandlethimcamein.Afterawhile,hecriedonhisdesk.ThenIwalkedtohimandaskedwhathadhappened.Hetoldmethathismotherwasillandhehadtotakesomemedicineforher.Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness.Movedbyhiswords,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongnamed“Mother”forthestudents.Howtimeflies!ClasswasoverbeforeIrealizedit.FromthestoryIfeltweshouldrespectourparentsanddoourbesttohelpthem.Doyouthinkso?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.LiHong【湖南卷這是第二次在短文寫作中涉及老師（06MrMoore，09。第一次出現(xiàn)考生假設人是教師——“假設你是某中學新老師”。這個假設在的高考英語各卷種中都十二（2009.卷假設你是華華，與英友湯姆約定用對方的母語通信，以提高各自的外語水平。最要點“無所不為”“無所事事注意 1.詞數(shù)為1叨左右參考釋義:無所不為一doallkindsofbadhavenothingtoHi!Nicetoreadyoure-mailtoday.Inoticedyou’vebeguntouseChineseidiomsandusedmostofthemcorrectly.…Hopyou’llfindagoodjobHi!Nicetoreadyoure-mailtoday.Inoticedyou’vebeguntouseChineseidiomsandusedmostofthemcorrectly.However,I’mafraidthereisonemistakeI’dliketopointout.Itis“無所不為”.Thismeans“doallkindsofbadthings”.Areyoungallkindsofbadthingsathome?Iguesswhatyouwerereallytryingtosayisthatyou’vegotnothingtodothesedays.Inthatcase,youshoulduse“無所事事”.Weusuallyuse“無所不為”toexpresstheideathatpeopledaretodobad,and無所事事”todescribethesituationinwhichpeoplehavegotnothingmeaningfultoHaveImademyselfAnyway,I’mamazedattheprogressyou’veHopyou’llfindagoodjobsoon.其諧音極似“不滿意”或“notveryeasy”.而09年搖身一變又改成了華華，看來卷是離不本題和04年卷I的寫作題類似（外國人學中文，中文歌曲比賽，另外，07年高示意義深蘊其間，對其他各卷種題思路不無裨益。（2009.福建卷toS 詞數(shù)：120IWantto【參考范文Therearemanyadvantagesofsmiling.Itcannotonlymakeushappy,butalsopleaseothers.Ifwesatlife,lifewillsonusinreturn.SoIwanttosatallwheneverandwhereverFirst,Iwouldliketosatmyparentsbecausetheyhavegivenmelifeandtakeallthetroubletobringmeup.Theyarrangealmosteverythingforme.Withtheirhelp,Ihavemadegreatprogress.Iwouldliketosay“Thankyou”tothemwithas.Thenmysshouldgotomyself,foronlyinthiswaycanIgainmoreconfidenceinsmilingmytroublesawayandliveabetterlife.Inaword,let’sgreeteverydaywithas.TomorrowisanotherExaminations年來，福建卷基本上使用的是議論性質(zhì)的寫作文體（04說，05、06議論，07、08說+，09而是采用圖文形式，在語言轉(zhuǎn)換上較卷難。從所給范文看，語言難度不高，但思維難度不低?？忌梅植灰住Ｊ模?009.卷第一節(jié)基礎(chǔ)寫作（115分時間時間:對象:眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）:我國中小學生近視（short-sightedness）問題基本信息:（1）發(fā)生率:50％（2）人數(shù):世界第一專家解讀:（1）原因:很復雜治療:建議:特別提示:采訪的時間、對象和【參考范文Lastweekend,Ihadaninterviewwitheye-doctorProfessorWangaboutourcountryprimaryandmiddlestudents’short-sightedness.Itissaidthatslightlymorethan50%students,whichrankstheNo.1intheworld,areshort-sighted.ProfessorWangsaidthereasonofshort-sightednessiscomplicatedandthreeisstillnocureforshort-sightedness.Hesuggestedthatweshouldnotoveruseoureyesanddomoreoutdoorexercises.What’smore,sincetheholdingofpenhassomethingtodowiththeshort-sightedness,weneedtopayattentiontousingthepen.眼是每個校園所必不可少的現(xiàn)象，是學生校園生活得熱點。因此今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作題目Eyesight但角度有不同卷重的是問題本身的描則是強調(diào)的如何保護視不過能有做卷的經(jīng)驗，對卷也就會有難的感。更何況卷所給信息非常充分，對于考生而言，剩下的主要是組織句了。需要特的是，說性質(zhì)的文體其在于述和說明（包括介紹，即講清一樁事情。第二節(jié)讀寫任務（125分Jackieisperhapsthemosteasilyannoyedkoala（考拉）attheFeatherdaleWildlifeParkinsouthernAustralia.Allthekoalasthereareunhappyandcomplaining.Youwouldbetooifyouwereusedtonightactivitiesandsomeonekeptwakingyouupalldaywhileyouweretryingtosleepitoff.That’sright—sleepitoff.Theaveragekoalaisalwayshalfasleepbecauseitfeedsontheleavesofaspecialkindthatmakesitsleepy.ThereasonJackieandherfellowkoalasarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepissotheycanbehuggedandphotographedbytourists，whomakethetripstoFeatherdaleandanincreasingnumberofothernationalparksforjustthatspecialexperience.WhateverdepartmentintheAussieernmentinchargeofsuchthingsisnowmovingtomakethepracticeillegal，whichisunderstandable.Howwouldyoureact，myfriend，ifyouweretryingtosleepoffadozentimesandsomeround，furrycreaturesmellingofgrasskeptwakingyou?*然后以約120個詞就“該不該游客和動物拍照”進行議論，內(nèi)容包括【參考范文Thepassagenarratesthatkoalaswhoarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepareunhappyandcomplainingfortouriststakingphotos.TheauthorappealstoustobemorekindtoThereasonswhytouristsliketakingphotosoftheanimalsinthezooperhapsvaryfrompeopletopeople.Somethinkitahappyreminderoftheirvisittothezooortheanimals,whileothersmayconsideritjustsortoffuntohave.Butanywaytheymaynotsharethedeepfeelingsoftheanimals.IfIwereinthesamepositionastheanimalinthezoo,myreactionwouldbeveryseverestronglyagainstbeingphotographed.Nohavingpeacefulsurroundingstosleep,don’tyousufferrestlessandfidgets.Nodoubtwedoandsodotheanimals.Ithinkitnecessarytobantourists’takingpictureswithanimals,makingacomfortableenvironmentforthemtoliveandregardingthemasourfriends,soastofoundharmoniousrelationswithanimals.今年的讀寫任務讓學生就“該不該游客和動物拍照”展開議論。議的寫作有自207年卷以來寫作部分的兩個試題寫作要求上均過于詳細控制程度當然，卷這么做的主要目的無外便于教師閱，收縮考生的思維，不給考生跑題的機會。但是若往深的追問，本題給學的思不多，這個值得考量。三年來，卷已經(jīng)在短文寫作上逐漸形成定勢。（2009.遼寧卷8：00報名：，下周四下午5：002558012028：00報名：，下周四下午5：00【參考范文DearWeareveryhappyannouncethatourcommunityisgoingtoorganizeanactivityforallthecommunitymembers.NextSaturday,wegoingtopickapplesinavillage20kilometersawayfromourtown,andallare e.Wewillmeetat8:00amatthegate,whereabluebuswillbewaiting.Ouroutdooractivitywilllast3hours,andwe’llbebackatabout11o’clock.Ifyouareinterested,pleasesignupattheofficebefore5:00pmnextThursdaysothatwewillmakenecessaryarrangements.Wesuggestthatyoubringwithyouahatandapairofgloves.Wearelookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.Community與考生學習生活或?qū)W校活動無但由于是以小區(qū)為背景所開展的社區(qū)活動空間更為開闊，因此該大體合高考英語作話題的一般思路，可以歸類為外事（2009.浙江卷5月1日，高二（3）班的學生LiYue和ZhangHua去陽光敬老院（Sunshine列要點用英語寫一則100-120個詞的。StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshinetotheStudentVolunteersBroughtSunshinetotheOnMayDay,LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,wenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.Upontheirarrival,LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmly ed,andrespectfully,theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Then,theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweethefloor.Everythingdone,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.Whenitwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave,theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness.Theysaiditwassuchabeautifuldaythattheywouldrememberitforever.LiYueandZhangHuawereveryhappy.Whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives.ByChenJie,School09浙江卷的話題和07卷相似又是是敬老了無新意但這并不就說明該卷乏善可。若從以考生為本的度看，該卷一次出現(xiàn)在題中直接給出漢語拼音人浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問句式的標題作文。例如：“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?”（06，請你圍繞“HowdoyoupreferyourEnglishclassestobetaughtInEnglish（07“Workingeam”（08敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫作。08年僅考了一篇敘事性質(zhì)的寫作。09年，除了繼續(xù)考了敘（2009.重慶卷國外某舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動，正面向全球中學生征集話題。假設你是新華中學的學生華經(jīng)常該現(xiàn)請用英文該發(fā)送一電子郵件向其推話題。100 IamLiHua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourwebsite.Iamveryglad