建議信作文課件講義

DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.

First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHuaDearPeter,HowtowritealetterforadviceHowtowritealetterforadvi如何算是一篇好文章？－覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)－應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯－有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。全卷整潔美觀，書寫端正要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語(yǔ)言地道連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化寫作攻略1.建議信是向收信人對(duì)某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。2建議信有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。3建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。寫作攻略常用句式A．建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)1．AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter3.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----4.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithon…andI’lltrytomakesomesuggestions.5.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.....常用句式A．建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.5.Isuggestthat…6.Youwouldbetterdo/notdo…7.Youmayconsiderdoing…

first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．B.表達(dá)建議（body）C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceinto

account/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouw篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容：首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。結(jié)尾段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要注意有禮貌使讀者容易接受。注意事項(xiàng)：語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對(duì)方感受。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容：DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

(引出主題). Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto

.Then,italsohelpsto

.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato

.Youcanalso

.(此三句不同的句式提出建議) Asto

,Isuggest

(有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面).Inaddition,

(其他建議).I'msure

(預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心). I'mlookingforwardto

(表達(dá)愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHuaDearBob,Dear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙見(jiàn)),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXXDear____,假如你朋友Jim是多年的煙民，現(xiàn)身體不適，所以你想寫一封給他建議他戒煙。Task1假如你朋友Jim是多年的煙民，現(xiàn)身體不適，所以你想寫一封給他1.首段：寫信的目的Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.1.首段：寫信的目的Afterreadingyourl2.主體：關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議

主題句+建議：意志；參與有益活動(dòng),遠(yuǎn)離煙友2.主體：關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議主題句2.關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議

主題句：Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Abouthowtostopsmoking,hereareafewsuggestions.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.2.關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議主題句：Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.建議信作文課件講義3.結(jié)尾Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.

3.結(jié)尾Ihopeyou’llfindtheseDearJim，Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.DearJim，Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.yourssincerely,XXX

假如你是營(yíng)養(yǎng)師Mr.Li,李華向你寫信咨詢有關(guān)如何保持健康的建議：1.健康的重要性2.如何保持健康Task2假如你是營(yíng)養(yǎng)師Mr.Li,李華向你寫信咨詢有關(guān)如何保持健康DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtokeephealthy.Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.

Astheproverbsays,“Nooneknowsthevalueofhealthuntilhelosesit”.Inotherwords,

nothingismoreimportantthanhealth.Goodhealthisbeneficialtoyourworkandstudy.Buthowtokeephealthy?HereIwanttogiveyousomeadvice.First,youshouldhavearegularlife:gotobedandgetupearly.Second,keepahealthyandbalanceddiet:eatmorevegetablesandfruitsandotherfoodfullofenergyandfiber;eataslittlesugarandoilyfoodaspossible.Don’teatfoodwhichhasgonebad.Third,getridofthebadhabitssuchassmoking,drinkingorstayinguptoolate.Physicalexercisecanmakeyourbodystrong,soweshouldexerciseeveryday.

Inaword,healthismorevaluablethananythingelse.Weshoulddoeverythingwecantokeepushealthy.yours,DearLihua,DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtokeephealthy.Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.Asweallknow,healthisveryimportantforeveryone.Withouthealth,it’smoredifficultforustoenjoyahappylife.However,inourlife,noteveryonecanhaveahealthylifestyle.Tobehealthy,weshouldtakeproperexerciseandhaveabalanceddiet.Besides,havingascientifictimetableisalsoverynecessary.Inaddition,we’dbetterdevelopsomegoodhabitsinourdailylifeandkeepawayfromalcoholanddrugs.What’smore,asstudents,weshouldnotbeaddictedtoaddictivecomputergames,whichwilldistractusfromstudy.Inaword,it’sagoodideaforustokeepfit.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveapositivelife.yours,DearLihua,DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtokeephealthy.Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.Asweknow,weteenagersgrowveryfast,soweneedplentyofnutritiousfoods,suchasfishfruitandvegetables.Youshouldnoteattoomuchmeatortoomanysweets.Also,youshouldtakephysicalexerciseregularlyinsteadofstudyingallthetime.Forexample,youcanplaybasketballorswimafterschool.What'smore,havingenoughsleepisveryimportant.SoIadviseyoutohaveatleasteighthoursofsleepeverydayandnottostayuptoolateOnlyinthisway,canyoukeepfit.yours,DearLihua,HomeworkHomework假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信。要點(diǎn)：⑴參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； ⑵看中文書刊、電視； ⑶學(xué)唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中國(guó)朋友。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出。DearPeter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)2.抽煙的危害主題句+危害1234.....Asweallknow,smokingdoesgreatharmtohumanbeings.Firstly,smokingcausesmanyillnessessuchascough,heartdiseaseandthemostseriousillness--lungcancer.Meanwhilesmokingisawasteofmoney.Besides,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires.2.抽煙的危害主題句+危害1234.....激勵(lì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的名言警句

1、聰明的人有長(zhǎng)的耳朵和短的舌頭?！トR格2、重復(fù)是學(xué)習(xí)之母?！掖雀?、當(dāng)你還不能對(duì)自己說(shuō)今天學(xué)到了什么東西時(shí)，你就不要去睡覺(jué)。——利希頓堡4、人天天都學(xué)到一點(diǎn)東西，而往往所學(xué)到的是發(fā)現(xiàn)昨日學(xué)到的是錯(cuò)的。——B.V5、學(xué)到很多東西的訣竅，就是一下子不要學(xué)很多?！蹇?、學(xué)問(wèn)是異常珍貴的東西，從任何源泉吸收都不可恥?！⒉贰と铡しɡ?、學(xué)習(xí)是勞動(dòng)，是充滿思想的勞動(dòng)?！獮跎晁够?、聰明出于勤奮，天才在于積累－－華羅庚9、好學(xué)而不勤問(wèn)非真好學(xué)者。10、書山有路勤為徑，學(xué)海無(wú)涯苦作舟。11、人的大腦和肢體一樣，多用則靈，不用則廢－茅以升12、你想成為幸福的人嗎？但愿你首先學(xué)會(huì)吃得起苦－－屠格涅夫13、成功＝艱苦勞動(dòng)＋正確方法＋少說(shuō)空話－－愛(ài)因斯坦14、不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨，怎能見(jiàn)彩虹－《真心英雄》15、只有登上山頂，才能看到那邊的風(fēng)光。16只會(huì)幻想而不行動(dòng)的人，永遠(yuǎn)也體會(huì)不到收獲果實(shí)時(shí)的喜悅。17、勤奮是你生命的密碼，能譯出你一部壯麗的史詩(shī)。

18．暗自傷心，不如立即行動(dòng)．

19．挫折時(shí)，要像大樹(shù)一樣，被砍了，還能再長(zhǎng)；也要像雜草一樣，雖讓人踐踏，但還能勇敢地活下去．

20．隨隨便便浪費(fèi)的時(shí)間，再也不能贏回來(lái)．

21．成功是優(yōu)點(diǎn)的發(fā)揮，失敗，是缺點(diǎn)的積累．激勵(lì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的名言警句

DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.

First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHuaDearPeter,HowtowritealetterforadviceHowtowritealetterforadvi如何算是一篇好文章？－覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)－應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯－有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。全卷整潔美觀，書寫端正要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語(yǔ)言地道連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化寫作攻略1.建議信是向收信人對(duì)某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。2建議信有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。3建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。寫作攻略常用句式A．建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)1．AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter3.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----4.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithon…andI’lltrytomakesomesuggestions.5.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.....常用句式A．建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.5.Isuggestthat…6.Youwouldbetterdo/notdo…7.Youmayconsiderdoing…

first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．B.表達(dá)建議（body）C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceinto

account/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouw篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容：首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。結(jié)尾段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要注意有禮貌使讀者容易接受。注意事項(xiàng)：語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對(duì)方感受。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容：DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

(引出主題). Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto

.Then,italsohelpsto

.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato

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(預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心). I'mlookingforwardto

(表達(dá)愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHuaDearBob,Dear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙見(jiàn)),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXXDear____,假如你朋友Jim是多年的煙民，現(xiàn)身體不適，所以你想寫一封給他建議他戒煙。Task1假如你朋友Jim是多年的煙民，現(xiàn)身體不適，所以你想寫一封給他1.首段：寫信的目的Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.1.首段：寫信的目的Afterreadingyourl2.主體：關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議

主題句+建議：意志；參與有益活動(dòng),遠(yuǎn)離煙友2.主體：關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議主題句2.關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議

主題句：Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Abouthowtostopsmoking,hereareafewsuggestions.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.2.關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議主題句：Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.建議信作文課件講義3.結(jié)尾Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.

3.結(jié)尾Ihopeyou’llfindtheseDearJim，Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.DearJim，Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.yourssincerely,XXX

假如你是營(yíng)養(yǎng)師Mr.Li,李華向你寫信咨詢有關(guān)如何保持健康的建議：1.健康的重要性2.如何保持健康Task2假如你是營(yíng)養(yǎng)師Mr.Li,李華向你寫信咨詢有關(guān)如何保持健康DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtokeephealthy.Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.

Astheproverbsays,“Nooneknowsthevalueofhealthuntilhelosesit”.Inotherwords,

nothingismoreimportantthanhealth.Goodhealthisbeneficialtoyourworkandstudy.Buthowtokeephealthy?HereIwanttogiveyousomeadvice.First,youshouldhavearegularlife:gotobedandgetupearly.Second,keepahealthyandbalanceddiet:eatmorevegetablesandfruitsandotherfoodfullofenergyandfiber;eataslittlesugarandoilyfoodaspossible.Don’teatfoodwhichhasgonebad.Third,getridofthebadhabitssuchassmoking,drinkingorstayinguptoolate.Physicalexercisecanmakeyourbodystrong,soweshouldexerciseeveryday.

Inaword,healthismorevaluablethananythingelse.Weshoulddoeverythingwecantokeepushealthy.yours,DearLihua,DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtokeephealthy.Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.Asweallknow,healthisveryimportantforeveryone.Withouthealth,it’smoredifficultforustoenjoyahappylife.However,inourlife,noteveryonecanhaveahealthylifestyle.Tobehealthy,weshouldtakeproperexerciseandhaveabalanceddiet.Besides,havingascientifictimetableisalsoverynecessary.Inaddition,we’dbetterdevelopsomegoodhabitsinourdailylifeandkeepawayfromalcoholanddrugs.What’smore,asstudents,weshouldnotbeaddictedtoaddictivecomputergames,whichwilldistractusfromstudy.Inaword,it’sagoodideaforustokeepfit.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveapositivelife.yours,DearLihua,DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourlette