受寵的應(yīng)用文高考英語作文課件

命題形式寫作形式書信類型多為文字提示；半開放性和提綱式書信、電子郵件、日記、通知、海報(bào)、演講稿、歡迎辭等求職信、投訴信、慰問信、建議信、感謝信、道歉信、咨詢信等1命題形式寫作形式書信類型多為文字提示；半開放性和提綱式書信、2011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫作主題具體內(nèi)容要求2011請(qǐng)求學(xué)生會(huì)幫助（求助信）咨詢預(yù)約2012競(jìng)爭(zhēng)參加夏令營(yíng)（推薦信）自我推薦：參加意圖2013請(qǐng)求他人接機(jī)（求助信）人物描寫2014詢問暑假學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃（咨詢信）活動(dòng)信息說明2015向外國(guó)朋友約稿（邀請(qǐng)信）介紹欄目和寫作內(nèi)容22011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫作主題具體內(nèi)記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~3記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~3一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”Thetalentshow,whosethemeis“InnovationsonCampus”(主題)，willtakeplaceinourschoolgym(地點(diǎn))from8:30to11:30amonApril30th(時(shí)間).2.WearescheduledtoattendtheexamonJune7thand8th.3.Recently,inordertoimprovestudents’writingskills,ourschoolwebsitesetupanewcolumncalledEnglishWriting.4.LastFriday,ourclassinvitedanoldcraftsmantoteachushowtomakedoughfigurines,whichwasaimedat/withthepurposeofadvocatingandpromotingtheChineseculture.

或aimingto/hopingto/soasto/inordertodosth

上周五，我們班邀請(qǐng)了一位年老的工藝師來教我們?nèi)绾?/p>

做面人，這旨在倡導(dǎo)和弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化。

4一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”4二、表達(dá)“情緒”1.Hearingthatsomeforeignstudentswillcometoourschoolforculturalexchange,we’reoverjoyed/more

than

happy/extremely

excited.2.Youcan’timaginehowexcitedIwastohearthemusicaliscomingtotown.3.SoanxiousamIthatIcan’tfallasleepeverynight.4.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’twaittoopenmygift.

5二、表達(dá)“情緒”5三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”1.Nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.2.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbehelpfultoyou.3.IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,I’lltrytoapplyallI’velearnttomywork.

4.Aslongaswetryourbest,there'snoneedtofeelregretforthesefailures.四、表達(dá)“自信”I’mconfidentthatI’msuitableforthiskindofjob.2.I’msure/convincedthatIcanperfectlyliveupto(不辜負(fù),符合)yourexpectation.

6三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”6五、聯(lián)系方式：

Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasecontactmeat12345678910.六、最后期限：

You’resupposedtopostyourarticletousbefore

May1.七、報(bào)名方式：1)AnyonewhoisinterestedinthisactivityshouldsignupforitbeforeMay1.2)Thosewho

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incancometoStudents’UnionorcontactusbeforeMay1.

7五、聯(lián)系方式：7其它寫作形式8其它寫作形式8Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫作假定你是中學(xué)生李華。美國(guó)一個(gè)中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)代表團(tuán)即將訪問你校并出席英語周的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求寫一篇?dú)g迎詞。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；

3.表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿。

寫作要求：

1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.稱呼已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)寫歡迎詞正文；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱9Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫作假定你是中DearAmericanGuests,

Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmwelcometoyou.WeareluckyenoughtohaveyouhereinthemiddleofourEnglishWeekActivities.

Asscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.ThepurposeofthisprogramistodevelopourinterestinEnglishlearningandpracticalabilitiesinlisteningandspeaking.Theprogramconsistsofthefollowingactivities:recitation,singing,wordspelling,storytellingandsoon.Theshowwillbeginattwoo’clockthisafternoonattheStudentCentre,lastingthreehours.Dearguests,youarewelcometotakepartinsomeactivities.Ihopewestudentswillbenefitfromyourpresence.Isincerelywishyouapleasanttimewithus.That’sall!

Thankyou.10DearAmericanGuests,10記敘文寫作注意事項(xiàng)：用過去時(shí)，以時(shí)間為線索展開。常用atfirst,afterwards,atthesametime或meanwhile,afterthat,immediately,soon,eventually等。2.避免啰嗦或?qū)懗闪魉~。對(duì)中心事件和最能表現(xiàn)中心思想的地方要詳細(xì)敘述。3.描寫故事的常用句型：Iwasdoing...when...Iwasabouttodo...when...TiredasIfelt,Istillkeptdoing...Amazedat...,I...Notuntil...didIleavethehospital.ThemomentIheardthenews,I...

Onhearingthenews,I...7)Without

hesitation,Irusheduptohimand...8)Heleftwithout

saying

aword.9)Itoccurredtomethat...10)Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.11)Hearing

this,thewholeclassburstintolaughter.12)Twohourshadpassedbeforewerealizedit.13)Eventuallymyhardworkpaid

off.11記敘文寫作注意事項(xiàng)：114.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：1)TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.2)FromthisexperienceIhavelearntthatquestioningcanserveasabridgethathelpsustoseekthetruth.3)Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,it

alsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.4)NotuntilthendidIrealizethatwordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegative.5)OnlythendidIcometorealizethatitwashissuggestionsthathelpedmeovercomethesetbacksandachievemygoal.124.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：12

[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'mproudof”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情。要求如下：1.記述事情經(jīng)過；2.簡(jiǎn)要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。OnethingI'mproudofOnepossibleversion：OnethingI'mproudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskilfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpractisinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfilourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”13[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'm

近期某網(wǎng)站就校車安全問題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下圖。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖示向你的美國(guó)朋友David介紹介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)2.對(duì)校車的擔(dān)憂3.你的看法Recently,asurveyonschoolbuseshasbeenconductedonawebsite.圖表題寫作14近期某網(wǎng)站就校車安全問題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下圖。請(qǐng)Recently,asurveyonschoolbuses(主題)hasbeenconductedonawebsite(范圍/對(duì)象).Now,I’mwritingtotellyousomerelevantinformationaboutit.Ascanbeseenfromthechart,only36.13%oftheintervieweestrustschoolbuses,while40.34%ofthemshowtheirdistrust.Andstill,23.53%ofthemarenotclearaboutit.Therearesomegoodreasonsaccountingfortheirdisbelief.Firstly,theyareafraidofabandonedvehiclesbeingused.

Theyalsoworrythatschoolbuseswillbeoverloaded,sayingthatitmayleadtoserioustrafficaccidents.Inaddition,intheireyes,someschoolbusesarenotequippedwithsafetyequipmentlikesafetybelts.Frommyperspective,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoensurethesafetyofstudents.Yours,LiHuaDearDavid,15Recently,asurveyonscho怎樣使文章更精彩？16怎樣使文章更精彩？16失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面語法使用不準(zhǔn)確英語表述不得體詞匯句式不豐富表達(dá)啰嗦不簡(jiǎn)潔行文邏輯不連貫卷面馬虎不整潔,書寫不規(guī)范寫作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)確、連貫17失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面寫作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)具體做法：1.高級(jí)詞匯2.帶情感的副詞3.短語代替單詞4.高級(jí)句式5.連詞6.連貫詞18具體做法：181.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語代替單詞)lookatmewatch—2)agood/niceman—3)can’tfindany

way

to

solve

theproblem

fail

tofindasolutiontotheproblem4)Ourschoollifewillbedifficult.--5)Ifwenevergiveup,wemaysucceedfinally.Aslongas...,wearemorelikelytoachievesuccessintheend.6)Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant....isalsoofimportance.7)Moreandmorestudentstaketheirphonetoschool.Anincreasingnumberofstudents...8)AsthenumberofEnglishlearnersisincreasing，it’snotdifficultforthemtounderstandthesewordsinChinesecontexts.ontheriseglance

atkind-hearted/generous/easy-goingchallenging191.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語代替單詞)glanceat常見高級(jí)寫作詞匯必備1．第一first→tobegin/startwith2．第二second→inaddition/what’smore3．第三，最后finally→lastbutnotleast4．總之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary5．但是but→however6．機(jī)會(huì)chance→opportunity7．選擇choice→alternative8．考慮consider→takeintoaccount/consideration9．充足enough→adequate10．影響effect→influence常見高級(jí)寫作詞匯必備11．最終finally→eventually12．勤奮hardworking→diligent13．幫助help→assist14．后果result→consequence15．應(yīng)該should→besupposedto16．缺點(diǎn)shortcoming→drawback17．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout18．可用useful→available19．使用use→employ/makeuseof20．種類繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof11．最終finally→eventually21．也；和aswellas→inadditionto/apartfrom22．反對(duì)beagainst→objectto23．厭煩beboredwith→befedupwith24．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with25．發(fā)生happen→occur/comeabout26．幾乎不hardly→barely27．提高improve→promote28．重要important→vital29．立即immediately→inaflash30．不可能impossible→outofthequestion21．也；和aswellas→inaddition31．有趣interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing32．參加join→participate33．幸運(yùn)lucky→fortunate34．巨大large→enormous35．許多many→alargequantityof36．明顯obvious→apparent37．豐富rich→abundant38．小心謹(jǐn)慎becareful→becautious39．與……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom40．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo31．有趣interesting→absorbing/st41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof42．聞名befamousfor→haveareputationfor43．正在建設(shè)beingbuilt→underconstruction44．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease45．在我看來inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned46．美化學(xué)校makeourschoolbeautiful→beautifyourschool47．故意onpurpose→deliberately/bydesign48．置若罔聞refusetolistento→turnadeafearto49．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit50．無法描述的美麗toobeautifultodescribe→beautybeyonddescription41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awell-behavedchild52．節(jié)能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergy→anenergy-savinghouse53．一位受到良好教育的婦女a(chǎn)womanwhohasreceivedgoodeducation→awell-educatedwoman54．精心組織的活動(dòng)anactivitythatisorganizedwell→awell-organizedactivity55．一個(gè)愛好和平的人apersonwholovespeace→apeace-lovingperson51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子2.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞Youpatientlytaughtmehowtowritearticles.2)Here,I’mwritingtothankyouforsendingme

suchawonderfulgiftandgiveyouaspecialgiftinreturn.3)Thankyouforyourgeneroushelp.4)Unfortunately,Ilostmywalletonmywayhome.262.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞263.使用狀語，with/by/despite/inspiteof/becauseof/asaresultof等介詞短語,帶高級(jí)詞匯的目的狀語例：Igotothelibrary.Afterschool/Duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoborrowsomebooks.

Inordertomeetthedemandsofbroadeningmyhorizonandenrichingmyknowledge,afterschool/duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoreadbooks,newspapersandmagazines.

273.使用狀語，with/by/despite/inspittobroadenone’shorizontoenrichone’knowledge/schoollifetomeetthedemandsoftogetclosetonaturetorelaxone’brainstobuildupconfidencetobeautifytheenvironmenttogetabetterunderstandingof2828(1)合并句子(豐富結(jié)構(gòu))●_________canIimprovemyoralEnglish__________Ilearnsomecustomsinwesterncountries.●_____________，theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons.______________，theycanenrichmylifeandprovidemewithgreatfun.(2)改變語態(tài)(避免單調(diào))●Besides，Iamabook-loverandthebooks______________thattheyareasgoodasnew.(3)使用省略(達(dá)到言簡(jiǎn)意賅的效果)●Ifso/possible，pleasekeepquietaboutitbecausewewanttogivehimasurprise.NotonlyForonethingbutalsoForanotheraresowellkept4.高級(jí)句式(1)合并句子(豐富結(jié)構(gòu))NotonlyForonet(4)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型(突出語意)●______________________________________affectthechildren’shealthydevelopment.(5)使用倒裝句(增強(qiáng)說服力)●__________________________________________________adifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.(6)使用虛擬語氣(提出建議，委婉表達(dá)，易于接受)●Shewouldhaveneverthoughtacompletesurprisewaswaitingforher.(7)使用with結(jié)構(gòu)(豐富句式)●Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring，_________________________________________．ItisoverprotectionandtoomuchcarethatOnlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakewiththesunshiningandbirdssinging(4)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型(突出語意)Itisoverprote(8)使用狀語從句(強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語或句子)●_______________________________，theywerealwaysavailable.

(9)使用定語從句(表意豐富)●However，Iwasbusypreparingformyfinalexamatthattime，__________________________________．(10)使用名詞性從句(體現(xiàn)扎實(shí)的語言功底)●______________________________________childrenarethefocusoffamilies，shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.WheneverIhaddifficultieswhichwasofvitalimportanceformeItshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthat(8)使用狀語從句(強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語或句子)WheneverIh(11)使用非謂語動(dòng)詞(不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞以及動(dòng)名詞的使用，可使句式多樣化)●What’sworse，theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake，___________________________________________________．●Thesedays，________________________________arenotuncommon，______________________lifeandtheenvironment.totallyignoringthenoticeablesignNoLitteringnearbybreakingtrafficrulesandlitteringcausingseriousharmto(11)使用非謂語動(dòng)詞(不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞以及動(dòng)名詞多種表達(dá)明天在會(huì)上要討論的問題很重要。

(簡(jiǎn)單句)Theproblemisveryimportant.Itwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrow.（并列句）Theproblemisveryimportantand/soitwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrow.（定語從句）Theproblemwhichwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrowisveryimportant.（非謂語作定語）Theproblemtobediscussedatthemeetingtomorrowisveryimportant.（句型：結(jié)果狀語）Theproblemissoimportantthatitwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrow.33多種表達(dá)335.常用的過渡句式(黑體部分)：Firstly,...What’smore/Moreover,...Mostimportantly,...Obviously,agoodlearninghabitcanhelpustospeeduptoreachourdestinations.4)Tomakemattersworse/what’sworse/Worsestill，it

becamedark.

5)Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.6)TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.7)Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon’tcherishwildlife.8)Frommyperspective,theystandforlove，friendshipandunity.

9)However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.5.常用的過渡句式(黑體部分)：英語演講比賽英語辯論賽英語才藝表演英語話劇表演英語歌唱英語詩歌朗誦

講英語故事

激發(fā)英語興趣

提高英語水平英語口語書面英語1.Englishspeechcontest2.Englishdebate3.EnglishTalentShow4.Englishplay5.singingEnglishsongs6.Englishpoemrecitation7.storytelling8.stimulate/motivatetheirinterestinlearningEnglishimprovetheirEnglishlevelspoken/oralEnglishwrittenEnglish與英語有關(guān)的表達(dá)35英語演講比賽1.Englishspeechcontest命題形式寫作形式書信類型多為文字提示；半開放性和提綱式書信、電子郵件、日記、通知、海報(bào)、演講稿、歡迎辭等求職信、投訴信、慰問信、建議信、感謝信、道歉信、咨詢信等36命題形式寫作形式書信類型多為文字提示；半開放性和提綱式書信、2011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫作主題具體內(nèi)容要求2011請(qǐng)求學(xué)生會(huì)幫助（求助信）咨詢預(yù)約2012競(jìng)爭(zhēng)參加夏令營(yíng)（推薦信）自我推薦：參加意圖2013請(qǐng)求他人接機(jī)（求助信）人物描寫2014詢問暑假學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃（咨詢信）活動(dòng)信息說明2015向外國(guó)朋友約稿（邀請(qǐng)信）介紹欄目和寫作內(nèi)容372011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫作主題具體內(nèi)記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~38記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~3一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”Thetalentshow,whosethemeis“InnovationsonCampus”(主題)，willtakeplaceinourschoolgym(地點(diǎn))from8:30to11:30amonApril30th(時(shí)間).2.WearescheduledtoattendtheexamonJune7thand8th.3.Recently,inordertoimprovestudents’writingskills,ourschoolwebsitesetupanewcolumncalledEnglishWriting.4.LastFriday,ourclassinvitedanoldcraftsmantoteachushowtomakedoughfigurines,whichwasaimedat/withthepurposeofadvocatingandpromotingtheChineseculture.

或aimingto/hopingto/soasto/inordertodosth

上周五，我們班邀請(qǐng)了一位年老的工藝師來教我們?nèi)绾?/p>

做面人，這旨在倡導(dǎo)和弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化。

39一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”4二、表達(dá)“情緒”1.Hearingthatsomeforeignstudentswillcometoourschoolforculturalexchange,we’reoverjoyed/more

than

happy/extremely

excited.2.Youcan’timaginehowexcitedIwastohearthemusicaliscomingtotown.3.SoanxiousamIthatIcan’tfallasleepeverynight.4.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’twaittoopenmygift.

40二、表達(dá)“情緒”5三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”1.Nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.2.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbehelpfultoyou.3.IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,I’lltrytoapplyallI’velearnttomywork.

4.Aslongaswetryourbest,there'snoneedtofeelregretforthesefailures.四、表達(dá)“自信”I’mconfidentthatI’msuitableforthiskindofjob.2.I’msure/convincedthatIcanperfectlyliveupto(不辜負(fù),符合)yourexpectation.

41三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”6五、聯(lián)系方式：

Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasecontactmeat12345678910.六、最后期限：

You’resupposedtopostyourarticletousbefore

May1.七、報(bào)名方式：1)AnyonewhoisinterestedinthisactivityshouldsignupforitbeforeMay1.2)Thosewho

wouldliketoroll

incancometoStudents’UnionorcontactusbeforeMay1.

42五、聯(lián)系方式：7其它寫作形式43其它寫作形式8Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫作假定你是中學(xué)生李華。美國(guó)一個(gè)中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)代表團(tuán)即將訪問你校并出席英語周的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求寫一篇?dú)g迎詞。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；

3.表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿。

寫作要求：

1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.稱呼已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)寫歡迎詞正文；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱44Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫作假定你是中DearAmericanGuests,

Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmwelcometoyou.WeareluckyenoughtohaveyouhereinthemiddleofourEnglishWeekActivities.

Asscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.ThepurposeofthisprogramistodevelopourinterestinEnglishlearningandpracticalabilitiesinlisteningandspeaking.Theprogramconsistsofthefollowingactivities:recitation,singing,wordspelling,storytellingandsoon.Theshowwillbeginattwoo’clockthisafternoonattheStudentCentre,lastingthreehours.Dearguests,youarewelcometotakepartinsomeactivities.Ihopewestudentswillbenefitfromyourpresence.Isincerelywishyouapleasanttimewithus.That’sall!

Thankyou.45DearAmericanGuests,10記敘文寫作注意事項(xiàng)：用過去時(shí)，以時(shí)間為線索展開。常用atfirst,afterwards,atthesametime或meanwhile,afterthat,immediately,soon,eventually等。2.避免啰嗦或?qū)懗闪魉~。對(duì)中心事件和最能表現(xiàn)中心思想的地方要詳細(xì)敘述。3.描寫故事的常用句型：Iwasdoing...when...Iwasabouttodo...when...TiredasIfelt,Istillkeptdoing...Amazedat...,I...Notuntil...didIleavethehospital.ThemomentIheardthenews,I...

Onhearingthenews,I...7)Without

hesitation,Irusheduptohimand...8)Heleftwithout

saying

aword.9)Itoccurredtomethat...10)Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.11)Hearing

this,thewholeclassburstintolaughter.12)Twohourshadpassedbeforewerealizedit.13)Eventuallymyhardworkpaid

off.46記敘文寫作注意事項(xiàng)：114.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：1)TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.2)FromthisexperienceIhavelearntthatquestioningcanserveasabridgethathelpsustoseekthetruth.3)Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,it

alsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.4)NotuntilthendidIrealizethatwordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegative.5)OnlythendidIcometorealizethatitwashissuggestionsthathelpedmeovercomethesetbacksandachievemygoal.474.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：12

[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'mproudof”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情。要求如下：1.記述事情經(jīng)過；2.簡(jiǎn)要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。OnethingI'mproudofOnepossibleversion：OnethingI'mproudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskilfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpractisinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfilourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”48[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'm

近期某網(wǎng)站就校車安全問題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下圖。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖示向你的美國(guó)朋友David介紹介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)2.對(duì)校車的擔(dān)憂3.你的看法Recently,asurveyonschoolbuseshasbeenconductedonawebsite.圖表題寫作49近期某網(wǎng)站就校車安全問題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下圖。請(qǐng)Recently,asurveyonschoolbuses(主題)hasbeenconductedonawebsite(范圍/對(duì)象).Now,I’mwritingtotellyousomerelevantinformationaboutit.Ascanbeseenfromthechart,only36.13%oftheintervieweestrustschoolbuses,while40.34%ofthemshowtheirdistrust.Andstill,23.53%ofthemarenotclearaboutit.Therearesomegoodreasonsaccountingfortheirdisbelief.Firstly,theyareafraidofabandonedvehiclesbeingused.

Theyalsoworrythatschoolbuseswillbeoverloaded,sayingthatitmayleadtoserioustrafficaccidents.Inaddition,intheireyes,someschoolbusesarenotequippedwithsafetyequipmentlikesafetybelts.Frommyperspective,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoensurethesafetyofstudents.Yours,LiHuaDearDavid,50Recently,asurveyonscho怎樣使文章更精彩？51怎樣使文章更精彩？16失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面語法使用不準(zhǔn)確英語表述不得體詞匯句式不豐富表達(dá)啰嗦不簡(jiǎn)潔行文邏輯不連貫卷面馬虎不整潔,書寫不規(guī)范寫作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)確、連貫52失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面寫作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)具體做法：1.高級(jí)詞匯2.帶情感的副詞3.短語代替單詞4.高級(jí)句式5.連詞6.連貫詞53具體做法：181.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語代替單詞)lookatmewatch—2)agood/niceman—3)can’tfindany

way

to

solve

theproblem

fail

tofindasolutiontotheproblem4)Ourschoollifewillbedifficult.--5)Ifwenevergiveup,wemaysucceedfinally.Aslongas...,wearemorelikelytoachievesuccessintheend.6)Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant....isalsoofimportance.7)Moreandmorestudentstaketheirphonetoschool.Anincreasingnumberofstudents...8)AsthenumberofEnglishlearnersisincreasing，it’snotdifficultforthemtounderstandthesewordsinChinesecontexts.ontheriseglance

atkind-hearted/generous/easy-goingchallenging541.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語代替單詞)glanceat常見高級(jí)寫作詞匯必備1．第一first→tobegin/startwith2．第二second→inaddition/what’smore3．第三，最后finally→lastbutnotleast4．總之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary5．但是but→however6．機(jī)會(huì)chance→opportunity7．選擇choice→alternative8．考慮consider→takeintoaccount/consideration9．充足enough→adequate10．影響effect→influence常見高級(jí)寫作詞匯必備11．最終finally→eventually12．勤奮hardworking→diligent13．幫助help→assist14．后果result→consequence15．應(yīng)該should→besupposedto16．缺點(diǎn)shortcoming→drawback17．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout18．可用useful→available19．使用use→employ/makeuseof20．種類繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof11．最終finally→eventually21．也；和aswellas→inadditionto/apartfrom22．反對(duì)beagainst→objectto23．厭煩beboredwith→befedupwith24．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with25．發(fā)生happen→occur/comeabout26．幾乎不hardly→barely27．提高improve→promote28．重要important→vital29．立即immediately→inaflash30．不可能impossible→outofthequestion21．也；和aswellas→inaddition31．有趣interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing32．參加join→participate33．幸運(yùn)lucky→fortunate34．巨大large→enormous35．許多many→alargequantityof36．明顯obvious→apparent37．豐富rich→abundant38．小心謹(jǐn)慎becareful→becautious39．與……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom40．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo31．有趣interesting→absorbing/st41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof42．聞名befamousfor→haveareputationfor43．正在建設(shè)beingbuilt→underconstruction44．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease45．在我看來inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned46．美化學(xué)校makeourschoolbeautiful→beautifyourschool47．故意onpurpose→deliberately/bydesign48．置若罔聞refusetolistento→turnadeafearto49．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit50．無法描述的美麗toobeautifultodescribe→beautybeyonddescription41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awell-behavedchild52．節(jié)能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergy→anenergy-savinghouse53．一位受到良好教育的婦女a(chǎn)womanwhohasreceivedgoodeducation→awell-educatedwoman54．精心組織的活動(dòng)anactivitythatisorganizedwell→awell-organizedactivity55．一個(gè)愛好和平的人apersonwholovespeace→apeace-lovingperson51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子2.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞Youpatientlytaughtmehowtowritearticles.2)Here,I’mwritingtothankyouforsendingme

suchawonderfulgiftandgiveyouaspecialgiftinreturn.3)Thankyouforyourgeneroushelp.4)Unfortunately,Ilostmywalletonmywayhome.612.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞263.使用狀語，with/by/despite/inspiteof/becauseof/asaresultof等介詞短語,帶高級(jí)詞匯的目的狀語例：Igotothelibrary.Afterschool/Duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoborrowsomebooks.

Inordertomeetthedemandsofbroadeningmyhorizonandenrichingmyknowledge,afterschool/duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoreadbooks,newspapersandmagazines.

623.使用狀語，with/by/despite/inspittobroadenone’shorizontoenrichone’knowledge/schoollifetomeetthedemandsoftogetclosetonaturetorelaxone’brainstobuildupconfidencetobeautifytheenvironmenttogetabetterunderstandingof6328(1)合并句子(豐富結(jié)構(gòu))●_________canIimprovemyoralEnglish__________Ilearnsomecustomsinwesterncountries.●_____________，theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons.__________