高中英語(yǔ)人教版選擇性必修第一UNIT2USINGLANGUAGEWRITING教案-

TeachingPlanforWriting：Anopinionessayaboutchangescausedbytechnology

(Unit2LookingintotheFuture)LeaminqobjectivesToexpressideasofthechangesthatcouldbecausedbyadvancesintechnology;Tolearntowriteanessayonyourpointofview.TeachingProceduresStepLWhat一般來說，觀點(diǎn)看法類文章的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系十分清晰，它除了考查學(xué)生的英文基礎(chǔ)，還考查學(xué)生的邏輯能力。具體來說就是上下文的銜接過渡和文章層次的表達(dá)。Step2.How［基本框架］.首段：提出觀點(diǎn)或有爭(zhēng)議的觀點(diǎn)(一般提出兩個(gè)相對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)然后客觀地對(duì)其進(jìn)行評(píng)析)。.中段：展開論述，可用主題句來點(diǎn)明論點(diǎn)，并對(duì)論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行比擬和比照、分析和評(píng)論。.尾段：對(duì)所論述觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行客觀、合理的評(píng)論，提出自己的看法、建議；或者也可以將不同觀點(diǎn)相互融合，選其可取之處，形成自己獨(dú)到的觀點(diǎn)。考前須知：.觀點(diǎn)鮮明。.層次要清楚，過渡要自然。.通常采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。.語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔有力，一般不采用口語(yǔ)。［常用詞塊］anincreasingnumberofpeople越來越多的人inreactiontothephenomenon針對(duì)這——現(xiàn)象begintorealize...開始意識(shí)到arousepublicconcernnationwide引起了全國(guó)公眾的關(guān)注alongwiththedevelopmentof…隨著的開展itgoeswithoutsaying不言而口俞asfarasIamconcerned就我而言oneoftheimportantdisadvantages最重要的缺點(diǎn)之一tomakemattersworse更糟糕的是lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的是becomemoreandmoreserious變得越來越嚴(yán)重ontheonehand...ontheotherhand???一方面另一方面givepeoplemorepleasure給人帶來更多的快樂theabovementionedreasons上述原因throughaboveanalyses通過以上分析［常用語(yǔ)句］★精彩開頭Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat...Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.有一個(gè)廣泛引起關(guān)注的問題……。但眾所周知有關(guān)這個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題的觀點(diǎn)因人而異。Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer...,becauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.現(xiàn)如今很多人更喜歡……，因?yàn)樗谖覀兩钪邪缪萘艘粋€(gè)重要的角色。Nowadays,therearemoreandmorestudentsbecomingshort-sighted.現(xiàn)在，越來越多的學(xué)生近視了?！镎募丫銹eople,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.然而在這個(gè)話題上人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同。Generallyspeaking,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.總的來說，優(yōu)點(diǎn)如下。Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.但凡事都有利有弊。消極的一面也是很明顯的。Weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.我們應(yīng)該采取一系列的措施來解決這個(gè)處境?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.只有用這種方法，我們才能解決這個(gè)問題。It'shightimethatwedidsomethingtoimproveourenvironment.該是我們?yōu)楦纳骗h(huán)境做些事情的時(shí)候了。Consequently,I'mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingus.因此，我相信一個(gè)嶄新的未來正在等待著我們。Step3.Demonstrate假如你是李華，學(xué)校論壇英文版想邀請(qǐng)你寫一篇介紹微信(WeChat)利弊的文章，刊登在論壇上。要點(diǎn)如下：.微信的益處；.微信的弊端；.你的看法。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右：.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。一、審題定調(diào).確定體裁:本次寫作是篇短文,內(nèi)容為微信的利弊。.確定人稱:由于是介紹微信，所以要以第三人稱為主。.確定時(shí)態(tài):由于對(duì)微信進(jìn)行客觀介紹，所以以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。二、謀篇布局本文分為三個(gè)段落。第一段:說明微信受歡迎,但要客觀看待微信；第二段:益處一一微信拉近了人們之間的距離;可以找到傾訴心事的朋友。弊端一一有虛假信息，容易讓人上當(dāng)受騙。第三段：自己的觀點(diǎn)一一合理利用微信。三、常用語(yǔ)塊

moreandmorepeople越來越多的人becomeaddictedto對(duì)上癮shortenthedistancebetweenpeople縮短了人們之間的距離nomatterwhere無論在哪里telloursecrets告知我們的秘密resultin導(dǎo)致spendtoomuchtimeon在……上花費(fèi)太多時(shí)間asfarasIamconcerned就我而言u(píng)seitproperly合理利用四、遣詞造句Possibleversion:普通表達(dá)高級(jí)表達(dá)?Wecaneasilygetintouchwithourfriends.?Wecanfindfriendstoshareoursecrets.SomeinformationwhichofferedonWeChatisfalseandpeoplemaybecheated.SomepeoplespendtoomuchtimeonWeChatwhichgreatlyinfluencestheirnormallife.Inmyopinion,WeChatisconvenientbutweshoulduseitproperly.?Nomatterwherewearewecaneasilygetintouchwithourfriends.?Wecanfindfriendstowhomwecantelloursecrets.SomeinformationofferedonWeChatisfalseanditmayresultinpeoplebeingcheated.SomepeoplespendtoomuchtimeonWeChat,greatlyinfluencingtheirnormallife.AsfarasIamconcerned,WeChatisconvenientbutweshoulduseitproperly.MoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtouseWechatandsomehaveevenbecomeaddictedtoit.However,WeChatisadobule-edgedsword,whichhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Tobefrank,WeChatreallyshortensthedistancebetweenpeople.Nomatterwhereweare,wecaneasilygetintouchwithourfriends.Besides,wecanfindfriendstowhomwecantelloursecrets.However,italsohasdisadvantages.First,someinformationofferedonWeChatisfalseanditmayresultinpeoplebeingcheated.Second,somepeoplespendtoomuchtimeonWeChat,greatlyinfluencingtheirnormallife.Frommypersonalperspective,WeChatisindeedconvenientbutweshoulduseitproperly.Step4.Drill假如你是李華，你班同學(xué)最近參加了某報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：要不要克隆人類。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社編輯投稿，客觀地介紹討論情況。大約35%的同學(xué)支持克隆.克隆人很有趣，可以使人復(fù)生.給人帶來更多的快樂.可以克隆一些著名科學(xué)家，為人類做更多的事情大約65%的同學(xué)不支持克隆.克隆人會(huì)引發(fā)道德問題.每個(gè)人是不同的，被克隆的人只不過是復(fù)制品.克隆人會(huì)不時(shí)地被壞人所利用你的觀點(diǎn)現(xiàn)在很難說克隆人類是對(duì)還是不對(duì)Recentlywehavehadadiscussiononwhetherweshouldclonehumans.Possibleversion:Recentlywehavehadadiscussiononwhetherweshouldclonehumans.35percentofthestudentsthinkcloninghumansisinterestingandcanbringpeoplebacktolife.ltcanmaketheworldmoreinterestingandgivepeoplemorepleasure.Besides,wecanclonesomefamousscientistssothattheycandomorethingsforushumans.65percentofthestudentsholdtheviewthatitisamoralquestiontoclonehumans.Eachofusdifferswhileaclonedpersonismerelyacopy.Fromtimetotime,clonedpeoplemaybetakenadvantageofbysomeevilpersons.Inmyopinion,whethercloninghumansisrightornotisdifficulttosayrightnow.Perhapswewilljusthavetowaitandsee.Step5.Assigmneiit現(xiàn)在,網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物正在被越來越多的消費(fèi)者所接受。但是，由網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物引發(fā)的問題也引起了人們的高度關(guān)注。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，分析網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利與弊,并簡(jiǎn)述自己的觀點(diǎn)。網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物利弊你的觀點(diǎn)?方便快捷?價(jià)格廉價(jià)?產(chǎn)品種類多?質(zhì)量無法保證?容易上當(dāng)受騙Reflection:Possibleversion:WiththespreadoftheInternet,moreandmorepeopleprefergoingshoppingonline.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.WecanbuythingsontheInternetwithoutleavingourhouses.Shoppingonlinecansavealotoftimeforus.What'smore,therearemanydifferentkindsofgoodsforustochoosefrom,whichmaybecheaperthanthoseinrealshops.However,shoppingonlinealsocausesus