人教版英語必修一-Unit1-Writing-建議性寫作優(yōu)質(zhì)課件

1、Unit 1 FriendshipUnit 1 FriendshipHow to write a letter for adviceHow to write a letter for adviTo write a letter as an editor to give advice on how to communicate with peopleTo write a letter as an editorMiss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the let

2、ter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.Reading and writingMiss Wang has received a letteDear Miss Wang,Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem, Im not very good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends

3、with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. Dear Miss Wang,I do want to change this situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Yours, Xiao DongI do want to change this situaRead the letter and answer the questions. What problem does Xiao Dong have? 2. What

4、 is Xiao Dong asking for? He is not good at communicating with people and cant make good friends with them. He is asking for some advice to change the situation.Read the letter and answer theMake a list of your ideas to change the situation and give your reasons. Make a list of your ideas to cIdeasW

5、hy1. to ask people their likes and dislikesto find the classmates with the same interests2. to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideasto get to know different people and let them see you are friendly3. IdeasWhy1. to ask people their建議信是書信的一種形式，屬于應(yīng)用文。建議信是寫信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建議或忠告，有可能是

6、寫給個(gè)人，就收信人遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等方面提出建議或忠告。建議信是書信的一種形式，屬于應(yīng)用文。建議信是寫信人向收信人就【寫作指導(dǎo)】首段：一般指明提建議的初衷。 中段：圍繞問題，婉轉(zhuǎn)地提出有針對(duì)性且具有說服性的建議。注意充分考慮對(duì)方的實(shí)際情況，表達(dá)時(shí)用語要得體。 尾段：簡單予以希望。希望自己的建議能對(duì)對(duì)方有所幫助，同時(shí)闡明你所提供的建議僅供對(duì)方參考?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】注意： 時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。 由于是給別人提出建議，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第二人稱為主。語言要委婉、精煉，同時(shí)要簡潔，表達(dá)清楚。注意：【常用表達(dá)】建議信開頭：1.You have as

7、ked me for my advice on . and I will try to make some suggestions.2.Thanks for trusting me. Its my great pleasure to give you some suggestions / advice / tips on .【常用表達(dá)】Im sorry to hear / learn that . However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Im sorry (that) you are having trou

8、ble / difficulty / problems in . I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.Id like to offer you some advice.Im sorry to hear / learn that表達(dá)建議:I would like to suggest that . If I were you, I would .As far as I am concerned . / In my opinion . It seems better that .Why not .? It would be

9、a good idea if . For one thing ., for another . In the first place / Firstly / First . Secondly / Second . Last but not least (最后但不是最不重要的) .表達(dá)建議:建議信結(jié)尾:These are only my personal suggestions / tips. I hope you will find them useful / helpful.I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in further

10、 detail.Im willing to discuss this matter with you whenever .I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / suggestions / tips.I hope .建議信結(jié)尾:Dear Xiao Dong, Im glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about _ (建議主題）. The following is my advice. 建議信寫作模板Dear Xiao Dong, 建議信寫作模板In m

11、y opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions, _（建議的內(nèi)容）.In my opinion, you would be wiI hope you will find these proposals _, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for _.Yours Sincerely, usefulfurther detailsI hope you will find these proDear Peter, Im glad to receive you

12、r letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few constructive suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and maga

13、zines in Chinese whenever possible. Furthermore, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. Im quite sure that they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chines

14、e. I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Best wishes.Yours,Li HuaDear Peter,人教版英語必修一-Unit1-Writing-建議性寫作優(yōu)質(zhì)課件Its a good habit for you to keep a diary. It can help you remember past events. You can express your feelings an

15、d thoughts in it. It will help you improve your English if you keep a diary in English. Why not have a try?Learning tipIts a good habit for you to k假如你是某外國語學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，開學(xué)之初，你的外教Mr. Smith希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請按以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封信。1.對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；2.自己目前的英語水平；3.自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題；4.對(duì)英語教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議。假如你是某外國語學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，開學(xué)之初，你的外教M

16、r. S注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr. Smith,I am very happy to have you as our English teacher. _注意：One possible version:Dear Mr. Smith, I am very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering Engl

17、ish means we can see the world through a new window. My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorise new words. Ano

18、ther suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help. Thank you! Li HuaOne possible version:人教版英語必修一-Unit1-Writing-建議性寫作優(yōu)質(zhì)課件1.高考作文不同于“自由寫作”高考作文為了達(dá)到一定的考察目的，考生要“根據(jù)要求寫作”，在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上鼓勵(lì)考生發(fā)揮想象和聯(lián)想寫出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要寫好高考作文，既不能不顧寫作要求信馬由韁，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏腳。2.而要既符合要求，又要有張揚(yáng)個(gè)性的出彩的地方。所以說高考作文不是自由寫作，既有限制又有開放的空間，既有考生必須完成的規(guī)定動(dòng)作又要有彰顯特色的自選動(dòng)作。3.一篇議論文如果能有幾個(gè)聯(lián)系密切并具有較強(qiáng)論證力度的主體段，那就會(huì)增加論證的深度、廣度和厚度，頗具層次感，使議論文富有說服力。因此，同學(xué)們寫好議論文的主體段至關(guān)重要。4.出現(xiàn)大量的敘述文字，而缺少相應(yīng)的議論性語言點(diǎn)睛，給人以羅列事例或者啰嗦敘事的感覺，并且暴露自己欠缺