中考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)-寫作課(共15張)課件

1、She is a kind teacher.In order to help you, she always works hard. She is a teacher who is very helpful, for example, she always helps you with your science.Who is she?Lets play a guessing game!She is a teacher who likes travelling.She is a teacher.She is a kind teacher.In orderEnglish Writing -Try

2、to make your writing betterEnglish Writing -Try to make pollutionHi! Tina, Im happy to get your letter. I hear that the pollution is bad. I have some suggestions. You should walk to school. You should turn off lights. You should plant some trees. You should use something that can be used many times.

3、 These are my suggestions. I hope the environment in your hometown will be better later.Yours,Bill TinapollutionHi! Tina,TinaIm happy to get your letter.You should walk to school.Tip1:Use words and phrases properly and vividly.用詞適切、生動Im happy to receive your letter.You should go to school on foot.Ho

4、w to make it more vivid(生動的)？Im happy to hear from you.You should go to school on foot instead of taking cars.Im happy to get your letter.T Parts of Body: 正文(節(jié)選)You should walk to school. You should turn off lights. You should plant some trees. You should use something that can be used many times. S

5、entence patterns(句型) of giving advice:should / can do sthWhy not do sth?/ Why dont you do sth?What about doing sth?/ How about doing sth?It is + adj + for sb to do sthIt is a good idea to do sthHad better do sthIt is better to do sthTry to do sthLets do sth Lets walk to school.It is a good idea to w

6、alk to school.Youd better walk to school.Tip2: Try to use different sentence patterns (句型) . Parts of Body:You should walkWed better turn off lights so that we can save energy.You should turn off lights. Parts of Body: 正文(節(jié)選) Adverbial Clause狀語從句 so that, when, in order to, Turn off lights when we l

7、eave the classrooms to save energy.In order to save energy, lets turn off lights.Wed better turn off lights soYou should plant some trees that are good for the environment.You should plant some trees. Parts of Body: 正文(節(jié)選) Attributive Clause定語從句 that, which Tip3: Use complex sentences(復(fù)合句) to make s

8、entences better. You should plant some trees that can make our earth green.You should plant some trees thUse something that can be used many times. For example, we can use china cups instead of paper ones. Use something that can be used many times. Parts of Body: 正文(節(jié)選)Try to add an example.for exam

9、ple, such as Use something that can be used many times, such as using cloth bags instead of plastic bags. Tip4: Add examples to make your writing persuasive(有說服力的).Use something that can be used Hi! Tina, Im happy to hear from you. Because Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious. I have some

10、suggestions for you . Lets walk to school instead of taking cars. Its good for us to reduce air pollution. You should plant some trees that are good for the environment. Turn off lights when we leave the classrooms to save energy. Use something that can be used many times. For example, we can use ch

11、ina cups instead of paper ones. These are my suggestions. If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. I hope the environment in your hometown will be better and better in the future.Yours,Bill Tip5:Use linking words properly 連接詞使用恰當 ()Coherent (連貫的)? Hi! Tina,Tip5:Use linking wo寫作中句

12、子和句子之間比較常用的連接詞1.表示并列/遞進關(guān)系：and, besides, whats more, also, not only, but also,at the same time, 2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but, however,3.表示因果關(guān)系：because, since, so, therefore,4.表示結(jié)果：as a result, sothat,5.表示先后：First, Second, Third, Next, Finally6.表示時間：when, while, after, before, as soon as7. 表示總結(jié)：in a word, generally s

13、peaking, all in all寫作中句子和句子之間比較常用的連接詞 Hi! Tina, Im happy to hear from you. _Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious. _I have some suggestions for you. _, Lets walk to school instead of taking cars. Its good for us to reduce pollution. _, Turn off lights _ we leave the classrooms to save energ

14、y._, you should plant some trees that are good for the environment._, use something that can be used many times. For example, we can use china cups instead of paper ones. These are my suggestions. If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. I hope the environment in your hometown wi

15、ll be better and better in the future.Yours,Billfinally, so, firstly, but; when; secondly; whats more; when Secondly Firstly But Whats more So Finally Hi! Tina,finally, so, firstly Firstly, lets walk to school instead of taking cars. Its good for us to reduce pollution. Secondly, turn off lights whe

16、n we leave the classrooms to save energy. Whats more, you should plant some trees that are good for the environment. Finally, use something that can be used many times. For example, we can use china cups instead of paper ones. Finally, use something that can be used many times. For example, we can u

17、se china cups instead of paper ones. Hi! Tina. Im happy to hear from you. But Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious. So I have some suggestions for you. These are my suggestions. If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. I hope the environment in your hometown will be bet

18、ter and better in the future.Tip6:Make sure the structure(結(jié)構(gòu)) is clear. Firstly, lets walk to schoo采分點滿分可給分值1.內(nèi)容充實，覆蓋要點 （內(nèi)容、要點）767分 描述了所有要點，內(nèi)容合理、豐富35分 描述了大部分信息，內(nèi)容比較合理12分 描述了小部分信息，內(nèi)容不合理0分 沒有作答或描述內(nèi)容與主題無關(guān)2.用詞適切，語法正確，句型多樣 （詞匯、語法、句型）767分 用詞適切，句型變化多樣且有效，完全或基本沒有語言錯誤35分 用詞基本適切，句型較為單一，有少量語言錯誤但不影響理解12分 有較多語言錯

19、誤，一定程度上影響理解1分 有大量語言錯誤，影響理解3.結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，意思連貫 （語意、連詞、指代）434分 行文連貫，連接詞使用恰當，指代清晰12分 行文不夠連貫，連接詞使用不夠恰當，指代不夠清晰0分 沒有連貫的意識4.書寫規(guī)范，詞數(shù)適宜 （標點符號、大小寫、詞數(shù)）22分 大小寫、標點正確，詞數(shù)達標，書寫規(guī)范整潔1分 大小寫、標點有部分錯誤，詞數(shù)達標，書寫尚可辨認0分 大小寫、標點錯誤較多，語言應(yīng)用不規(guī)范，詞數(shù)嚴重不足，書寫難以辨認 作文評分標準采分點滿分可給分值1.內(nèi)容充實，覆蓋要點 （內(nèi)容、要點）7pollutionHi! Tina, Im happy to get your letter.

20、 I hear that the pollution is bad. I have some suggestions. You should walk to school. You should turn off lights. You should plant some trees. You should use something that can be used many times. These are my suggestions. I hope the environment in your hometown will be better later.Yours,Bill TinapollutionHi! Tina,TinaHomeworkPolish your own writing.Homework1.學(xué)習(xí)語文是一種享受，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)語文學(xué)習(xí)是在與另一個人對話，也是在與自己對話。每當你讀一篇文章時，仿佛作者就在你身邊，他的經(jīng)歷、他的情感都進入了你心中。2.不論讀名家名篇，還是自己創(chuàng)作，你會更清楚地認識到自己，每次學(xué)習(xí)語文，其實