英語興趣小組寫作輔導(dǎo)第五課公開課

1、Name第一章議論文第4講用事例證明某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)本類書面表達(dá)主要是以敘事為主，但敘事的目的是為了論證一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，相等于用事例 來論證，所以本書中把它歸類在議論文中。這類書面表達(dá)可以考查學(xué)生敘事、描寫、議論 等多方面的寫作能力。在設(shè)題上常見的有四種形式：1.讀寫類。給一篇文章，先閱讀，然后讓簡(jiǎn)單概括文 章，再談感想。2.給出一個(gè)情景圖片，讓先描述圖片，再結(jié)合自身實(shí)際談感想。3.給出一 個(gè)諺語或一小段話，讓先談看法，再舉例說明。3.給出觀點(diǎn)性標(biāo)題，讓直接用事例來論 證。這類作文典型的寫法一般包括三局部：第一局部闡述諺語或觀點(diǎn)、概括文章、描述圖 畫故事，可以寫成“主題句一拓展句”結(jié)構(gòu)。第二段結(jié)合個(gè)人或他人

2、經(jīng)歷來進(jìn)行例證。第 三段對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)短總結(jié)，再次扣題。.成功就是不斷失敗，而是不喪失熱情如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(quotation),按要求用 英語寫一篇短文。Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm/9Sir Winston Churchill 內(nèi)容要求：L你對(duì)該引語的理解；2.你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；3.恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1.短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；3.詞 數(shù)：120左右。This quotat

3、ion from Winston Churchill tells us thatTo ease the pain in her back, I removed the heavy load from moms shoulders.To ease the pain in her back, I removed the heavy load from moms shoulders.孩子也要體諒父母的負(fù)擔(dān)下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了女兒為回家媽媽拿包的情 景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅照片的理解用英語寫一篇短 文。你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：.描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等；.結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?舉例說明你

4、能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么。注意：.可參照?qǐng)D中文字及下面文章開頭所給提示，作 必要的發(fā)揮想象。.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.Name瘋狂背誦背誦日期 教師簽名Your future depends on many things, but mostly on y

5、ou.In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”I cant agree more with this view. Its true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our ow

6、n attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only hi

7、s own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hand.非常同意cant agree more with艱苦的努力painstaking efforts由決定be determined by被認(rèn)為是be regarded as以為例take.for example激

8、人上進(jìn)的人物an inspiring figure扮演重要角色play an important role背誦日期 教師簽名鼓勵(lì)能增強(qiáng)自信The encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance to his or her student, especially when the student has trouble with study. Timely encouragement can raise his confidence and inspire his motivation to work hard.When

9、I was in middle school, I had some difficulty in learning English. I couldnt memorize new words, so I always did poorly in the English exams. For some time I even decided to give up learning English. However, everything changed when I met Mrs. Jones, my new English teacher. She encouraged me to try

10、some different methods to remember English words, and when I made a little progress, she always praised me, so I worked harder than ever.Gradually I became interested in memorizing new words and began to catch up with others. At the end of the term I got the highest mark in English in my class.Now I owe my progress in English to Mrs. Jones whose encouragement has made me achieve what I have now. Here I want to send my sincer