2019高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)第四板塊書(shū)面表達(dá)7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化詞句”細(xì)推敲講義4537

1、2019高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)第四板塊書(shū)面表達(dá)7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化詞句”細(xì)斟酌講義_45372019高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)第四板塊書(shū)面表達(dá)7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化詞句”細(xì)斟酌講義_453710/102019高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)第四板塊書(shū)面表達(dá)7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化詞句”細(xì)斟酌講義_4537步成文第四步基本框架搭建好，“美化詞句”細(xì)斟酌假如說(shuō)前三步旨在教考生寫(xiě)得中規(guī)中矩、像模像樣，那么四至六步則教考生寫(xiě)得瀟瀟灑灑、洋氣實(shí)足；假如說(shuō)前三步是在底稿中達(dá)成對(duì)寫(xiě)作基本內(nèi)容的架構(gòu)，那么四至六步則是對(duì)底稿內(nèi)容的完美、潤(rùn)飾和升格；前三步讓習(xí)作達(dá)成，四至六步讓習(xí)作完滿(mǎn)，從第四步至第六步，教考生“略施粉黛

2、”，略加美化，讓作文由“四檔”巧升“五檔”。一、“四檔”“五檔”差在哪第四檔(1620分)考綱表述第五檔(2125分)考綱表述達(dá)成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。完整達(dá)成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖遺漏一兩個(gè)次重點(diǎn)，但覆蓋全部。覆蓋重點(diǎn)。應(yīng)用了的語(yǔ)法構(gòu)造和詞匯。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法構(gòu)造和詞匯能。語(yǔ)法構(gòu)造或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本正確，些許語(yǔ)法構(gòu)造或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡錯(cuò)誤主假如因試試較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法構(gòu)造或力使用較復(fù)雜構(gòu)造或；具備較。強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。應(yīng)用語(yǔ)句間的連結(jié)成分，使全文結(jié)使用了語(yǔ)句間的連結(jié)成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。構(gòu)緊湊。了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。從“第四檔”與“第五檔”的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)來(lái)看，四檔與五檔的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差異是細(xì)小的

3、，主要集中在“亮點(diǎn)詞匯”、“亮點(diǎn)句式”、“過(guò)渡連接”、“語(yǔ)法構(gòu)造”等一些能力層級(jí)上，固然這兩個(gè)品位的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差異比較細(xì)微，但四檔與五檔的分差卻成為考生成績(jī)平凡與優(yōu)秀的分水嶺。第五檔中提到，“語(yǔ)法構(gòu)造或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為全力使用較復(fù)雜構(gòu)造或較高級(jí)詞匯所致?！边@就是說(shuō)，假如考生僅運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)詞匯和基本句型，不可以表現(xiàn)出較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，即便表達(dá)無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，也不必定能得高分；相反，即便文章中有少許錯(cuò)誤，假如是因?yàn)槭褂脧?fù)雜構(gòu)造或較高級(jí)詞匯所致，文章仍可按最高品位給分。第五檔中“有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連結(jié)成分，使全文構(gòu)造緊湊”，這表示適合運(yùn)用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)能夠使文章構(gòu)造緊湊，過(guò)渡自然，進(jìn)而提高得分品位。典

4、例感悟(2018全國(guó)卷)假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信咨詢(xún)你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)狀況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包含：1學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館；2.主要的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；3.你喜愛(ài)的項(xiàng)目。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.能夠適合增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連結(jié)。“冤枉的”四檔作文(得分19分)DearPeter，Iamverydelightedtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmayhelpyouknowmoreaboutit.Tobeginwith,ane

5、wstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,andithasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,manykindsofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichPingpong,footballandrunningcompetitionsareverypopular.Asforme,Iminterestedinbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtofacethechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerel

6、yinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua升格后的五檔作文(得分24分)DearPeter，Iammorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschooland,Ithink,thefollowinginformationmayhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingofit.Tobeginwith,anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,whichhasbeco

7、methenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,thestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichPingpong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,Iminterestedinbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtobravelyfacethechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoou

8、rschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua左欄作文用詞正確，分段合理，并且使用了with復(fù)合構(gòu)造和“ofwhich”指引的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等，整體來(lái)說(shuō)是一篇相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)的作文。可是看一下右欄提高后的名作文，就會(huì)嘆息其語(yǔ)言更地道、更自然流利，堪稱(chēng)妙筆生花，技高一籌。詞匯的提高師及enjoygreat有六處，特別是haveabetterunderstandingof,awiderangeof點(diǎn)popularity的使用會(huì)令人贊美作者深沉的語(yǔ)言功底，同時(shí)也提高了得分品位；句式的評(píng)thestadiumset提高有三處，插入語(yǔ)Ithink,which指引的定語(yǔ)從句，及獨(dú)立主格u

9、p的使用都恰到利處，相關(guān)于左欄的作文有了大幅度的提高。二、怎樣由“四檔”升“五檔”詞匯要“亮人一眼”詞匯要美，就要多使用較高級(jí)詞匯。那么何為較高級(jí)詞匯？盡人皆知，詞匯原來(lái)并無(wú)“高低貴賤”之分，但某個(gè)詞匯一旦放在了詳細(xì)語(yǔ)境中，假如使用極為適合，表現(xiàn)了該詞的美好價(jià)值，為句子添色，讓文章添彩，它就是較高級(jí)詞匯。下邊介紹詞匯向較高級(jí)詞匯的轉(zhuǎn)變。4招，以實(shí)現(xiàn)由較初級(jí)第1招：“語(yǔ)”眾不一樣，防止亦步亦趨寫(xiě)作時(shí)適合得體地使用他人可能想不到的詞匯或短語(yǔ)，會(huì)給閱卷老師耳目一新的感覺(jué)。Afterthefilm,eachclassissupposedtohaveadiscussionandallthestudent

10、sarewelcometotalkandexpresstheirviewsaboutthefilm.Afterthefilm,eachclassissupposedtohaveadiscussionandallthestudentsarewelcometomakecommentsandexpresstheirviewsaboutthefilm.(2018全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))IamverygladtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.IammorethandelightedtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.(2017全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))Is

11、houldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.(2016全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))第2招：更新?lián)Q代，防止重復(fù)寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)盡量防止重復(fù)使用同樣的詞語(yǔ)，要用貼切多變的詞語(yǔ)來(lái)展現(xiàn)自己的水平。用詞不一樣、表達(dá)方式迥異，也是高級(jí)用法。Thebox-officeincomeofChinesemoviesabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.witnessedaconstantincr

12、easefromin2015.However,ChinawitnessedThebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However,Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.(2017江蘇高考書(shū)面表達(dá))Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.Ifyouwanttoparticipate,youcansendyo

13、urphotostointlphotoshow.Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.Ifyouwanttojoinyoucansendyourphotostointlphotoshow.(2016全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá)Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.,)Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhav

14、evariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.(2015浙江高考書(shū)面表達(dá))第3招：?jiǎn)卧~短語(yǔ)，奇妙互用一般狀況下短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先，應(yīng)多使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)取代一些單詞，以增添文采。但有時(shí)單詞卻比短語(yǔ)重生動(dòng)，能夠“一詞傳神”。因此我們應(yīng)把單詞與短語(yǔ)奇妙互用。Thetrainingschedule,apartfromregulartraining,includesjoininginvariousactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.Thetrainingschedule,apartfromregulartra

15、ining,includesjoininginavarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.(2018天津高考書(shū)面表達(dá))CinemashavegraduallygivenwaytotheriseoftheInternetandtheticketpriceisincreasing.andcellphones,CinemashavegraduallygivenwaytotheriseoftheInternetandcellphones,andtheticketpriceisontheincrease.(2017

16、江蘇高考書(shū)面表達(dá))IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandIdlikeyoutohelpme.IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandIdlikeyoutodomeafavor.(2016全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))Wecanlookatthisprobleminmanyways.Wecanviewthisprobleminmanyways.(view比lookat更有內(nèi)涵)第4招：高級(jí)代替，初級(jí)裁減也就是說(shuō)，盡量用高級(jí)階段學(xué)到的詞取代初級(jí)階段學(xué)到的詞。And

17、ItreasurethisasagoodchancetobroadenmyperspectiveandimprovemyspokenEnglish.AndItreasurethisasagoodchancetobroadenmyperspectiveaswellasimprovemyspokenEnglish.(2018浙江高考寫(xiě)作)Theeditingpartafterthatwasdifficult.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.(2017北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá))ThissummerIwanttodoapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalc

18、ompany,throughwhichIwouldliketobroadenmyhorizons,getsomeworkingexperienceandmeetmorenewfriends.ThissummerIintendtotakeupapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany,throughwhichIwouldliketobroadenmyhorizons,gainsomeworkingexperienceandmeetmorenewfriends.(2016全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))句式要“高人一籌”句式單調(diào)、缺少生氣的文章，哪怕無(wú)任何錯(cuò)誤也不行能得高分。出色句

19、式的合理使用會(huì)使文章增添亮點(diǎn)，提高品位?？忌趯?xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)多運(yùn)用一些高級(jí)句式和復(fù)合句，并注意句式的靈巧多變，讓文章讀起來(lái)抑揚(yáng)頓挫，讓考生深沉的語(yǔ)言功底得以表現(xiàn)，讓作文跨上五檔線(xiàn)！升格句式時(shí)，可從雙方面著手。(一)利用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，提高文章品位1增添亮點(diǎn)的定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句的應(yīng)用能夠特別有效地提高表達(dá)品位，在寫(xiě)作中假如我們把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句歸并為一個(gè)含有定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句，或許把并列句改為含有定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句，都能為文章增添亮點(diǎn)。Tohelpthembetterunderstandourtea-drinkingtearoominourschool,whereIintroducedthehistorycu

20、lture,wetookthemtotheoftea-makinganddifferentkindsofteaandsoon.(2018北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá))Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose.(2018江蘇高考書(shū)面表達(dá))Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina.Ithasah

21、istoryofmorethan1,500years.Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina,whichhasahistorythan1,500years.(2017全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))ofmore2吸引眼球的狀語(yǔ)從句在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中，狀語(yǔ)從句是常常用到的句型，它的靈巧運(yùn)用能使作文更具吸引力。SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture(原由狀語(yǔ)從句),IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUniversityisanidealplaceforyou.(2018北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá))Ifyo

22、ureinterestedintheChinesefolkart(條件狀語(yǔ)從句),pleasee-mailme.(2017全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))Wecansetoutearlysothatwewillhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks(目的狀語(yǔ)從句)(2016全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))3提高品位的名詞性從句名詞性從句包含主語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句，是寫(xiě)作中常有的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。Itisworthmentioningthatourvolleyballteamwonthechampionshiptwiceinthenationalmiddleschoolvolleybal

23、lmatch(主語(yǔ)從句)(2018全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))Ihopethesesuggestionswouldbehelpfultoyou.(賓語(yǔ)從句)(2018全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))ThatswhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.(表語(yǔ)從句)(2017北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá))4言簡(jiǎn)意明的非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞適合地運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，不單能使句型多樣、句子靈巧多變，并且讀起來(lái)構(gòu)造緊湊、言簡(jiǎn)意明。AnEnglishshortfilm,calledGrowingTogetherhallat7：30pm.(2018全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))Togetadmitted,Ihave

24、madegoodpreparations,willbeshownintheschoolbeforehand,tryingtoknowasmuchasIcouldaboutmycity.(2017天津高考書(shū)面表達(dá))Ourclasscameupwiththeideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.(2016北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá))(二)利用特別句式，彰顯能力水平寫(xiě)作中，假如考生能夠使用如重申句型、倒裝句型等特別句式，不單能彰顯考生的英語(yǔ)水平，還可以提高寫(xiě)作品位。1重申句型ItwashiscontinuouseffortsthatcausedChinatochangegrad

25、ually.(2016北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá))Itiscounts.(2015notthestory福建高考書(shū)面表達(dá)itself)butwhatisreflectedinthestorythat2倒裝句Onlyinthiswaycanwestudentsstudyhappilyandeffectively.(2015湖南高考滿(mǎn)分作文)Notonlydoesitaffectourdailylife,butitalsoputspeopleslivesatrisk.(2015江蘇高考書(shū)面表達(dá))3省略句Isatatatable,explainingeverystepoftheprocesstea.(2018

26、北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá))As(itis)scheduled,weparticipatedactivities.(2016天津高考書(shū)面表達(dá))inwhile(Iwas)makingseveralinstructive4虛構(gòu)語(yǔ)氣Shouldyouacceptmyapplication,Itoyousatisfaction.(2018浙江高考寫(xiě)作)wouldsparenoefforttocommitmyselfIwishthatyouculturefurther.(2017couldgraspthisopportunitytolearntraditionalChinese全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))5with復(fù)合構(gòu)造I

27、ntheend,wetookagroupphoto,thisunforgettableexperience.(2018withcupsorteainourhands北京高考書(shū)面表達(dá)),torecordInthepicture,wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.(2015福建高考書(shū)面表達(dá))6并列句型AllstudentshavetwoPEclassesaweekandrunfor20minuteseveryday.(2018全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))Tobehonest,voterssomet

28、imesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.(2016江蘇高考書(shū)面表達(dá))7it句型ItisareallygoodopportunitytoexperienceChineseculture.(it作形式主語(yǔ))(2018全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))IthinkitgreatfuntolearnthepoemswrittenintheTangDynastywithyou.(it作形式賓語(yǔ))(2017全國(guó)卷書(shū)面表達(dá))講堂應(yīng)用體驗(yàn).請(qǐng)用更高級(jí)詞匯代替黑體詞匯1Theteacher

29、directeddifficultchallengingthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.2Welltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.developpromote3Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.bearput_up_with4Imetoneofmyclassmatesonmywaytoschoolyesterday.metcame_across5Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.d

30、ecideddetermined/made_up_his_mind6Developingveryquickly,theInternetcausesthebreakdownofface-to-facecommunication.causesgives_rise_to7Whenyouareboredwiththepeoplesometimes,youdbetterfindaquietplace,listeningtosomeclassicalmusic._bored_withfed_up_with8Moreandmorevisitorshavebeenattractedtothisplace.Mo

31、re_and_moreAn_increasing_number_of9Heclass.didnt_listen_10SuddenlyI_thought_of_an_didntlistentowhatIsaidintoturned_a_deaf_ear_toIthoughtofanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.ideaI_came_up_with_an_idea/an_idea_occurred_to_methe.按要求改寫(xiě)以下句子1Myfavoritehobbiesarereadingbooksandnewspapers.Theyhavebecomea

32、necessarypartofmydailylife.My_favorite_hobbies_are_reading_books_and_newspapers,_which_have_become_a_necessary_part_of_my_daily_life.(用定語(yǔ)從句歸并句子)2Thattheyhadhadprofessionaltrainingimpressedmemost.What_impressed_me_most_was_that_they_had_had_professional_training.(用主語(yǔ)從句和表語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)句子)3Afterwehadpracticedpl

33、ayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.Having_practiced_playing_basketball_for_almost_two_months,_we_strongly_desired_to_be_the_winner.(用分詞作狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句子)4IdidntknowrealhappinessuntilImetyou.It_was_not_until_I_met_you_that_I_knew_real_happiness.(用重申句型改寫(xiě)句子)5Theweatherwassocoldthatw

34、ehadtostayathome.So_cold_was_the_weather_that_we_had_to_stay_at_home.(6Thelocalgovernmentdidntrealizetheproblemuntil用倒裝句改寫(xiě)句子)theriverwasseriouslypolluted.Not_until_the_river_was_seriously_polluted_did_the_local_government_realize_the_problem.(用倒裝句改寫(xiě)句子)7Itstimeforustotakemeasurestoprotectendangeredan

35、imals.Its_time_that_we_took/should_take_measures_to_protect_endangered_animals.(用虛構(gòu)語(yǔ)氣改寫(xiě)句子)8Whenweapproachedthecitycenter,wesawastonestatueofabout10metersinheight.Approaching_the_city_center,_we_saw_a_stone_statue_of_about_10_meters_in_height.(用此刻分詞短語(yǔ)作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句子)9Theyareexperienced,knowledgeable,patientandunderstanding.Theyarenotonlyexperiencedandknowledgeable,butalsopatientandunderstanding.(用notonly.butalso.句型改寫(xiě)句子)10Weshouldspeakmo