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1、海龍 603 精講 B Day 2TPO 23議題：yellow cedar總論點(diǎn)：為啥下降？1.蟲2.棕熊3.凍傷根部3.3 Aernment should focus its budget more on young children educationn on universities.同意。小孩學(xué)習(xí)能力更強(qiáng)。To begin with, younger children definiy learn faster.眾所周知，低齡小孩的力要明顯比他們的大學(xué)對(duì)應(yīng)物更好。As is known to all, younger children is much better at memoriz

2、ingn their college countarts.如果不能充分利用這一點(diǎn)優(yōu)勢(shì)的話，大學(xué)生注定要付出 N 倍的努力。If we cannot fully harness/exploit/utilize this advantage, college students are doomed to spend tons of effort tocatch up.這就是為什么中國自古以來就會(huì)讓小孩去背三Three Character Classic、唐詩三百首。This is the reason why ancient Chiwould require children to memoriz

3、e Three Character Classic and The 300poems from the Tang Dynasty.雖然小孩當(dāng)時(shí)不懂，但隨著增長，他會(huì)逐漸開始理解。True, children cannot fully grasp the essence of suaterials, but, as they grow older, they will gradually begounderstand.而如果長大再學(xué)，基本已經(jīng)背不下來。On the other hand, if college students were required to memorize the same

4、 material, it is highly likely they will notplish the task.因此，只有側(cè)重將財(cái)政撥款 fiscal subsidies 都花在初、中等教育上，才能確保在孩子學(xué)習(xí)的黃金能夠最有效的利用他們有效的時(shí)間。Consequently, only if theernment spend most of its fiscal subsidies on prind secondary education canstudentsize their period/time of the golden age of learning/study.TPO 26

5、議題：ZM 魚總論點(diǎn)：擴(kuò)張不能被組織+減少其他魚的數(shù)量1.History / Ballast water2.Dominate, no predator3.Compete for foodThe reading and listening have a debate on zebra mus. The reading bevest its spread to Normericacannot be stopped and it threatens the areas fish population, which is refuted by the following lecturer., the

6、reading claimst historical trendggestt the spread cannot be stopped, sincehe past, themus spread through ballast water carried by ships. However, the professor argues there are new ways to preventthis from happening. For exle, ships can be required to empty their ballast water and refill the ship wi

7、th oceanwater, as salt water will kill all the mus.讓步段寫作：大城市更好還是小城市更好？大城市更好。1.吃的更好2.更好讓步段主旨句：Of course/admittedly/granted, some might argue t small cities have better air quality. I agree with the claim tosome extent. I know this from myal experience.適當(dāng)展開（25）（一定控制好語氣）Every time when I fly back to Be

8、ijing on an airplane, the grey color of the sky would sicken me. When the dooropens after the landing, I would cough violently.轉(zhuǎn)折However, as soon as I put on my spel-ordered 3M mask, all myfort would instantly disappear.該不該爬珠穆朗瑪？該爬。1.為國爭(zhēng)光2.強(qiáng)身健體3.讓步：我承認(rèn)，確實(shí)可能會(huì)摔死。Do you agree or disagree with the follo

9、wing sement? Competition betn friends usually negatively impactsfriendships. Use specific details and exles to support your opinion.To begin with, competition actually enhanfriendship.Admittedly, some might arguet people who care too much about wins and losses can only be negativelyinfluenced by com

10、petition. This is true to some extent.+ 適當(dāng)展開For exle, once there was a badmon competition in New Oriental. Foosen and Tianyi entered the finals, andthey had been best friends. Unfortunay, both of them had held extremely high expecion to win because theyboth invited their boyfriends to watch.he end,

11、Foosen lost by a mere 2 pos. He feltt he lost all his faceand thus angrily smashed his racket to the ground and left without a word.+轉(zhuǎn)折However, this is notof story. As soon as Foosens boyfriend told himt he looked so cute, even afterlosing the game, he realized what he had lost. So he called Tianyi

12、immediay, and invited him to his house.Something good happened. Soon aftert, they both broke up with their boyfriends ande a nice coupletogether, and lives happily thereafter.讓步段錯(cuò)誤匯總：在家看好還是院看好？家里好。誠然，有人覺得院屏幕大，音效好，更震撼，更容易投入。但是，可以把家里布置的很像院。離家近賺錢少的工作好，還是離家遠(yuǎn)高薪的工作好？高薪離家遠(yuǎn)的工作好。誠然，有人說家近錢少能多跟家人一起面對(duì)面吃飯。但是，高薪離

13、家遠(yuǎn)可以 WeChat，還可以給家人在過節(jié)時(shí)買。是否應(yīng)該投錢給沒有實(shí)用價(jià)值的研究？該。誠然，有人說浪費(fèi)錢，并沒有近期內(nèi)的利益。但是，就是天天琢磨樹上為什么掉蘋果，才想出了三大定律。有家人幫助以后，現(xiàn)在更容易成功了。同意。支持段：現(xiàn)在人都有錢，可以借給親戚。誠然，有人說其實(shí)好多家人現(xiàn)在都不愿意幫助親戚，很摳門。但是，我爸就很大方。他老借別人錢，所以借錢那些人都成功了。讓步段練習(xí)：1.決定同意還是。2.想出支持段理由3.想出對(duì)方反駁的理由（讓步段主旨句）4.想出自然的轉(zhuǎn)折2.1穿衣能看出性格。Agree.理由：花貍狐哨 張揚(yáng)讓步段理由：不同場(chǎng)合穿著不同。有時(shí)看不出來有少數(shù)特殊的場(chǎng)合可能看不出來。正裝晚宴。讓步段轉(zhuǎn)折：但是私下里的穿衣是可以