2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)我們?nèi)绾瓮魄脤懽饔迷~？以校園欺凌為話題學(xué)案

1、2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)我們?nèi)绾瓮魄脤懽饔迷~？以校園欺凌為話題學(xué)案2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)我們?nèi)绾瓮魄脤懽饔迷~？以校園欺凌為話題學(xué)案PAGE PAGE 82021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)我們?nèi)绾瓮魄脤懽饔迷~？以校園欺凌為話題學(xué)案我們?nèi)绾瓮魄脤懽饔迷~？（以校園欺凌為話題)下面我們就說這篇文章的用詞：School BullyingVarious school bullyings are now coming under the spotlight。 Despite considerable efforts to tackle the issue， the effect is

2、far from satisfactory。Quite a few factors give rise to the bullying issue. First, many convenient media online and offline have provided fertile soil for negative information， especially concerning violence， which will be rooted in childrens heart and lead them astray. Inadequate parental education

3、should also be held responsible for their childrens ignorance of laws and indifference to others feelings. They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways， like violent abuse, to serve their purposes.In fact， there is no simple solution to school bullying. Most important of all is proper gui

4、dance and monitoring from both schools and parents. Particularly， it is more emphasis on childrens ethical development and mental health that can secure a harmonious school， instead of prioritizing their academic performance。 After all, students self-discipline and moral sense count for anything。推敲花

5、絮節(jié)選：Various convenient media online and off-line make children exposed to negative information修改：Various convenient media online and offline have provided fertile soil for negative information。理由：fertile soil字面意思是“肥沃的土地，但是這個(gè)soil可以進(jìn)一步靈活運(yùn)用，下面有具體解釋.expose這個(gè)詞這里用得其實(shí)挺好的，但我們認(rèn)為，最好用expose children to。這就涉及到ma

6、ke的消除規(guī)則,參看:詳解版：School BullyingVarious school bullyings are now coming under the spotlight。 Despite considerable efforts to tackle the issue， the effect is far from satisfactory.注解：1. spotlight n。 聚光燈 the spotlight U attention from newspapers, television and the public 媒體和公眾的注意,寫作時(shí)我們經(jīng)常會(huì)寫道：某事引起了廣泛關(guān)注，成

7、為了焦點(diǎn)，會(huì)寫成sth has aroused public attention/ discussion等，這里就可以使用come under the spotlight來替換使用。除此之外，limelight也表示“公眾注意的中心”，和spotlight同義.拓展:表達(dá)“某事引起了廣泛關(guān)注，成為了焦點(diǎn)”,還有很多表達(dá)，你能想出哪些呢？Keys： sth become the talk of the town， sth is on everyones lips等。1. considerable adj。 great in amount， size， importance, etc. 相當(dāng)多(或

8、大、重要等)的，可以在某些場(chǎng)合替換使用過多的萬能詞great.2。 far from adv。 used for saying that the real situation is the opposite of what you mention 根本不,并不，遠(yuǎn)不及，其意義就是not，并加強(qiáng)了語氣。比如far from good, far from perfect就是“不好”的意思，寫作時(shí)我們可以經(jīng)常用到，用來修飾一些形容詞.Quite a few factors give rise to the bullying issue. First, many convenient media on

9、line and off-line have provided fertile soil for negative information， especially concerning violence, which will be rooted in childrens heart and lead them astray。 Inadequate parental education should also be held responsible for their childrens ignorance of laws and indifference to others feelings

10、。 They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways， like violent abuse, to serve their purposes。注解:1。 這一句是我寫作經(jīng)常用的一種句式，可以說是萬能句型了，大家在寫作時(shí)只需要把violence和別的可以換話題的詞替換就可以使用了。本句中，fertile的意思是“肥沃的”,那么fertile soil字面意思是“肥沃的土地”但在這里我們?nèi)∷囊炅x“（可供某事發(fā)展的)沃土”。例如：Eastern Europe provided fertile soil for political a

11、ctivists。 東歐是政治活躍分子的溫床。2。 inadequate parental education 缺少父母教育3。 be held responsible for 是。的成因，作為原因；成為起因拓展:表達(dá)這個(gè)意思的短語還有哪些?Keys: be to blame。, be a contributory factor等4。 serve ones purpose 達(dá)到某人的目的.除此之外,短語serve no useful purpose表示沒有用處,可以用來替換useless，serve the original purpose意思是“達(dá)到初衷，達(dá)到初始的目的”。這些短語大家都可以

12、積累一下，以便使用。In fact, there is no simple solution to school bullying。 Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring from both schools and parents。 Particularly， it is more emphasis on childrens ethical development and mental health that can secure a harmonious school， instead of prioritizing

13、their academic performance. After all， students self-discipline and moral sense count for anything.注解:1. there is no simple solution to 。.沒有直接簡(jiǎn)單的解決方法，在總結(jié)時(shí)，用在一些重大的困難問題比較合適。2. secure v. （formal） to obtain or achieve sth, especially when this means using a lot of effort （尤指經(jīng)過努力)獲得，取得，實(shí)現(xiàn),在這里是熟詞生意，或者我們也可

14、以理解成“使.。.安全”，都可以。3. prioritize v。 to treat sth as being more important than other things 優(yōu)先處理,和短語give priority to在意思上沒有區(qū)別，但是單獨(dú)使用動(dòng)詞更有力度,這個(gè)以后大家學(xué)習(xí)深入了就會(huì)了解到。4. count for anything v.重要。相當(dāng)于count for much。作文用詞注意事項(xiàng)！評(píng)價(jià)：1。無詞塊，不成句。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，幾乎每個(gè)句子都有很地道的詞塊，詞塊然后結(jié)合句型使用,如非謂語動(dòng)詞、形式主語等.2。詞塊特點(diǎn)：小而活。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，每個(gè)詞塊都是非常常見的占絕大多少.還有一些詞塊如a hard nut to crack, facilitate daily communication, on the right track雖然平時(shí)很少用，但是確實(shí)日常對(duì)話中很普遍的.這對(duì)我們的啟發(fā)：1.不要一味追求生僻詞塊。有些同學(xué)好用四六級(jí)中的詞匯，卻不考慮語境和風(fēng)格的統(tǒng)一,雖然看起來很高大上，但是一眼就感覺有說不出理由的別扭，原因就一個(gè):用詞太生硬。我建議同學(xué)們把教材中的詞塊熟記是非常根本的。2。高度重視常見動(dòng)詞和名詞的鮮活用法。雖然nut大家都知道是核仁，但高考范文卻用的a hard