2020年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)高分秘笈：專題一觀點(diǎn)看法類

1、中考英語(yǔ)重難點(diǎn)突破:專題一觀點(diǎn)看法類指導(dǎo)一般來(lái)說(shuō)，觀點(diǎn)看法類文章的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基礎(chǔ)，還考查考生的邏輯能力。具體來(lái)說(shuō)就是上下文的銜接過(guò)渡和文章層次的體現(xiàn)。文章段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系主要由道渡門的詞和短語(yǔ)來(lái)完成，在修辭中稱為 啟、承、父。宸就是汗頭，承就是承凄，轉(zhuǎn)是轉(zhuǎn)費(fèi)，臺(tái)是綜 港或總算。1 .用于表示啟的過(guò)渡性的詞和短語(yǔ)通常用在段落或文章的開(kāi)宗。此類過(guò)渡性的詞和短語(yǔ)有first,first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now,

2、 at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。2 .用于表示承的過(guò)渡性的詞和短語(yǔ)通常用在段落中的.堯一個(gè)擴(kuò)展句中。此類過(guò)渡性的詞和短語(yǔ)有H面表達(dá)是會(huì)呼吸的痛 它活在試卷最后的角落 看別人寫(xiě)會(huì)痛 看自己寫(xiě)金精 反正都會(huì)痛second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what s more, what s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same t

3、ime, no doubt 等。3 .用于表示轉(zhuǎn)的過(guò)渡性的詞和短語(yǔ)通常用在段落中的第二個(gè)擴(kuò)展句中。此類過(guò)渡性的詞和短語(yǔ)有 but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。4 .用于合的過(guò)渡性的詞和短語(yǔ)通常用在段落的結(jié)論任或文章的結(jié)論圖中。過(guò)渡性詞和短語(yǔ)有in a word,in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary等?？傊?，要做好

4、書(shū)面表達(dá)，需要大家把握以下幾個(gè)原則：細(xì)讀提示，抓要點(diǎn)：選擇句型，準(zhǔn)表達(dá)；確定線索，巧組合；適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，保完整；規(guī)范書(shū)寫(xiě)，爭(zhēng)高分；細(xì)查全文，除筆誤。、寫(xiě)作方法一一十句作文法第段1開(kāi)頭）用一反（正文）I 主題句r展句，擴(kuò)展句“展句擴(kuò)展句擴(kuò)展句t 獷展句第三段c錯(cuò)尾）一結(jié)尾句要視內(nèi)容網(wǎng)決定如展句的多少）第一段為開(kāi)頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，提出問(wèn)題并通過(guò)問(wèn)題點(diǎn)明全文主題；第二句為擴(kuò)展句,進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明和支持主題句。另外，也可調(diào)整兩句的順序，由第一句說(shuō)明情況，第二句提出問(wèn)題。第二段為正文，共七句。第一句為主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相一致。第二句至 第七句為擴(kuò)展句，說(shuō)明和支持本段的主題。句與

5、句之間要注意運(yùn)用好過(guò)渡詞，以使行文流暢。第三段為結(jié)尾，簡(jiǎn)化為一句，是對(duì)全文的總結(jié)，并說(shuō)明作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。三段之間的銜接要靈活運(yùn)用“啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合”的過(guò)渡手段。二、應(yīng)急百寶箱遇到要點(diǎn)不會(huì)表達(dá)怎么辦？詞數(shù)不達(dá)標(biāo)怎么辦？不要急，一代，五加，一擴(kuò)幫你輕松解決問(wèn)題。一代；五th 一擴(kuò)具體說(shuō)來(lái)就是：1. 以實(shí)代虛一一寫(xiě)實(shí)2. 增加限定語(yǔ)一一定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)等3. 增加例子for example, such as4. 增加原因一一進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明5. 加套語(yǔ)（詞塊）6. 加格言、諺語(yǔ)等一一進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明7. 擴(kuò)充建議一一自主發(fā)揮，點(diǎn)到即可三、注意事項(xiàng)1 .觀點(diǎn)鮮明，文章一定有一個(gè)明確的中心論點(diǎn)一一主題。2 .層次分明，一個(gè)

6、中心論點(diǎn)通常有幾個(gè)分論點(diǎn)支持，層次要分明，過(guò)渡要自然。3 .最后一段一般要總結(jié)全文，得出一個(gè)符合邏輯的結(jié)論，突出中心思想。4 .通常采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。5 .語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔有力，一般不采用口語(yǔ)。11常用表達(dá)AsItItAsItItsIts開(kāi)頭句型。fargoescanthehasWhatThereas .iswithoutbe saidproverbto begenerallylikelyhardlycallsnoNothingisWhat sfar二、銜接句型A case inAsstatedButtheButForallHowever,Similarly,InviewAshasInthisHowev

7、er,concernedsayingwithsaysnoticedthat.certaintythat.recognized that.thattoo much to sayfor special attentionthat.that.isdenying the fact that.more importantmorepointin thethat.thanthefact that.importantispreviousisAsthat.is oftentheparagraph如前段所述problem isa pitythat.Innotsosimple. Thereforethat.spit

8、eofthe fact that.the difficultieswe should payof the presentbeen mentionedrespect, wewe have to看到事物的另一方面，即三、結(jié)尾句型。in.attention to.station.鑒于目前形勢(shì)above.綜上所述may as welllook at the匕疑問(wèn)，無(wú)可否認(rèn)需要特別注意的是case.然而問(wèn)題并非如此簡(jiǎn)單，所以Further, we holdnot (that).but (that).(say)從這個(gè)角度上我們可以說(shuō)other side of the coin, thatopinion t

9、hat.不是，而是is.然而我們還得I will conclude by saying.Therefore,we have the reason to believe that.All things considered 總而言之It may be safely said that.Therefore, inmy opinion, it s moreadvisable.It can be concluded from the discussion that.從中我們可以得出這樣的結(jié)論 From mypointof view,it would bebetter if.在我看來(lái)也許更好四、萬(wàn)能句型

10、。Let s take.to illustrate this.試舉例以茲證明Let s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.It remains to be further studied. There s question is how.其作槿w/觀點(diǎn)看法類作文的整體結(jié)構(gòu)有一定的模式可循，可以先寫(xiě)對(duì)比的一方面，再寫(xiě)另外一方面； 也可以將對(duì)比的兩個(gè)方面的不同點(diǎn)一一比較著寫(xiě)。對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)看法類作文的寫(xiě)作摸板The topic of 主題 is becoming more and more popular recently. Th

11、ere are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 .What s more, 理由二 .Moreover, 理由三 .While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First,王里由.Second(Besides), 王里由三. Third(Finally), 理由三 .From my point

12、of view, I think 我的刖，點(diǎn) .The reason is that 原因 .As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.真題在喇 典例一（2019 ?北京）自律，即自我約束，是自我提升的一種途徑，有助于我們成長(zhǎng)，促使我們不斷前行。 某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“自律”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)劄榱?增強(qiáng)自律意識(shí)，你做過(guò)什么，以及這樣做給你帶來(lái)的好處。提

13、示詞語(yǔ)：self-disciplined（ 自律的）,plan , goal , habit , improve提示問(wèn)題：What did you do to be self-disciplined?What benefits have you got from doing so?Self-discipline plays an important role in our life .第一步：明確要求，理清思路。本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文，要求考生以自律為主題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。首先，需要確定題目；然后，然后根據(jù)提綱列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。本文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可使用

14、一些復(fù)合句來(lái)增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。第二步：擬定提綱，確定句型。,點(diǎn)題： Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.自律的好處： And I could not onlybut also 點(diǎn)睛：In the future , I will continue to be a self-disciplined person第三步：依據(jù)提綱，連句成篇。【參考范文】Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who isself-d

15、isciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on timeat school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates.At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to makeit easier to achieve

16、 my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going tobed early and going to bed early. In the society, I spared no effort to improve myself all thetime.In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had manygood habits, which makes my life easi

17、er and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study havebeen to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplinedhas prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be aself-disciplined person .名師點(diǎn)評(píng)范文符合題目字?jǐn)?shù)要求，條理清晰，語(yǔ)言通帆文章中還使用了-些亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法和

18、詞匯：亮點(diǎn)句型And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with myclassmates.句亮點(diǎn)詞匯a better and brighter future 。這些亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法和詞匯提高了文章的檔次，體現(xiàn)了作者的寫(xiě)作水平。典例二(2019 ?長(zhǎng)沙)假如你是李華，你們班車了上周的籃球賽。Henry認(rèn)為是他未能投進(jìn)最后一球所造成的，有的隊(duì)友也因此而責(zé)怪他。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封英文郵件安慰他，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法，并就如何取得隊(duì)友的理解提出建議。要求：(1)80詞左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以

19、使行文連貫；(3)信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game【參考范文】Dear HenryI learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It snot easy being in your situation, and it s normal to have these feelings. An

20、yway, don t be toohard on yourself.You know, basketballis about team effort. It s never just one person s fault. What mattersis that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.t you sit down andIf all of you pull togethe

21、r, youre sure to win the next one.As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare more efforts to better your skills.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua解題思路第一步：判斷主題一一對(duì)比賽輸贏和別的同學(xué)的非議的看法。第二步：定時(shí)態(tài)一一一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；定人稱一一第二人稱為主，第一人稱為輔。第三步：列

22、提綱：（1）對(duì)Henry的心情表示理解和同情（2）寬慰：籃球比賽是團(tuán)體活動(dòng)，輸贏都非一人所為;（3）提出建議（一至兩條）。第四步：組句成篇。中考預(yù)測(cè)A （2019順德區(qū)模擬）學(xué)生要獲得好的成績(jī)，需運(yùn)用各種有效學(xué)習(xí)策略，記筆記是其中非常重要的一種手段?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你結(jié)合上文寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容包括：1 .談?wù)動(dòng)浌P記的重要性（兩點(diǎn)）；2 .結(jié)合兩個(gè)具體學(xué)科談?wù)勅绾斡浌P記；3 .記下筆記后，你還應(yīng)該做什么。作文要求：1 .不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2 .語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù) 80個(gè)左右，作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上。To get go

23、od grades, it is important to use all kinds of effective study ways. Taking notesis one of them. I thinks learn to takeIn a word, good study skills begin in the classroom as we take notes. Let notes wisely!B（2019中山市模擬）生活中常常會(huì)發(fā)生一些意外的事，但每個(gè)人處理事情的方式不同。有些人冷靜溫和地處理，有些人簡(jiǎn)單粗暴地對(duì)待。當(dāng)你與人發(fā)生沖突時(shí)，你會(huì)如何處理呢？請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀?/p>

24、的經(jīng)歷與看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 請(qǐng)你簡(jiǎn)單敘述一次與別人發(fā)生沖突的經(jīng)歷；2. 你認(rèn)為該如何正確處理日常生活中發(fā)生的沖突（至少兩點(diǎn)建議）；3. 呼吁大家友好相處。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2. 語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80 左右。作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Life is full of the unexpected, ATo get good grades, it is important to use all kinds of effective study ways. Taking notesis one of them. I think tha

25、t on the one hand, it can call your attention to what the teacher says. On the other hand, it can also help you fully focus on the key facts or main points in class.In a history class, for example, we should copy the names, the times and the places with peopleor events. As for an English class, it s

26、 important an d necessary to take down the key words,sentences and grammar.After taking notes, we should spend some time reading, reviewing and remembering them. Then we can get good grades.In a word, good study skills begin in the classroom as we take notes. Let s learn to takenotes wisely!BLife is

27、 full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmateand I hit into each other, trying tocatch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turnedintoa terrible quarrel. To be hone st, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate s, only becausewe both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendlyto each other. Secon dly, we should communicate more and put o