高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)-how-to-polish-your-writing教程文件

1、高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)-how-to-polish-your-writing 1標(biāo)新立異標(biāo)新立異 寫(xiě)作時(shí)要恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用一些蘊(yùn)含感情色彩，別人有寫(xiě)作時(shí)要恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用一些蘊(yùn)含感情色彩，別人有 可能想不到的詞匯，恰當(dāng)?shù)厍笮虑螽?。可能想不到的詞匯，恰當(dāng)?shù)厍笮虑螽悺?We all have the same chance. We all possess the same chance (opportunity) We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. We have endless homework to do at the week

2、end.2短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先 多使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采。多使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.I can no longer put up with the way he speaks to us. The boy realized the danger and began to run away. The boy was aware of the danger and began to run away.3避免重復(fù)避免重復(fù)盡量避免過(guò)多地使用某一個(gè)單詞，必要時(shí)選擇使用其盡量避免過(guò)多

3、地使用某一個(gè)單詞，必要時(shí)選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來(lái)代替。他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來(lái)代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.二、使用高級(jí)句式，讓句子靚起來(lái)二、使用高級(jí)句式，讓句子靚起來(lái)1恰當(dāng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)恰當(dāng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)Above all, we must do something to stop pollution.Above all, something must be

4、done to stop pollution.2使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句The accident happened the other day.The accident did happen the other day.He didnt come to the party because he was very busy.It was because he was very busy that he didnt come to the party.3使用倒裝句使用倒裝句We can only improve our English in this way.Only in this way can

5、we improve our English.We dont know its value until we lose health.Not until we lose health do we know its value.4使用省略句使用省略句Although they were faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart.Although faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart.5使用感嘆句使用感嘆句We had a very good time with the peasants

6、 that day.What a good time we had with the peasants that day!6使用使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)Because there was too much noise, I couldnt go on studying.With the noise going on, I couldnt go on studying.7使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣I didnt take his advice, so I failed in the exam.If I had taken his advice, I wouldnt have failed in

7、 the exam.Its time for us to take measures to protect the wild animals.Its high time that we took measures to protect the wild animals.2016年福建省質(zhì)檢書(shū)面表達(dá)年福建省質(zhì)檢書(shū)面表達(dá)國(guó)外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新的一輪網(wǎng)上講座活動(dòng)，正面向國(guó)外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新的一輪網(wǎng)上講座活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問(wèn)該網(wǎng)站?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站李華，經(jīng)常訪問(wèn)該網(wǎng)站?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題

8、。內(nèi)容包括發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。內(nèi)容包括: 自我介紹自我介紹 寫(xiě)信目的寫(xiě)信目的 話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful). 推薦理由推薦理由 預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功預(yù)祝活動(dòng)成功注意：注意：1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右左右; 2.郵件格式已為你給出；郵件格式已為你給出；3.郵件出不能出現(xiàn)本人信息；郵件出不能出現(xiàn)本人信息；4.在答題卡上作答。在答題卡上作答。Three pieces of a students work(學(xué)生作品）學(xué)生作品） 13分分13分分16分分23分分What makes a good piece of writing?1.neat writing書(shū)寫(xiě)書(shū)寫(xiě)2. c

9、ontent內(nèi)容內(nèi)容3. structure結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)4. language語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)言Good first impressionWell organized and smoothly developedEverything required includedNo ChinglishNo Grammatical mistakes exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作五部曲應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作五部曲step1 Topic exploring 審題審題step2 Wording 構(gòu)詞構(gòu)詞step3 Sentence mak

10、ing 成句成句step4 Essay writing 成篇成篇step5 Improving 修訂修訂Step1 Topic exploring審題審題 1 審體裁審體裁 2 審人稱(chēng)審人稱(chēng)3 審時(shí)態(tài)審時(shí)態(tài)4 審要點(diǎn)審要點(diǎn)( 定文章結(jié)構(gòu)定文章結(jié)構(gòu) )高考書(shū)面表達(dá)（重慶卷）高考書(shū)面表達(dá)（重慶卷）國(guó)外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新的一輪網(wǎng)上講座活動(dòng)，正面向國(guó)外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新的一輪網(wǎng)上講座活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問(wèn)該網(wǎng)站?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站李華，經(jīng)常訪問(wèn)該網(wǎng)站?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。內(nèi)容包括發(fā)送一封電子郵

11、件，向其推薦話題。內(nèi)容包括: 自我介紹自我介紹 寫(xiě)信目的寫(xiě)信目的 話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful). 推薦理由推薦理由 預(yù)祝活動(dòng)成功預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功注意：注意：1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右左右; 2.郵件格式已為你給出；郵件格式已為你給出；3.郵件出不能出現(xiàn)本人信息；郵件出不能出現(xiàn)本人信息；4.在答題卡上作答。在答題卡上作答。Paragraph 1: purpose of the letterParagraph 1: purpose of the letterParagraph 2: key pointsParagraph 2: key pointsParagraph 3Par

12、agraph 3：Proper endingProper ending （to wish him a success)to wish him a success)三段式三段式總總分分總總自我介紹自我介紹寫(xiě)信目的寫(xiě)信目的話題（我們應(yīng)該感恩）話題（我們應(yīng)該感恩）列舉理由列舉理由預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功in briefin detailin briefStep2 Wording構(gòu)詞構(gòu)詞拼寫(xiě)拼寫(xiě) 詞性詞性近義詞近義詞 同音詞同音詞單復(fù)數(shù)單復(fù)數(shù) 冠詞冠詞大小寫(xiě)大小寫(xiě) Simple mistakesleave a bad impression! My name is Li Hua. I am a stud

13、ent and I study in XinHua Middle School. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are finding themes from students all over the world. Now, I write this letter because I want to recommand a theme. We should thankful is a good topic. Our father and mother throw thick and thin raise us, we shoul

14、d be thankful to them. Our teachers teach us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank to them. as a Chinese, we should be thankful, because where there is thankful, therere hopes to make the world better, and with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is.

15、 I really hope you can choose my theme. I wish the activity will have an successful end.beaAslooking for topicsrecommendtopictopicthrough thick and thinthankfulness17分分Lets work on polishing your writing Lets work on polishing your writing together!together!Diverse topic-related chunksVarious senten

16、ce patternsHOW?From 17/18 to 21HOW?HOW?1. 1. 改變?cè)~性來(lái)豐富表達(dá)改變?cè)~性來(lái)豐富表達(dá)2. 2. 添加句型添加句型/ /高級(jí)詞匯（短語(yǔ)，高中階段詞匯）高級(jí)詞匯（短語(yǔ)，高中階段詞匯）3. 3. 簡(jiǎn)單句簡(jiǎn)單句復(fù)合句復(fù)合句/ /長(zhǎng)短句長(zhǎng)短句step3 Sentencing 成句成句1 簡(jiǎn)單句簡(jiǎn)單句2 并列句并列句3 復(fù)合句復(fù)合句4 非謂語(yǔ)形式非謂語(yǔ)形式5 特殊結(jié)構(gòu)特殊結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)別忘了并列連詞別忘了并列連詞No Chinglish!連詞的選擇連詞的選擇主語(yǔ)一致主語(yǔ)一致避生就熟！避生就熟！強(qiáng)調(diào)句型；倒裝；強(qiáng)調(diào)句型；倒裝；獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)1.

17、My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.2. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world. I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school.Improve your sentences. I often visit your website, where I got the news

18、that youre looking for topics from students all over the world.1. My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.2. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world.1. We should thankful is a good theme. 2. Our father and m

19、other through thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. 3. Our teacher teaches us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head,we should thank to them. 4. Only with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is.5. I really hope you can choose my theme. 6. I wish the

20、activity will have a successful end.Have a try!1.We should be thankful is a good topic. That we should be grateful is a good idea.2.Our father and mother through thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. It is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank the

21、m.3.Our teachers teach us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank them. We owe our teachers thanks, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work.4.As a Chinese, we should be thankful, and only with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. Th

22、ankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue. Only with a thankful heart can we fully realize how beautiful life is.5.I really hope you can choose my topic. I would really appreciate it if my topic is chosen. Hopefully, my topic will be chosen.6. I wish the activity will have an successful end.

23、 Wish the activity a great success. May your activity succeed.Step4 essay writing成篇成篇 That we should be thankful is a good idea. It is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them. We owe our teachers thanks, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work.

24、Thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue. Where there is thankfulness, there are hopes to make the world better. Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how beautiful life is. In my opinionFirstlyBesidesWhatsmoreNecessary conjunctions make a pieces a writing more smoothly develop

25、ed.應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作五部曲應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作五部曲step1 Topic exploring 審題審題step2 Wording 構(gòu)詞構(gòu)詞step3 Sentence making 成句成句step4 Essay writing 成篇成篇step5 Improving 修訂修訂draft (草稿）草稿）1.Collect god words/phrases/sentences;2.Read more;3.Practice makes perfect;4.Be confident anytime.Now, Lets check whether our writing has been improved in content, structure and language ? 我們的文章我們的文章起來(lái)了么起來(lái)了么？ Im Lihua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School. I often visit your website, where I got the wonderful news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world. Here, Im wr