英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試改錯(cuò)題訓(xùn)練（五）-

1、英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試改錯(cuò)題訓(xùn)練(五 時(shí)間：2009-07-15點(diǎn)擊數(shù)：137 總結(jié)前三期。分別是1.邏輯表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤 2.介詞使用錯(cuò)誤 3.代詞使用錯(cuò)誤3種錯(cuò)誤類型 共30個(gè)錯(cuò)誤。希望對(duì)大家對(duì)改錯(cuò)的提高有幫助。 1.邏輯表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤 1 This is supposed to be an enlightened age, but you wouldnt think so if you could hear what average man thinks of the average woman. Women won their independence years ago. Before a long, bi

2、tter 1._ struggle, they now enjoy the different educational 2._ opportunities as men in most parts of the world. 2 People are earning higher wages and salaries. This leads to the changes in the way of life. As income goes down, people may not want more food to eat or 3._ more clothes to wear. But ma

3、y want more and better care from doctors, dentists and hospitals. They are likely to travel more and want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available 4._ in these services. 3 A knowledge of several languages is essential to other majors study because without them one can 5._ read book

4、s only in translation. 4 If he was present because of sickness, there was 6._ often no job for him when he returned. 5 Under this pressure their whole way of life, even if their bodies, became radically changed. 7._ 6 Science in itself is harmless, more or less. But as soon as it can provide technol

5、ogy, it is not necessarily harmful. 8._ 7 Then, about ten thousand years ago, when this 9._ immensely long formative period of hunting for food, they became farmers. 8 Can we be so bold as to suggest that we may be able to colonize other planet within the not-too- 10._ distant future? 2.介詞使用錯(cuò)誤 1 The

6、 year 1728 saw friction among the coffee-house 1._ keepers and the publishers of newspapers. 2 The traditional nuclear family came into being a couple of hundred years ago with the result of social 2._ pressure during the shift from feudalism to industrialism. 3 Most part-time workers are women, and

7、 most part-time women choose this work because that their domestic 3._ responsibility. 4 Quality defines the difference in tone color between a note played by different instruments or sung by 4._ different voices. 5 English, which when the Anglo-Saxons first conquered England at the fifth and sixth

8、centuries was almost a 5._ “pure” or “unmixed” language. 6 Gram soon wrote to Watson and Crick, introducing him and presenting the first fruits of his thoughts about 6._ the coding problem. 7 Man a million ye ars ago was a little more than an animal; but early man had several advantages to the 7._ a

9、nimals in that he had a large brain and an upright body. 8 Despite of the great difficulties they had, they 8._ continued the work without any complaint. 9 We are fully aware of that something must be 9._ done to put an end to this situation. 10 We are the same opinion that he is fit for this positi

10、on. 10._ 3.代詞使用錯(cuò)誤 1 We must find out the customs of other races, so that it will not think us ill-mannered. 1._ 2 But the people all over the world agree that being well-mannered really means being kind. Please remember this, and then he will not go very far. 2._ 3 Scientist are discovering that sea

11、 water can be very valuable. It has been suggested that their 3._ currents can be used to make electricity. 4 While technology makes this possible for four 4._ even six billion of us to exist, it also eliminates our job opportunities. 5 Traditionally, work determines our way of life. But if 98 perce

12、nt of us dont need to work, what are we going to do with oneself? 5._ 6 A break in their employment, or a decision to work part-time, will slow its raises and promotions 6._ as it would for men. 7 The conscience of the nation is appeased, while the population continues to puff their way 7._ to smoke

13、, cancerous death. 8 There are many such differences and we shall take up only that involving language, omitting those that do not. 8._ 9 A wise and experienced administrator will assign a job to whomever is best qualified. 9._ 10 unconsciously, we copy these we are close to or 10._ love or admire.

14、答案解析： 1.BeforeAfter。根據(jù)前文含義，可知婦女是在經(jīng)過(guò)了長(zhǎng)期而艱苦的斗爭(zhēng)之后方才獲得了和男性同樣的教育機(jī)會(huì)。因此此處應(yīng)該改為After。 2.differentsame。理由同上。 3.downup。前文已說(shuō)人們賺錢(qián)越來(lái)越多，因此此處應(yīng)該是收入增加而不是減少。 4.NeverthelessTherefore/Consequently。由上下文可至此處應(yīng)該為因果關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，即正因?yàn)槿藗兊男剿鲩L(zhǎng)了，對(duì)于食物與衣物的需求減少，而對(duì)醫(yī)療服務(wù)、旅游以及教育的需要增加了，所以在這些服務(wù)行業(yè)可以找到更多的工作機(jī)會(huì)。 5.themit。本句中without them指的是沒(méi)有幾門(mén)語(yǔ)言

15、的知識(shí)，此處them錯(cuò)指a knowledge of several languages，然而knowledge是主語(yǔ)的中心詞，所以要把them改為it。 6.presentabsent。根據(jù)常識(shí)可知，該句應(yīng)該是“如果他因?yàn)樯《毕?，?dāng)他回來(lái)時(shí)通常就會(huì)失去工作”，pr esent不符合邏輯。 7.刪去if。該句中的if是誤用，even if后面接從句，而該句后面只有their bodies，是半句話，意思為“即使他們的身體”，不符合語(yǔ)法邏輯規(guī)則，故應(yīng)該把if刪除，即even their bodies，意為“就連他們的身體”這樣才可以與前邊的短語(yǔ)構(gòu)成符合主語(yǔ)表示他們的生活方式和身體狀態(tài)都得以發(fā)

16、生巨變。 8.harmfulharmless。從上文的承接和語(yǔ)義關(guān)系看，該段所表達(dá)的意思是：科學(xué)是無(wú)害的，但是一但它能提供技術(shù)的時(shí)候，那就不一定無(wú)害了。因此應(yīng)該使用harmless。 9.whenafter。when表示“當(dāng)時(shí)”，after表示“之后”。本句中ten thousand years ago指距今一萬(wàn)多年前，是在長(zhǎng)期的原始狩獵時(shí)期之后，故應(yīng)把when改為介詞after。 10.planetplanets。從邏輯上來(lái)講，人類探索其他星體，不止一個(gè)兩個(gè)，除了移民約球外，興許還有水星木星等，故應(yīng)將other后的可數(shù)名詞變成復(fù)數(shù)形式，而the other后的可數(shù)名詞則不為復(fù)數(shù)形式。 1.a

17、mongbetween。among指兩個(gè)以上的人或物體之間的關(guān)系，between則專指兩個(gè)人或者物體之間的關(guān)系，而文中指兩者關(guān)系的摩擦，故應(yīng)該使用between。 2.withas。“as the result of ”意為“作為的結(jié)果”，在劇中表明“傳統(tǒng)小家庭是社會(huì)壓力從封建社會(huì)向工業(yè)社會(huì)過(guò)渡的過(guò)程中形成的”。“with the result of ”無(wú)此用法。 3.thatof?！癰ecause that”后面必須接從句，而文中后面所接為名詞短語(yǔ)，因此應(yīng)該使用“because of”，它同樣表示原因，但時(shí)候卻直接接名詞短語(yǔ)。 4.byon。“played by”表示“由表演或演奏”，文中所

18、表達(dá)意思是在樂(lè)器上演奏，故此時(shí)應(yīng)該使用介詞on。 5.atin。當(dāng)表示在某個(gè)世紀(jì)時(shí)，century前的介詞應(yīng)該為in而不是at。 6.himhimself。這里誤將人稱代詞賓格代替了反身代詞使用，從而引起句子歧義或者意義含糊不清，改為himself之后則和主語(yǔ)Gram正好對(duì)應(yīng)。 7.toover。表示“對(duì)優(yōu)勢(shì)”使用短語(yǔ)“advantage over sth.”的形式。 8.刪去of。“despite”有兩種用法：一種是后面直接接名詞作為賓語(yǔ)，另外一種是接從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為“despite that”。根據(jù)文中情況，應(yīng)該為第一種，故將of刪掉。 9.刪去of。“aware”與“despite”相似，也有兩種用法，既可以在后面加介詞of，然后接名詞作賓語(yǔ)，也可以直接接從句。文中情況為第二種，故將of刪去。 10.are后面加of。介詞of后面接名詞或者名詞短語(yǔ)是一種特定用法，表示前面事物的性質(zhì)特點(diǎn)和意義。原文意為：我們都認(rèn)為他很適合這個(gè)職位。若不加介詞，則原文語(yǔ)句不通。 1.itthey。句中“it”所指代的是 前面的“other races”，故必須對(duì)應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式they。 2.heyou。這里必須特別注意，在這種祈使句中，一般使用第二人稱代詞you。 3.theirits。由于“their”所指