2012高中英語課時(shí)講練通配套課件 Unit1《Great scientists》 新人教版必修5

1、如何寫建議信如何寫建議信 本單元的寫作要求是寫封建議信。建議信是用書信的方本單元的寫作要求是寫封建議信。建議信是用書信的方式發(fā)表你的建議與看法。在寫建議信時(shí)應(yīng)該做到：式發(fā)表你的建議與看法。在寫建議信時(shí)應(yīng)該做到：1. 注意格注意格式。式。2. 客觀提出問題?？陀^提出問題。3. 針對所存在的問題給出你的觀點(diǎn)與針對所存在的問題給出你的觀點(diǎn)與看法，提出你的建議。看法，提出你的建議。4. 語言要委婉，精練，表達(dá)要簡潔清語言要委婉，精練，表達(dá)要簡潔清楚。楚。 假如你是某鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)一小學(xué)的校長楊華，寫信給有關(guān)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)反假如你是某鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)一小學(xué)的校長楊華，寫信給有關(guān)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)反映你學(xué)校附近一家化工廠給你們帶來的危害，建議政府關(guān)閉

2、映你學(xué)校附近一家化工廠給你們帶來的危害，建議政府關(guān)閉化工廠。理由如下：化工廠。理由如下：1. 工廠排放的氣體污染空氣。工廠排放的氣體污染空氣。2. 學(xué)校的飲用水受到污染。學(xué)校的飲用水受到污染。3. 工廠噪音影響教學(xué)。工廠噪音影響教學(xué)。4. 上學(xué)、放學(xué)途中，進(jìn)出工廠的車輛給師生的安全帶來隱患。上學(xué)、放學(xué)途中，進(jìn)出工廠的車輛給師生的安全帶來隱患。要求：詞數(shù)要求：詞數(shù)120左右左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))參考詞匯：化工廠參考詞匯：化工廠chemical plantDear Sir/Madam, Many students and teachers ha

3、ve been feeling sick and some began to cough. We conclude that the chemical plant near our school is to blame. _Yours sincerely, Yang Hua【審題謀篇【審題謀篇】 1時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)兼用一般過去時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)兼用一般過去時(shí)2人稱：人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱第一人稱和第三人稱3結(jié)構(gòu)：結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭用簡練的語言提出問題，引出話題。開頭用簡練的語言提出問題，引出話題。 正文列舉現(xiàn)象及結(jié)果。正文列舉現(xiàn)象及結(jié)果。 結(jié)尾提出建議和愿望。結(jié)尾提出建議和愿望。 【遣詞造句【遣詞造

4、句】1. 詞匯：詞匯：責(zé)備；譴責(zé)責(zé)備；譴責(zé)blame 判斷判斷; 推斷推斷conclude 暴露暴露expose污染污染pollute 此外此外apart from 吸收吸收absorb預(yù)見；預(yù)知預(yù)見；預(yù)知foresee 建設(shè)建設(shè)construct2. 句型：句型：(仿寫仿寫)我們判斷我們學(xué)校附近的化工廠是罪魁禍?zhǔn)?。我們判斷我們學(xué)校附近的化工廠是罪魁禍?zhǔn)?。示例：示例：It seemed that the water was to blame. (be to blame)仿寫：仿寫：We conclude that the chemical plant near our school is to

5、 blame. 我很擔(dān)心每天暴露于惡劣環(huán)境下的師生。我很擔(dān)心每天暴露于惡劣環(huán)境下的師生。示例：示例：He became inspired when he thought about helping ordinary people exposed to cholera. (exposed to. . . v. -ed形式形式作后置定語作后置定語)仿寫：仿寫：Im concerned about the teachers and students exposed to a terrible environment every day. 為了我們不受到危害，我寫信建議將化工廠關(guān)閉。為了我們不受到危害

6、，我寫信建議將化工廠關(guān)閉。示例：示例：To prevent this from happening again, John Snow suggested that the source of all the water supplies be examined. (suggest+that從句從句)仿寫：仿寫：Im writing to suggest that the chemical plant be shut down to prevent us from being harmed. Dear Sir/Madam, Many students and teachers have been

7、 feeling sick and some began to cough. We conclude that the chemical plant near our school is to blame. Im concerned about the teachers and students exposed to a terrible environment every day. Firstly, the terrible smell sent out by the plant makes it hard for us to breathe. We breathe in the pollu

8、ted air and absorb it into our body, whichdoes harm to our health. Apart from it, the water we drink is also polluted. Thirdly, with the noise going on, we cant concentrate on our teaching and study. Fourthly, we teachers and parents are worried about the road safety, because there are many trucks g

9、oing in and out of the plant on our way. I wonder whether the government had foreseen this when the plant was constructed. Im writing to suggest that the chemical plant be shut down to prevent us from being harmed. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Yang Hua1. 寫作前要明確寫作的體裁。本文為書信，因此首先要

10、注意寫作前要明確寫作的體裁。本文為書信，因此首先要注意書信的格式，不要遺漏書信的開頭和結(jié)尾。書信的格式，不要遺漏書信的開頭和結(jié)尾。2. 寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)全面，可以根據(jù)現(xiàn)象加以聯(lián)想與發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)全面，可以根據(jù)現(xiàn)象加以聯(lián)想與發(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目背景構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，將要點(diǎn)歸于不同的部分。根據(jù)題目背景構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，將要點(diǎn)歸于不同的部分。如本題首段要引出話題。所給的要點(diǎn)如本題首段要引出話題。所給的要點(diǎn)1、2、3、4都屬于中段都屬于中段正文部分，末段為結(jié)束段。正文部分，末段為結(jié)束段。 假如你是來自美國的假如你是來自美國的Peter，在中國留學(xué)期間，經(jīng)常在馬，在中國留學(xué)期間，經(jīng)常在馬路上看到一些人

11、不遵守交通規(guī)則，于是向某報(bào)社寫信反映此路上看到一些人不遵守交通規(guī)則，于是向某報(bào)社寫信反映此情況，內(nèi)容如下：情況，內(nèi)容如下：1. 部分行人過馬路時(shí)慢慢悠悠或攀爬護(hù)欄，亂穿馬路；部分行人過馬路時(shí)慢慢悠悠或攀爬護(hù)欄，亂穿馬路；2. 某些騎自行車的人擅闖紅燈，騎車帶人；某些騎自行車的人擅闖紅燈，騎車帶人；3. 一些司機(jī)駕車時(shí)不系安全帶；超速行駛；在開車時(shí)抽煙、一些司機(jī)駕車時(shí)不系安全帶；超速行駛；在開車時(shí)抽煙、打電話；打電話；4. 你的看法和建議你的看法和建議 注意：詞數(shù)注意：詞數(shù)120左右左右(文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)詞數(shù)) 參考詞匯：行人參考詞匯：行人pe

12、destrian；護(hù)欄；護(hù)欄guardrail；系安全帶；系安全帶fasten seat beltsDear Editor, I am a foreign student from America and I am studying in China. I find many people break the traffic rules here. _Yours sincerely, Peter【參考范文【參考范文】Dear Editor, I am a foreign student from America and I am studying in China. I find many p

13、eople break the traffic rules here. For example, some pedestrians cross the streets slowly and some jump over the guardrails in the streets. Some cyclists dont stop when the traffic lights turn red. And they often carry a passenger or more than a light load. Whats worse, many drivers dont fasten their seat belts while driving. Smoking, speaking on mobile phones and speeding while driving can be seen everywhere. In my opinion, these actions are very irresponsible and dangerous. It is our duty to obey the traffic rules. We must treasure our lives an