高中英語短文改錯課件公開課

1、How to do Proof-reading短文改錯Class 7 Senior 2Miss Zhou In our everyday lives, if we make In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, some mistakes, we should correct them, and then we are still a good fellow.and then we are still a good fellow. Chairman Maos words 怎么改？ His

2、 salary is paid by an hour. Lihua hit me on a head. He always has dinner at the table. The teacher said the earth ran around the sun.1. I can go to home now.2. I like history of China.3. I am fond at English.theWrong wordMissing wordofUnnecessary word高考短文改錯的考察方式高考短文改錯的考察方式 下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪

3、除或修改某個單詞。 增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意: 1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤； 2.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。 從錯誤比例上看從錯誤比例上看， 2：1：7或者或者 1：1：8：多多 缺缺 錯錯一般以三種題型出現(xiàn)一般以三種題型出現(xiàn): :增加增加,刪除或修改刪除或修改。設(shè)問的角度有三個設(shè)問的角度有三個：詞法、句法和行文邏輯詞法、句法和行文邏輯。動詞形動詞形，名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)還要注意還要注意形和副形和副代詞代詞格，

4、細(xì)領(lǐng)悟格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟介詞介詞短語須關(guān)注短語須關(guān)注習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧 A Limerick請先念一遍請先念一遍“咒語咒語”吧吧復(fù)雜句子復(fù)雜句子不放過不放過.一、動詞一、動詞形形 1.1.動詞的動詞的時態(tài)時態(tài)和和語態(tài)語態(tài)錯誤錯誤. . 高考鏈接高考鏈接1： However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011 全國）全國）flew Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is some

5、one to rely on.（2008 全國）全國）needed 2.主謂不一致主謂不一致的錯誤的錯誤.高考鏈接高考鏈接: : I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全國卷全國卷2) was3 3. 非謂語動詞非謂語動詞 錯誤高考鏈接高考鏈接: : I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新課標(biāo)全國卷）新課標(biāo)全國卷）buying I was really d

6、isappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. (2011陜西卷陜西卷)disappointed5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise. werelikes excitingget1.Not only the students but also the teacher like the film. 2. When they came here tomorrow, I will show them.3. They eager to know

7、 everything about China and asked me lots of questions. 4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules. practicecomePractice二、名詞二、名詞數(shù)數(shù) 指指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯誤。的用法錯誤。高考鏈接高考鏈接2： It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.（2011新課標(biāo)全國卷）新課標(biāo)全國卷）luggage In early January this year, the r

8、ate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011遼寧卷）遼寧卷）week1.Dont lose hearts, youll be successful in time. 2.I need some more informations. 3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind. heartinformationkindspractice不可數(shù)名詞不可數(shù)名詞progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, info

9、rmation, advicePractice三、還要注意形和副三、還要注意形和副 形容詞和副詞的誤用形容詞和副詞的誤用高考鏈接高考鏈接3： When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）浙江卷）slowly2 2比較級和最高級的混用或誤用比較級和最高級的混用或誤用. .The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陜西）陜西）faster還要注意形和副還要注意形和副 高考鏈接：高考鏈接： Unfortunate, I

10、 had an accident and hit another （2012 浙江卷）浙江卷）UnfortunatelyWe lived in a comfortably double- room with a big bath.(2012陜西）陜西）comfortable 1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. 3. His father looks much more ha

11、ppier today.angrily clear 4. So I grateful accepted the offer. gratefullypracticePractice四四、 代詞代詞格，格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)悟3. it3. it作形主、形賓作形主、形賓、指代時有缺漏指代時有缺漏 (make, find, think)或或固定搭配固定搭配. .高考鏈接高考鏈接4：With the help of Katia, a roommate of me (2011 重慶卷）重慶卷）mineIt was only when we did their chemistry project together

12、 that I began to understand (2010 遼寧卷）遼寧卷）He found difficult to learn math well.ourit1. 1. 人稱代詞，反身代詞，不定代詞人稱代詞，反身代詞，不定代詞2. 2. 代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯誤代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯誤. .2. I was learning to express me in simple English. 3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 4. One day

13、 I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. myselfeverythingit1. Some students may also save up for our college or future use .theirpracticePractice五、五、介詞短語介詞短語須關(guān)注須關(guān)注，習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住 1. 1.主要考查主要考查固定短語，固定介詞固定短語，固定介詞的搭配。的搭配。2.2.介詞的介詞的多用，漏用多用，漏用和和誤用誤用3 3.時間狀語前有指示代詞時間狀語前有指示代詞this, thatthis, that或或o

14、ne, one, next,lastnext,last等修飾時不用介詞等修飾時不用介詞. . eg.Hepaidavisittohisgrandfatheronthatafternoon五、五、介詞短語介詞短語須關(guān)注須關(guān)注，習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住高考鏈接：高考鏈接： Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car.(2012 浙浙 江卷江卷)withI also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. practice1. Im sure the

15、y will laugh to me and see me as a fool. 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.atforonPractice連詞連詞butbut，andand，or, soor, so和和

16、althoughalthough的邏的邏輯性用法錯誤輯性用法錯誤高考鏈接：高考鏈接：六六 、冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧He was right here in the front of me. (2011陜西卷）I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. . . 冠詞冠詞a, ana, an和和thethe的用法錯誤的用法錯誤and1. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door

17、 but turn on the light.2. He will stay there one and two days.3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. andoran The smaller piece is that you want, right ?It is known to us all, all efforts will be paid. Practice makes perfect, th

18、at is very important for us .七七、復(fù)雜句子復(fù)雜句子不放過不放過 what Aswhich1.單詞拼寫不改單詞拼寫不改.2.大小寫不改大小寫不改.3.詞序不改詞序不改.4.標(biāo)點符號不改標(biāo)點符號不改.5.原意不改原意不改.五不改原則五不改原則考 查 目 標(biāo)1 1）識別錯誤）識別錯誤 并正確校正語篇的能力并正確校正語篇的能力2 2）綜合運用英語知識的能力）綜合運用英語知識的能力3 3）準(zhǔn)確理解語篇，掌握內(nèi)容及行文邏）準(zhǔn)確理解語篇，掌握內(nèi)容及行文邏輯的能力輯的能力 下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。 增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,

19、 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意: 1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤； 2.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。解題步驟解題步驟1. 通讀全文，掌握大意通讀全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顧整句理解，上下兼顧3.復(fù)讀全文，復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗證檢查驗證動詞形動詞形，名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)還要注意還要注意形和副形和副代詞代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟介詞介詞短語須關(guān)注短語須關(guān)注習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧 A Limerick請先念一遍請先念一遍“咒語咒

20、語”吧吧復(fù)雜句子復(fù)雜句子不放過不放過再叮囑幾句：再叮囑幾句：1.單詞拼寫不改單詞拼寫不改.2.大小寫不改大小寫不改.3.詞序不改詞序不改.4.標(biāo)點符號不改標(biāo)點符號不改.5.原意不改原意不改.解題步驟解題步驟1.1.通讀全文，掌握大意通讀全文，掌握大意2.2.整句理解，上下兼顧整句理解，上下兼顧3.3.復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗證復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗證五不改原則五不改原則At Christmas Eve, Jim went with hisfather to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as t

21、he room!They put them in the corner of the sittingroom. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room lookedreally beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmastree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing

22、happily.At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his1._father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!3._They put them in the corner of the sitting4._on_chose_tall_it動詞形動詞形介詞短語常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記住介詞短語常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記住還要注意形和副還要注意形和副代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟room. Kate was covered it wit

23、h a lot of5._Christmas light. The sitting room looked6. _really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas8. _tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his9. _parents singing and dancing happily.10._was_lights_beautiful_andwerewere動詞形動詞形還要注意形和副還要注意形和副動詞形動詞形名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)冠詞連詞須關(guān)注冠詞連詞須關(guān)注 I was a high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support my family. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked harder because