英語書面表達錯誤例析

1、英語書面英語書面表達錯誤表達錯誤例析例析 近年來高考英語書面表達閱卷采用新標準，要求考生使用高級句型、高級詞匯，過渡性詞匯和不同表達方式，從而增加文章的可讀性和醒目性，誠然這些都是高考英語書面表達重要考點，然而地刻苦訓(xùn)練達到新標準所規(guī)定要求的同時，千萬不要忘了應(yīng)注意的表達的準確性，這是書面表達最本質(zhì)的東西，也是高考最重要的考點，離開了這一點，高級表達方式就失去了存在意義。一、漢式英語一、漢式英語（誤（誤）Good good study， day day up.（正）（正） Study hard and youll make progress every day.（誤）誤） There is a

2、 notice in the park， saying：“To take notice of safe； slippery sideway” （正）正）There is a notice in the park， saying：“Watch your step. Slippery sideway. “方法點撥”要減少漢式英語必須做到：（1）養(yǎng)成用英語思維進行寫作的習(xí)慣，注意中西文化差異所帶來的不同表達；（2）平時多歸納總結(jié)、糾正漢式英語；（3）多讀原汁原味英語。鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤4. Her age is young.5. Im very like the book.6.

3、Have five people live here.7. Such implanted ads are too many.二、關(guān)系不一致二、關(guān)系不一致（誤誤）In the bedroom there are a bed， a desk and a chair.（正）（正） In the bedroom there is a bed， a sofa， a desk and a chair.鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤1. He closed the door and hurries away to class.2. In spite of its

4、 small size， these cameras can take good pictures.3. If I were you， I wont do that.三、詞性混用三、詞性混用（誤）（誤）60 of the students against the idea of entrance fees.（正）（正）60 of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.（誤）（誤）2 days past before his letter arrived.（正）（正）2 days passed before his letter a

5、rrived.鞏固鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤。練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤。1. I have no difficult in finding your home.2. John always does his homework careful.4. Fortunate， people are beginning to realize how seriously the pollution is.5. The moon like a cake in the sky.四、重復(fù)四、重復(fù)累贅累贅(誤誤) The box is too heavy for the weak boy t

6、o carry it.（正（正）The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.（誤）（誤） We hope to improve our work better.（正）（正） We hope to improve our work.“方法點撥”有些英語單詞本身自帶某個意思，或由于語法需要不能再出現(xiàn)某一單詞，如果學(xué)生基本功不夠扎實，就常常出現(xiàn)造句累贅現(xiàn)象。鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤1. Mary married with John2. I returned back the book to you

7、at 6 a.m3. My most favorite song is “Hand in hand”4. The train is entering into the tunnel.5. Her eyes are blind.6. Well gather together at the school gate.五、選詞或搭配不當(dāng)五、選詞或搭配不當(dāng)（誤）（誤）Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.（正）（正）Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag

8、 on the bus.鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤1. Peter is a warmhearted person, so everybody likes to have friends with him.2. Mr. Smith said an interesting story at the beginning of the meeting.3. Its cold outside, please dress your overcoat.六、無關(guān)聯(lián)詞六、無關(guān)聯(lián)詞（誤）（誤）I am tired, I must go to bed.（正）（正）

9、I am tired, so I must go to bed.“方法點撥方法點撥”英語句子特點之一重英語句子特點之一重“形合形合”，句子的各，句子的各個部分由各種關(guān)聯(lián)詞聯(lián)在一起。而漢語句子重個部分由各種關(guān)聯(lián)詞聯(lián)在一起。而漢語句子重“意意合合”，句子前后連接主要是通過上下文的邏輯意義，句子前后連接主要是通過上下文的邏輯意義來實現(xiàn)，很多學(xué)生在寫作時往往忽略這一點造成來實現(xiàn)，很多學(xué)生在寫作時往往忽略這一點造成句子的錯誤。句子的錯誤。鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤1. You practice more reading, you will improve

10、 your reading ability.2. China is still a developing country, most people cant afford a car yet.3. I arrived at the station, the train had left.4. His living room seemed empty, there were only 2 chairs, a desk and a bed.七、非平行結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯不七、非平行結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯不一致一致（誤）（誤）There were 40 foreigners came to visit our schoo

11、l.（正）（正）There were 40 foreigners who came to visit our school.（正）（正）40 foreigners came to visit our school.（誤）（誤）Without a friend will feel lonely.（正）（正）Without a friend one will feel lonely.“方法點撥方法點撥”一個句子至少包括主語和謂語兩部分一個句子至少包括主語和謂語兩部分（除祈使句外），如果把句子的某一部分當(dāng)成一個（除祈使句外），如果把句子的某一部分當(dāng)成一個句子，就會導(dǎo)致非完整句子。句子無論長短，在安句

12、子，就會導(dǎo)致非完整句子。句子無論長短，在安排上要合乎邏輯，銜接自然，使句內(nèi)之間過渡自然、排上要合乎邏輯，銜接自然，使句內(nèi)之間過渡自然、層次分明。而學(xué)生在習(xí)作中常出現(xiàn)未用過渡詞語、層次分明。而學(xué)生在習(xí)作中常出現(xiàn)未用過渡詞語、非平行結(jié)構(gòu)和語義不完整的分割句等錯誤非平行結(jié)構(gòu)和語義不完整的分割句等錯誤。鞏固鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤。練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤。1. The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher.2. I cant imagine what life would be like if have not

13、 any TV sets.3. Although rained， we went on working.4. There are some students like the game very much.5. Arriving at the station, the train had left.八、句子缺乏統(tǒng)一性八、句子缺乏統(tǒng)一性（誤）（誤）Being an honest man， Tom worked very hard.（正）（正）Being an honest man， Tom never tells a lie.鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中

14、的錯誤1. She must be ill because I saw a doctor going into her room.2. I was born and grew up in Hang Zhou in 1953.九、句子缺乏連貫性或指代不明九、句子缺乏連貫性或指代不明（誤）（誤）Rose falls in love with John is in love with Mary.（正）（正） Rose falls in love with John, while John is in love with Mary.鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中

15、的錯誤1. Every university has many rules and regulations and they must obey them.2. At the age of 10，Toms mother died.十、標點符號誤用標點符號是一種變相文字，是書十、標點符號誤用標點符號是一種變相文字，是書面表達不可缺少的重要手段，很多學(xué)生不了解標點面表達不可缺少的重要手段，很多學(xué)生不了解標點符號的用途以及英漢標點的差異，結(jié)果出現(xiàn)錯誤。符號的用途以及英漢標點的差異，結(jié)果出現(xiàn)錯誤。（誤）誤）China Dailyis a great help to the English learne

16、rs.（正）（正）China Daily is a great help to the English learners.（誤）（誤）Li Ping is not old enough， he can not join the army.（正）（正）Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army/ Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.“方法點撥方法點撥”英語無書名號，報刊、書名等單詞首字英語無書名號，報刊、書名等單詞首字母大寫，或斜體；一般情況下，一個主謂結(jié)構(gòu)就構(gòu)母大寫，或斜體；一般情況下，一個主謂結(jié)構(gòu)就構(gòu)成一個英語句子，句末應(yīng)用句號。成一個英語句子，句末應(yīng)用句號。鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤鞏固練習(xí)：找出并改正下列各詞句中的錯誤1. I like many subjects such as Chinese, maths, history ,English , physics and chemistry.2. The owner of the shop came to see what was the matter？3. John