關(guān)于全國(guó)廣播電視大學(xué)英語(yǔ)專業(yè)學(xué)生優(yōu)秀項(xiàng)目設(shè)計(jì)評(píng)選..ppt課件

1、關(guān)于關(guān)于的幾個(gè)問題的幾個(gè)問題對(duì)外經(jīng)濟(jì)貿(mào)易大學(xué)黃震華2006年10月于福建邵武關(guān)于關(guān)于的幾個(gè)問題的幾個(gè)問題評(píng)選的總體情況回想課程的性質(zhì)和目的要求回想對(duì)商務(wù)工程設(shè)計(jì)書的要求引薦設(shè)計(jì)書的優(yōu)點(diǎn)存在的問題幾點(diǎn)建議評(píng)選的總體情況評(píng)選的總體情況一等獎(jiǎng)一名，二等獎(jiǎng)三名，三等獎(jiǎng)六名，優(yōu)秀獎(jiǎng)十六名。比上次抽查的情況有明顯提高。各有所長(zhǎng)，綜合評(píng)選，相對(duì)平衡。重點(diǎn)看最后的定稿，由于教師修正的度有所不同，因此排在前面的學(xué)生實(shí)踐程度不一定比后面的高?；叵胝n程的性質(zhì)和目的要求回想課程的性質(zhì)和目的要求電大英語(yǔ)專業(yè) 商務(wù)方向?qū)？破瘘c(diǎn)本科的實(shí)際和論文環(huán)節(jié)對(duì)商務(wù)工程設(shè)計(jì)有較全面的認(rèn)識(shí)學(xué)會(huì)進(jìn)展調(diào)查研討和資料匯總了解工程設(shè)計(jì)書的格式用

2、流暢正確的英語(yǔ)撰寫設(shè)計(jì)書最后文稿回想成果評(píng)定規(guī)范回想成果評(píng)定規(guī)范中心小組座談：5%顧客情況分析： 5%SWOT分析：10%工程實(shí)施流程圖：5%工程框架圖：10%風(fēng)險(xiǎn)分析：5%工程方案書：60%回想對(duì)最后文本的要求回想對(duì)最后文本的要求l 它大體應(yīng)包括：附信、封面、摘要、引見、正文、預(yù)算、懇求人資歷與閱歷、附錄等部分。正文是其中的重點(diǎn)。但附信和摘要也很重要。 附錄可包括工程涉及過程中的階段成果和素材，如調(diào)查會(huì)記錄等。引薦設(shè)計(jì)書的優(yōu)點(diǎn)引薦設(shè)計(jì)書的優(yōu)點(diǎn)選題新穎與本職任務(wù)相關(guān)摘要明晰圖表設(shè)計(jì)吸引人言語(yǔ)得當(dāng)、正確教師輔導(dǎo)和修正仔細(xì)檔案資料齊全選題選題Shrimp feed production lineT

3、raining center (4)Railway department expansionRenting centerService promotionTranslation servicesShop expansion10 out of the other 16 on shops and training centers與本職任務(wù)相關(guān)與本職任務(wù)相關(guān)蝦飼料水產(chǎn)飼料公司單證制造培訓(xùn)中心銀行港口鐵路擴(kuò)展集裝箱碼頭漢語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)中心培訓(xùn)中心南方電大普遍在商務(wù)方向的工程設(shè)計(jì)比較好。摘要明晰摘要明晰Example One：Duck feed：high cost and low selling price S

4、hrimp feed: low cost and high selling priceWhen the production line is completed, it can produce 3 tons of shrimp feed per hour. The annual production capacity is 12,000 tons.The investment is 4 million RMB yuan, All the funds will be borrowed from C&B Group Co. Ltd., taking the shrimp feed equi

5、pment as the collateral. Repayment of capital and interest will be 272,000 yuan per year. The repayment period will be fifteen years.摘要明晰摘要明晰Example Two:On We Go English Training Center will be set up in Chenghai District and Chaoyang District, Shantou, to offer flexible styles of teaching by a team

6、 of native-speaking and non-native speaking English language teaching professionals.It will occupy 1,000 square meters in downtown Chenghai District and Chaoyang District respectively.The project will allow us to gain a revenue of 1,440,000 yuan and a profit of 180,000 yuan in the first year after t

7、he plan is accomplished. These figures will be raised by 15% in the next two years.The total investment of the project is 600,000 yuan. 圖表設(shè)計(jì)吸引人圖表設(shè)計(jì)吸引人進(jìn)程圖明晰；彩色線形圖表示價(jià)錢、收益走向；彩色條形圖表示市場(chǎng)需求與消費(fèi)才干對(duì)比；彩色餅形圖表示市場(chǎng)份額、顧客構(gòu)成等；利潤(rùn)預(yù)測(cè)表包括：銷售量；銷售收入；銷售折扣；凈銷售收入；消費(fèi)本錢原料，包裝，制造費(fèi)用；毛利；銷售費(fèi)用管理本錢，借貸支出；稅前利潤(rùn)。有的還附了地圖。 言語(yǔ)得當(dāng)正確言語(yǔ)得當(dāng)正確Exampl

8、e：We plan to set up On We Go English Training Center in Chenghai District and Chaoyang District, Shantou within three months, offering flexible styles of teaching by English language teaching professionals, both Chinese and English native speakers. The business goal of the center is to provide train

9、ing in communicative English. There are four reasons to launch this training center. First, as the world is becoming a global village, English, as an international language, is increasingly important. In addition, Chinas accession to the WTO and s success in bidding for the 2019 Olympics have also b

10、oosted the enthusiasm of leaning English in the country. 言語(yǔ)得當(dāng)正確言語(yǔ)得當(dāng)正確Example (contd)Second, there are so many industrial companies and household workshops exporting their products to foreign countries in Chenghai District and Chaoyang District. According to the Shantou Human Resources Website, the d

11、emand for foreign trade professionals with good English proficiency in these two districts is over 20,000, much more than the supply. Third, there is only one language training center in Chenghai District, while in Chaoyang District, there is none. Last but not the least, vocational English training

12、 is a newly emerging market offering the potential for a good return of the capital.教師輔導(dǎo)和修正仔細(xì)教師輔導(dǎo)和修正仔細(xì)內(nèi)容，文字，建議。Your outline looks great! You have already done a lot of work. It is important to be very clear as to what your project is. I know from your “Discussion sheet that you are expanding the fee

13、d line, but in your summary you will have to make it clear whether you are adding another line in this old building or you are shutting down and doing a renovation. If you are using an old building and equipment, did you have to buy it or did it belong to your company? If you have to shut down to re

14、novate the existing plant, this is also a financial cost that must be considered.檔案資料齊全檔案資料齊全畢業(yè)設(shè)計(jì)冊(cè)的運(yùn)用各階段的原始資料調(diào)查表的設(shè)計(jì)和反響電子文本有的還附了調(diào)查會(huì)的照片和錄音有的還附上參考文獻(xiàn)目錄存在問題存在問題程序不夠規(guī)范“借用較多言語(yǔ)質(zhì)量問題內(nèi)容方面的問題教師指點(diǎn)力度程序不夠規(guī)范程序不夠規(guī)范Covering letter 不齊全；教師評(píng)語(yǔ)和輔導(dǎo)記錄有的有后補(bǔ)的跡象；報(bào)送資料的工程不一致；各校正爭(zhēng)辯要求不一致，普通都很簡(jiǎn)單；有的爭(zhēng)辯記錄只記錄了問題，沒有記錄學(xué)生的回答?！敖栌幂^多借用較多不少選題與教材比較接近；因此文字也與教材比較接近；SMART specific, measurable, agreed, realistic, time-bound)分析“借用課文。言語(yǔ)質(zhì)量問題言語(yǔ)質(zhì)量問題文體問題 hereinafter, 省略方式等This project will seemingly qualify .Therefore 的用法不完好句主謂語(yǔ)不一致非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)介詞詞性名詞單復(fù)數(shù)內(nèi)容方面的問題內(nèi)容方面的問題 缺covering