Unit9.4第九單元專題9.4Writing-八年級英語人教版(下冊)

1、Unit 9Have you ever been to a museum?課時 4 Writing寫作目標(biāo)本單元的協(xié)作任務(wù)是一篇關(guān)于旅游或介紹旅游景點(diǎn)的短文，可以介紹自己游覽過的一個地方，也可以介 紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)，或者介紹一處名勝古跡。寫作時，開頭可點(diǎn)出要介紹的地方，中間具體介紹好玩的景點(diǎn),結(jié)尾要寫出自己的感受。時態(tài)可以用一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時或現(xiàn)在完成時。寫作指導(dǎo)1 .描寫某地的景色或景觀時，一般要遵循的原則是：從總體到局部，從外到內(nèi)。2 .這類文章一般包括三段：開頭是總體介紹，引出主題；中間是正文，具體介紹此地的特色，如著名的建筑、風(fēng)景名勝等；第三部分是結(jié)尾。3 .描寫某地的短文屬于說明文體

2、，要弄清時間的立足點(diǎn)是"過去"、"現(xiàn)在"，還是"將來"。4 .表達(dá)方式要有所變化，景物描寫用詞容易重復(fù)、單調(diào)，因此寫作時應(yīng)選用不同的句式和表達(dá)方式來描述事物，使表達(dá)方式多樣化?！八牟椒ā苯榻B某地的文章: 第一步：先整體介紹某地。包括位置、人口及環(huán)境等。第二步：寫可以做的事情及可以參觀的地方。 第三步：寫出可以吃的食物。第四步：最后寫出氣候條件及祝福語。常用句型1. 位置(location )be located/situated in/on/at/to; lie in/on/at/toin the center of; in/to/o

3、n the east of2. 面積(area)cover/have an area of；with an area ofIt is long/wide (from east to west).3. 氣候 (climate)The climate varies/is different from place to place neither too hot nor too cold4. 交通 (transportation)It is very convenient forThe best /nearest way tois It takes takeataxi/bus/walk from t

4、o5. 人口 (population)have/with a (large) population (ofThe population of is percent ofthe population are 6. 歷史 (history)have/with a history of yearsdate from/ date back to7. 資源 (resources)be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resourcesbe famous/well- known for/as mainly produce The main agricultural produ

5、cts are8. 景色 (scenery)is known as/ is famous for/is home toplaces of interestscenic spots7. 特色 (character)The place is famous for The special character of the place isSomething special in the place is （一）海南島是中國的第二大島。它環(huán)境非常優(yōu)美，每年都有很多游客到此來旅游。根據(jù)下面的信息，寫一篇短文。要求：90詞左右。Hainan Islandthe second largest island

6、in China, beautiful , the temperature is almost the same all year roundPopulationmore than 9 millionThings you can doscubadiving （潛水）,fishing, swimming, surfing and boatingPlaces you can visitTianya Haijiao, Nanwan Monkey IslandFoodRice in Bamboo, Hainan powder【佳作展示】Hainan Island A place you will ne

7、ver forget!Hainan Island is the second largest island in China. The population is more than 9 million. It's a beautiful place to take a holiday.There are many things you can do, such as scuba-diving （ 潛水）,fishing, swimming, surfing and boating. You can also visit Tianya Haijiao and Nanwan Monkey

8、 Island.Have you ever tried Hainan food ? In Hainan you should also try a lot of delicious food like Rice in Bamboo, Hainan powder,etc.The temperature in Hainan is almost the same all year round. If you go there, I'm sure you will enjoy yourself.【名師點(diǎn)評】本文第一段先介紹海南島的整體情況。然后介紹在海南可做的事情及可參觀的地方。第三段描 寫在

9、海南島你可以品嘗的食物。最后寫海南島的氣候及祝福語。整體內(nèi)容緊湊，語句連貫。本文添彩點(diǎn)：文章很有條理，通過四步法，使文章顯得更緊湊。恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了本單元所學(xué)的句型Have you ever tried. food ？及短語 all year round ，足以見得作者深厚的寫作功底。（二）請結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，描述你去過的最有趣的一所公園（游樂場） 。要點(diǎn)提示：1. 公園的名稱、地理位置和基本設(shè)施；2. 介紹公園的特色或最吸引你的地方；3. 邀請大家多到這個地方玩。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名字。2. 語句連貫，詞數(shù)80 左右?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】 細(xì)審題，列要點(diǎn)1. 介紹公園的名

10、稱、地理位置和基本設(shè)施。2. 描述公園的特色。3. 邀請大家到此游玩。 遣詞句，重結(jié)構(gòu)第一部分： 開門見山 （介紹公園的位置和基本設(shè)施。用一般現(xiàn)在時。我去過的最有趣的公園是長隆海洋王國。The most interesting park I have been to is .它坐落在珠海的橫琴島上。It lies in .公園里有各種各樣的動物和表演。There are .我們還可以找到購物中心、餐廳和酒店。We can also find .（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況描述，挑有代表的性的建筑來講。 ）第二部分： 突出特色（描述具體的特色，以公園的常規(guī)活動為例時，動詞用一般現(xiàn)在時。 ）海洋王國最吸引我的是

11、大游行。The most attractive thing of the park is .大游行每天三次。We can see the cruise .游行開始時，游客站在路的兩旁。When it begins, visitors will stand on .游行人員沿路又唱又跳，還會和游客玩游戲。The people , they also with the visitors.這讓游客們很高興。It makes the visitors .第三部分： 邀請出游（提建議時可以選用各種提建議的句型。 ）快到海洋王國玩一玩吧！So, to Chimelong and .【佳作展示】The Mo

12、st Interesting Park I Have Been toThe most interesting park that I have ever been to is the Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. It lies in Hengqin island in Zhuhai, Guangdong Province. There are many animals and shows in the park. We can find public toilets, shopping centers, restaurants and hotels inside.The

13、most attractive thing of the park to me is the cruise. We can see the cruise three times in the park. everyday When it begins, visitors will stand on both sides of the road. The people in the cruise dance and sing along the way. They also play games with visitors when they walk. It makes the visitor

14、s happy.So, come to Chime long! Have fun in the Ocean Kingdom!（一）你到過什么地方？你對它有什么深刻的印象？請用英語寫一篇短文來介紹你游歷過的城市或風(fēng)景點(diǎn)。80詞左右。（二）假設(shè)英語課上將以“家鄉(xiāng)的名勝”為話題展開討論，請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹中國十大歷史文化名街之一的福州坊十巷。位置：市中心交逋：便利特色三坊七巷【hree Lanes and Seven AL leys老式建筑,明清國格 名人故居,保護(hù)完好 民俗展示，傳承文化 美食特產(chǎn).品種聿畜感想（寫1 2點(diǎn)）要求:1 .內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，語句通順，

15、書寫規(guī)范；2 .請不要逐字翻譯；詞數(shù) 90左右，不包含已給出的句子的詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：便利的 convenient明清風(fēng)格 the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty故居 former home 民俗 folk custom 傳承 pass on 特產(chǎn) special local productThree Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou is among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China . 參考答案 （一）【思路點(diǎn)撥】這是一篇要你介紹你游歷過的城市或風(fēng)景點(diǎn)

16、的文章。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料， 然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。 根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題， 不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縃ave you ever been to Wuhan? I went there several times. I think it' s really a beautiful city. I fell in love with it when I first traveled th

17、ere. It has many nice places. The traffic is fine, and the people are friendly. There are some beautiful parks such as the Zhongshan Park, the East Lake Park and the Liberation Park. In the zoo, you can see many kinds of animals. You can easily buy what you want, because there are supermarkets every

18、where. You can see tall buildings up and down the streets. And the streets are wide and tidy. Trees can be seen everywhere. Buses and taxis can take you where you want to go. The drivers are polite. You will feel comfortable. There is an airport in Wuhan. You can fly to the foreign countries and tak

19、e air trips freely. Please travel to Wuhan. I would like to be your tour guide.（二）【思路點(diǎn)撥】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要用第三人 稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致問題。注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英 語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！緟⒖挤段摹縏hree Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou is among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China. It lies in the city center and the traffic is convenient. It is famous for old buildings in the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty. Many famo