《中考英語總復習》熱點 09 共享單車 -2021年中考英語作文熱點素材+精彩范文

1、熱點09 共享單車 共享單車無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預測話題是：共享單車。 【預測題目】（一）共享單車為人們的出行帶來了越來越多的便利，可是人們在享用的時候卻帶來了一系列的問題。比如有人把單車帶回了老家，有人使用自己的二維碼騙取使用者的錢財，有人隨意停放共享單車，有人甚至將共享單車扔到溝里，河里請你寫一封倡議書，倡議人們熱愛公共資源，保護公共資源，合理使用公共資源，如此，我們的生活才會因為公共設施的改善而變得更加美好。請從以下三個方面去談：1.共享單車方便了人們的出行，減少污染，有利于環(huán)境的改善。2.列舉人們對共享單車的破壞行

2、為。3.合理使用共享單車，熱愛公共資源，做一個文明的深圳人。要求：1.詞數(shù)至少80詞，要包含上述三個方面的內(nèi)容，不必字字翻譯。2.所給詞匯僅作參考，不必都用。3.文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：qr code（二維碼）, public resources（公共資源）, cheat people of their money（騙錢）, environmentally friendly（環(huán)保的），low-carbon life（低碳生活）, civilization（明）, progress（進步）dear allrecently, more and more colorful share

3、d bikes can be seen in the streets. they are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. _ _【答案】dear allrecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. they are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. people can use it anytime and anywhere. somet

4、imes people work so late that they dont have a car, so they can go home by share bikes. there are also people who are usually busy with work and dont have enough time to exercise. they will share bikes to go to work instead of driving, which can not only reduce the damage and environmental pollution

5、 but also be beneficial to physical and mental health.however, people have brought a series of problems when enjoying bicycle sharing. for example, someone brought the bike back to his hometown, someone used his own qr code to cheat the user's money, someone parked the bike at will, some people

6、even threw the bike into a ditch, a river and so on.i think people should love public resources and protect them, not destroy them. only in this way our lives will be better because of the improvement of public facilities.【詳解】1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇議論文，主要是針對共享單車給人們帶來的便利以及人們對共享單車的一些破壞行為的表述，以及提出的一些自己的看法，對帶來的便利和

7、人們對其的破壞闡述的比較詳細，也是本文的重點可以通過三個方面進行闡述。2. 例文點評：文章主要采取三段式，第一段主要說明共享單車給人們的生活帶來的便利好處，第二段主要寫了人們對共享單車所做的一些破壞行為，第三段主要寫了一些倡議，提倡人們熱愛公共資源。文章結構比較緊密，語言通順，結構嚴謹。3. 高分亮點：短語：be busy with；instead of；be beneficial to；a series of；for example；not only but also。句型：so that引導的結果狀語從句；who引導的定語從句；when引導的時間狀語從句；i think賓語從句。（二）共享

8、單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。假設你是紅星中學九年級學生李華，你的美國朋友jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國最新出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，并請你做個簡要介紹。請你給jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 這種單車的使用方法（如：app查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等）；2. 這種單車的優(yōu)勢；3. 你對這種單車的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：智能手機smartphone；掃碼scan the qr code；交通工具a means of transportation。dear jim,im siting to tell you more about

9、 the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. _hope to ride a mobike with you in china.yours,li hua【答案】dear jim,im writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.its very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. what you

10、do is to find a nearest mobike through the app, scan the qr code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. it is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation,

11、 which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.hope to ride a mobike with you in china. yours,li hua【解析】這是一篇要求介紹關于共享單車的一些事情。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。（一）2018年1月以來，瓊海市開

12、始推廣使用共享單車，你對這一舉措有什么看法？請根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，談談共享單車的利弊及使用共享單車的建議，以便在英語課上與同學們交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, dont bring home要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當發(fā)揮；3.

13、 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右。(文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in qionghai. many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. i think_ whats your opinion about shared bikes? will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】recently shared bikes can

14、 be seen everywhere on the street in qionghai. many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. i think its a good idea. as we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. whats more, it costs little to use them. however, some people park bikes in wrong plac

15、es after they use them. sometimes its hard to find a bike on the street. and bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. at the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. dont bring it home or ke

16、ep it your own. whats your opinion about shared bikes? will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，whats more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而as we k

17、now cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ whats more, it costs little to use them. / at the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多種插入語句式的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量

18、使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。（二）共享單車（sharing bikes)給我們提供了更健康、更環(huán)保的出行方式。但與此同時，種種不文明現(xiàn)象也相繼出現(xiàn)。假如你是小記者，請根據(jù)以下的要點寫一篇關于共享單車的優(yōu)點以及存在問題的相關報道。1. 短文應包含以上所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息；3. 詞數(shù)：80 詞左右 (開頭:已:給出，不計入詞數(shù)）lately, have you noticed something new in our city? they ar

19、e orange, yellow, blue and greenthey are sharing bikes which are becoming more and more popular._【答案】lately, have you noticed something new in our city? they are orange, yellow, blue and greenthey are sharing bikes which are becoming more and more popular.there are a lot of advantages of sharing bik

20、es. firstly, it can be rented everywhere. it is so convenient. secondly, riding sharing bikes instead of driving cars can reduce pollution and it is good for the environment. thirdly, it is cheaper than taking other kinds of transportation and it can help us save some money.however, it is facing som

21、e problems now. for example, some people parked the sharing bikes here and there, which is bad for the road safety. whats worse, some of the sharing bikes were broken or even stolen by some selfish persons.in my opinion, government should set rules to force the users to obey the rules. the person wh

22、o broke or stole the bikes should be punished by government. lets try to make bike-sharing, a green way of city transport have a better future.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫作要點。這些要點構成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)

23、系緊密，符合邏輯關系。（三）現(xiàn)在正在推廣使用共享單車， 提倡人們“綠色出行， 低碳生活” 現(xiàn)在某英文網(wǎng)站就此話題征文，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點 用英語寫一篇短文投稿， 談談推廣共享單車的好處。內(nèi)容要點：1.首先, 騎自行車出行方便，可以隨時租還（rent and return）; 2.其次, 如果更多的人騎自行車， 街道上就不會那么擁擠；3.最重要的是， 騎自行車幾乎沒有污染， 有助于保護環(huán)境。要求：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點， 可適當發(fā)揮。2.80詞左右， 開頭已給出， 不計入總詞數(shù)。now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in

24、 china. i think its a good thing_ _ 【答案】now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in china. i think its a good thing.first of all, its convenient for people to go out by bike. they can rent and return the bikes at any time. secondly, as we know, there is heavy traffic when people go to

25、 school or work. if more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets wont be as crowed as they are now. the most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect environment, because there will be less pollution.i hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low

26、-carbon life.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容是根據(jù)所給的要點 用英語寫一篇短文，談談推廣共享單車的好處。我們可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：1. 首先，騎自行車出行方便，可以隨時租還（rent and return）；2. 其次，如果更多的人騎自行車，街道上就不會那么擁擠；3. 最重要的是，騎自行車幾乎沒有污染，有助于保護環(huán)境。2.例文點評：例文采用三段式；時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第一人稱。第一段開篇點題，提出共享單車。第二段介紹推廣共享單車的益處。第三段呼吁人們“綠色出行， 低碳生活”。 3.高分亮點：短語：first of all；go out

27、；at any time；as we know；go to school；more and more。句型：1. first of all, its convenient for people to go out by bike. 首先，人們騎自行車出門是很方便的。first of all首先；it is +形容詞 for sb. to do sth. 對某人來說做某事是的。2. the most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect environment, because there will be less pollu

28、tion. 最重要的是騎自行車可以保護環(huán)境，因為污染會減少。that引導表語從句；because引導原因狀語從句；there will be將會有。（四）最近，“共享單車(bike-sharing)”風靡錫城，大街小巷隨處可見五顏六色的自行車。請你根據(jù)以下表格信息寫一篇關于共享單車的英語短文。種類6種；約4萬輛；優(yōu)勢1. 人們使用方便；花費少；2. 得到鍛煉，有利健康；3. 減少交通壓力；4. 弊端1. 有些人不愛惜自行車；2. 有些人做違法的事；建議1. 使用完，保持自行車排放有序；2. 注意：1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2. 短文開頭已給出，省略號處共須23句話作

29、適當發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)90個左右；4. 參考詞匯：減少 reduce；壓力 stress / pressurenowadays, bike-sharing has been popular in wuxi. a large number of colourful bicycles can be seen everywhere in the streets。_ _ 【答案】nowadays, bike-sharing has been popular in wuxi. a large number of colourful bicycles can be seen everywhere in th

30、e streets. there are six different kinds of bicycles. about 40000 bicycles have been/are in service/use. bike-sharing has brought some advantages. people can use them easily but pay a little. riding is a good exercise and is good for our health. it helps to reduce traffic stress. it also helps to pr

31、otect the environment. but it has caused some problems. some people can't use bicycles properly. others even do something against the law. i hope that people should keep bicycles in order after riding them. we should take good care of bicycles.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達共享單車的優(yōu)點、缺點以及建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文

32、意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如advantages, be good for, help to do, properly, against the law, in order以及take good care of等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料

33、。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。1. its our duty to save water2. as we know, water is very impo

34、rtant to man,3. we cant live without water.4. the amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5. but some people dont care about it.6. many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. something must be done to stop the pollution.7. its our duty to protect our environment。8. it is very i

35、mportant to take care of our environment9. we should not throw litter onto the ground10. we should not spit in a public place/ cut down the treesin recent days, we have to face i problem_a, which is becoming more and more ser

36、ious. first, _（說明a的現(xiàn)狀）. second,  _（舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀）. confronted with a, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. for one thing,  _（解決方法一）. for anoth

37、er _（解決方法二）. finally, _（解決方法三）. personally, i believe that_（我的解決方法）. consequently,  im confident that a bright future is waiting us because _（帶來的好處）.（一）共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了

38、一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給21世紀英文報寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢隨處可見，出行方便有益健康，減少污染費用不高，負擔得起存在問題未及時歸還占道擋路你的觀點我認為-參考詞匯：公共自行車public bicycles注意事項：1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中“你的觀點”一欄用2-3句話展開合理想象，做適當發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)在90個左右，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our dai

39、ly life._ _ 【答案】public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. they have won high praise since they appeared. public bicycles have brought us many advantages. they can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on public bicycles. also, riding bicycles not only i

40、s good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. whats more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. but there are some problems too. some people cant return public bicycles in time. sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. i

41、think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. after all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿，介紹對共享單車看法。作文應包括4個主要內(nèi)容，一個是社會現(xiàn)狀，第二個優(yōu)點，第三是存在的問題，最后發(fā)表個人的觀點。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。要注意上下文的連貫，將這些內(nèi)容有機的連接起來，不要逐句翻譯。使用一些好的句型和短語，注意正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動詞的形式，還需要注意英語表達和漢語習慣的不同，讓整

42、篇短文表達流暢。（二）共享單車(shared bikes)在廈門投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，它是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給21世紀英文報寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢1.隨處可見，出行方便2.有益健康，減少污染3.費用不高，負擔得起存在問題1.未及時歸還2.占道擋路你的觀點我認為(考生自擬，至少2點)注意事項:1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中“你的觀點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象。作適當發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)在90個左右，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily l