【公開(kāi)課課件】思維導(dǎo)圖破解高中作文求助信

1、6. 求助信求助信6. 求助信求助信文體概述：求助信是當(dāng)個(gè)人遇到一些無(wú)法解決的問(wèn)題或困難時(shí)向別人請(qǐng)求幫助的一種書(shū)信。通常包括三個(gè)方面：1.表明寫(xiě)信目的請(qǐng)求幫助；2.清晰講述請(qǐng)求幫助的具體內(nèi)容；3.希望得到幫助。常用語(yǔ)塊1.do sb.a favor/gives b.a hand2.turn to sb.for help/asks b for help3.be faced/confronted with4.have trouble in doing sth.5.in order to do sth.6.be eager to do sth./long todos th. 7.take sth.

2、into consideration幫助某人幫助某人向某人求助向某人求助面對(duì)面對(duì)/臨臨在某方面有困難在某方面有困難為了做某事事為了做某事事渴望做某事渴望做某事把某事考慮在內(nèi)把某事考慮在內(nèi)8.be gratefuIto sb.for sth.9.pay attention to 10.prepare for sth.11.be upset about sth.12.be confused about sth.13.concentrate/focus on sth.14.spare ones effort todos th.15.be keen on因某事感激某人因某事感激某人注意注意準(zhǔn)備某事準(zhǔn)備

3、某事集中精力做某集中精力做某對(duì)某事感到心煩對(duì)某事感到心煩對(duì)對(duì).感到困惑感到困惑努力做某事努力做某事渴熱衷于渴熱衷于.In order to do sth.開(kāi)頭句背景背景Therefore, lam writing to ask for help.Recently, I have met some problems in(doing) sth., which troubles me alot.寫(xiě)信寫(xiě)信目的目的Therefore, I am writing to ask whether you can do開(kāi)頭句目的開(kāi)頭句目的me a favor.I have no choice but to t

4、urn to you for help.I hope you would be so kind as to give me somesuggestions on the following problems.l am being faced/confronted with., which makesme very upset.篇中句主主題題句句To begin with, I find it extremely hard todos th.It would be appreciative if you could.具體問(wèn)具體問(wèn)題題/請(qǐng)求請(qǐng)求Besides, it is the.that puz

5、zles/troubles me alot.Finally, would you please.?I sincerely hope that you can help me.I have the confidence that with your help I can.I would appreciate it very much if you could take my request into consideration.結(jié)結(jié)尾尾句句我希望我希望我相信我相信我感激我感激我期待我期待I am looking forward to you early reply.二、范文思維導(dǎo)圖(2016年全

6、國(guó)l卷)假定你是李華, 暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職, 已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷(resume) 。給外教Ms Jenkins寫(xiě)信, 請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format) 。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 已使行文連貫。How are you doing?I am Li Hua.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take apart-time job in a foreign capital company during the summer vacation.Therefore, I

7、 am writing to ask whether you can do me a favor.問(wèn)問(wèn)候候自我自我介紹介紹寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)作背景背景寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)作目的目的第第一一段段 I am eager for your help in the following problems.第二段主主題題句句To begin with, I have already finished my job applicationletter and resume, but it is clear that there are some mistakes.I would appreciate it if you could

8、help me correct them.具體問(wèn)題具體問(wèn)題Besides, I would like you to tell me whether theformat has been witten correctly?Finally, would you please tell me if there is anythingelse to pay attention to?I sincerely hope that you can spare your precious time to help meI have the confidence that suceed with your he

9、lp.第第三三段段我希望我希望我相信我相信我期待我期待I am looking forward to you early reply.參考范文Dear Ms Jenkins, How are you doing? I am LiHua. In order to get some practicaIexperience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capitaIcompany during the summer vacation.Therefore, I am writing to ask whether you can

10、 dome a favor.I am eager for your help in the following problems. To begin with, I have already finished my job application letter and resume, but it is clear that there are some mistakes. I would appreciate it if you could help me correct them. Besides, I would like you to telIme whether the format

11、 has been written correctly? Finnally, would you please telIme if there anything else to pay attention to? we sincerely hope that you can help us. We have the confidence that we wilImake a good brochure with your help. Looking forward to your early help.三、即時(shí)練習(xí)（求助信）假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社成員李華, 為了迎接100周年校慶, 英語(yǔ)社要制作一

12、本英文宣傳手冊(cè)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件給外教Mr.Smith, 請(qǐng)求他的幫忙。要點(diǎn)如下：1.2.提出你的需求。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫問(wèn)候問(wèn)候自我介紹自我介紹.寫(xiě)作背景寫(xiě)作背景套話(huà)套話(huà)第第一一段段第二第二段段第三第三段段求求助助信信寫(xiě)作目的寫(xiě)作目的主旨句主旨句具體問(wèn)題具體問(wèn)題即時(shí)練習(xí)參考范文：Dear Mr Smith.How are you doing? LiHua, a member of English club in our school. Inorder to celebrate the 100th birthday, the English club i

13、s planning to make an English language brochure. Therefore, I am writing to ask whether you can do us a favor.We are eager for your help in the following problems.To begin with, it is such an important event that we spare our efforts to make a perfect brochure.We would appreciate it if you could give us some advice on how to design a brochure. Besides, please polish our writing since there are unavoidable some mistakes. Finally, you are keen on photography.Would