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寫(xiě)作素能培養(yǎng) 第三部分 第五講運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯與句式 打造作文亮點(diǎn) 寫(xiě)作時(shí) 高級(jí)詞匯與高級(jí)句式 如能運(yùn)用貼切自然 哪怕整篇文章只用上一兩處 也會(huì)為你的作文增添色彩 贏得閱卷老師的青睞 一 使用高級(jí)詞匯高級(jí)詞匯主要是指 考試大綱 中沒(méi)有列入的 但在實(shí)際運(yùn)用中使用較頻繁的詞匯 大綱中較常用詞匯通過(guò)構(gòu)詞形成的詞匯也屬于高級(jí)詞匯 是否使用高級(jí)詞匯 可以基本判斷該考生所掌握的詞匯量 1 挖掘綱外詞匯有些單詞在英語(yǔ) 考試大綱 中確實(shí)未曾出現(xiàn) 但在閱讀時(shí)經(jīng)常碰到 如 annoyed currently等 Hewas thatshehadforgottenhisbirthday annoyed比angry高級(jí) Chinais intheprimarystageofsocialism currently比now高級(jí) annoyed currently 2 挖掘可替代詞匯使用詞組 習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替簡(jiǎn)單枯燥的詞匯 如 用makefulluseof代替use catchsightof代替see lookforwardto代替hope等 Wehadbetter somethinginexpensive makefulluseof比use高級(jí) Finallyhe theyoungman slightovercoatinthedistance catchsightof比see生動(dòng) I m yourvisitnextweek lookforwardto比hope高級(jí) makefulluseof caughtsightof lookingforwardto 3 挖掘 味感 詞匯有的單詞很常見(jiàn) 且 洋味 十足 表達(dá)地道 非常有 味感 這類詞也被視為高級(jí)詞匯 如share view drive等 Weall oneandthesameplanet share比livein更有 味感 Wecan theprobleminmanyways view比lookat更有內(nèi)涵 Thenoisenexttothedoor memad 用drive而不用make share view drove possess endless putupwith turnedadeafearto promote challenging 二 使用高級(jí)句式 讓句子靚起來(lái)1 恰當(dāng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020 AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020 I mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas I mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas 2 使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句 Asasayinggoes thelittlethingmattersmost Asasayinggoes itisthelittlethingthatmattersmost Ourparentshavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward It sourparentswhohavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward 3 使用倒裝句 Thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway Onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy Ididn trealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativewaysuntilthen NotuntilthendidIrealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativeways 4 使用省略句 Ifitisso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Ifso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart 5 使用感嘆句 Itisaverysplendidmoment Howsplendidamomentitis Iamveryworriedabouthiscondition HowworriedIamabouthiscondition 6 使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim andwecanseesweatonhisface Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim withsweatonhisface Asthesocietydevelopsrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer Withthesocietydevelopingrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer 7 使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣 Itishightimeforbothchildrenandparentstotakeactiontomakesmallchanges Itishightimethatbothchildrenandparentstookactiontomakesmallchanges Imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp Withoutyourhelp Iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar Aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 4 Ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 省略句 5 Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday 感嘆句 6 Becausetherewastoomuchnoise Icouldn tgoonstudying with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) Ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday Withthenoisegoingon Icouldn tgoonstudying 三 如何寫(xiě)好therebe句型1 Therebe句型的基本意義 某地有某物Thereisanincreaseofabout10percent comparedwithlastyear 與去年相比較 大約增加了百分之十 名師點(diǎn)撥由于受漢語(yǔ)影響 有些同學(xué)在使用這個(gè)句型時(shí)常常把be誤用成have的某種形式 下午將有一場(chǎng)演講 Thereisgoingtohavealecturethisafternoon Thereisgoingtobealecturethisafternoon 2 Wheretherebe therebe 哪里有 哪里就有 Asthedetailedanalysesabovehaveshownus wherethereislife thereishope 正如上面詳盡的論述所示 活著就有希望 3 Therebe 名詞 分詞短語(yǔ)Therearethreefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows 有三個(gè)因素促成了下面的觀點(diǎn) 名師點(diǎn)撥在這一句型中 有些同學(xué)常常把分詞誤用成動(dòng)詞原形 有些學(xué)生支持這個(gè)主意 Therearesomestudentssupporttheidea Therearesomestudentssupportingtheidea Somestudentssupporttheidea 4 Therebe nodoubt nodenying noneed nosense nouse that 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn) 不可否認(rèn) 沒(méi)有必要 沒(méi)有意義 沒(méi)有用 Thereisnosenseinwaitingherewithoutknowingwhenhewillcomeback 在這里傻等卻不知道他什么時(shí)候回來(lái) 一點(diǎn)意義都沒(méi)有 5 Therebe的非謂語(yǔ)形式therebeing 動(dòng)詞 ing形式 theretobe 不定式形式 Therebeingnobus wehadtowalkhome 由于沒(méi)有公交車 我們不得不步行回家 Thereisnodenyingthatthequalityofourenvironmenthasgonefrombadto worse WeexpecttheretobeapartytocelebratethecomingNewYear 四 如何使用其他的一些高級(jí)表達(dá)形式讓文章更精彩1 用such總結(jié)全文Suchisourlivelycity whichyouarewelcometovisitwheneveratyourconvenience 這就是我們這座充滿活力的城市 只要您方便 隨時(shí)歡迎來(lái)參觀 2 使用cannot toomuch表示強(qiáng)調(diào)Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch 我們?cè)僭趺磸?qiáng)調(diào)保護(hù)眼睛的重要性也不為過(guò) 3 使用比喻等修辭方法Asisknowntousall vocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage justlikebricksinabuilding 大家都知道 詞匯是語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)的重要組成部分 就像一座大樓的基石 4 使用not but 句型Somepeopledon tliketheirjobsnotbecausethey relazybutbecausetheirjobsaresmall 一些人不喜歡他們的工作不是因?yàn)樗麄儜?而是因?yàn)樗麄兊墓ぷ魈煨×?5 使用否定句Thelawisthelaw Nobodyhasanyexcusetobreakit 法律就是法律 任何人沒(méi)有任何借口違反法律 6 使用雙重否定Despitemanyobviousadvantagesofbicycle itisnotwithoutitsproblem 盡管自行車有許多明顯的優(yōu)點(diǎn) 它仍然存在一些問(wèn)題 Nowordcanexpressmywhole heartedthanksforyourtimelyhelp ItisnotahardshipbutapleasuretolearnEnglishwell Wecan temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmenttoomuch Onlyinthiswaycanwesuccessfullybuildaneconomizedsociety Hardlyhadhereachedthestationwhenthetrainleft NotonlycanIkeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamilythroughmycell butalsoalmostallinformationcanbegatheredontheInternet 4 Ididn ttakehisadvice soIfailedintheexam 虛擬語(yǔ)氣 5 BecauseIwasillthatday Ididn ttakepartinthesportsmeeting 虛擬語(yǔ)氣 6 Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) 7 Theydidn trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout 倒裝句 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 IfIhadtakenhisadvice Iwouldn thavefailedintheexam Iwasillthatday otherwiseIwouldhavetakenpartinthesportsmeeting Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students Notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizeth